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8! like it
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Posted 11/11/12 , edited 11/11/12
5/10

*edit*

ACK! I just realized I crti'd the wrong piece! D':

I don't know much about furrised but I would say to loosen up your sketching. Use long and loose lines instead of such tight lines. You'll begin to evolve faster and it'll give you more time for other things like detail and, in the future, coloring.

Like where it's going, though. keep it up! <3



And this? I was practicing with the different tools in sai underneath a very fast and not-so methodical sketch...fanart for a possible SPN fanfic.
And, yep. Hands per usual are an issue but BY GOD I'm practicing!


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Posted 11/14/12 , edited 11/18/12

Moeberry wrote:


8/10

I find the concept of your artwork quite interesting not to mention the coloring as well.
Though the lack of detail in the feathers and the blue lighting on surrounding area seems to be somewhat lacking,
Although I don't know if this was intended or not.


It's a pity that my latest artworks are M rated and it's obvious that I can't post it here,
so I'll put my latest E rated drawing instead.




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10/10

there's nothing bad I can say about it. I like your style :D





Moeberry wrote:


You might want to update your quote PervertedDanHib, since I updated me fairy drawing.
Anyway here's your score on your drawing!


7.5/10

The Coloring is neat, not to mention her facial expression and the background is very nice.
Though her chest anatomy is too close on her collar bone, the shadowing on her belly to
her nether region seems to be very odd.The knobs on the bookcase seems to be inconsistent.

My apologize if my critique is harsh.



It's not harsh at all. Actually some of what you said was told to me by other people too. That one was pretty much me learning to draw tummies better. Her boobs being too high is pretty much a result of over thinking. I as thinking that her lifting her shirt in that manner would result in her boobs being brought up, but I didn't really take into account how they'd change shape and more or less just moved them up :/

I'm always looking for people to point out flaws to me. It's the only way I'll get better, and had been how I've gotten better in the past.
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Posted 11/30/12

A drawing of Ichigo I did. I added the mask at the top to put my own twist on things. Rate Fairly Please!
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Posted 12/1/12
5/10
The skill is there, you just need to practice more to polish it up. Anyway you're still young so I'm sure you'll improve like crazy in the future :D
Good luck with your art.


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Amazing :O
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Posted 12/3/12

Poypoi wrote:

10/10
Amazing :O


9/10. i love it. it kinda gives a Shadow of the Colossus vibe. Not sure why, maybe the grand scale of the whole thing? Anyway, fantastic job.

k, don't be too harsh on how sketchy it is, I drew this as a warm-up to get used to my tablet again. I haven't really drawn anything in the past two weeks so I was feeling a bit rusty.
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Posted 12/5/12
8/10. I like sketchy art because it gives the artist identity. Once the line has been cleaned up into a thickness of a mechanical pencil, it becomes a single frame of animation and there are a lot of those. Perhaps when you do the clean up, try leaving the line thickness such as the collar bone area.
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Posted 12/9/12
Sketch of Castor from 07-Ghost. My first serious attempt at drawing someone.
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Posted 12/11/12
6/10

Not bad, a bit sloppy and could use some shading, but otherwise it's pretty good.

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Posted 12/13/12
6/10
Anatomy could be improved.
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Been ages since I update anything here.

Here's one. But not one of my newest.

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Posted 12/14/12
10/10 :)
Good work!
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Posted 12/14/12
9.5/10 I love both the idea and the execution of it ([s]and the subject matter seems fitting given your username/avatar[/s]). Took off half a point since there are a couple of places where the proportions/angles seem a little bit off.

Here is another sketch from 07-Ghost, this time of Kuroyuri. I know the left hand looks weird; I couldn't figure out how to fix it.
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Posted 12/15/12
5/10

Not too bad. I like the shading of the clothes and I love that you risked making a fairly complicated pose, but yeah, that hand is fubar'd. Hand's are a bitch though. This isn't related to hands or anything, but one recommendation I can give is you should't be afraid to shade darker.

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