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Posted 12/15/12
4/10
really bad! just giving it a try!XP
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Posted 12/16/12
6/10
Basic proportions looks nice, I suggest you try practicing something that's not a 3/4th pose it would be a bad habit if you get stuck with that style. *Bakuman reference*


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- i'd give myself maybe a 5/10
i suck but here my best so far, i had to take a picture of it with my iphone to upload this but here it is
- i would liek a rating and some tips if possible please, i draw pencil to paper thats how i roll lol.
-this image does have mistakes i wont name them prob cause i can see them more and i don't like how it turned out in some ways

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Posted 12/16/12 , edited 12/16/12
I don't have anything of my own to submit, but I can give you some pointers.

First thing I notice, because I'm a perv like that, is that her boobs are messed up. Despite how we've drawn boobs when we were kids, boobs are NOT spherical.

Here's a tutorial that really helped me out with that.
http://bardi3l.deviantart.com/art/Breasts-Tutorial-201656109?q=favby%3Aperverted-dan-hibiki%2F47617343&qo=9

Also, her torso is too box shaped. You need to remember that women have an hourglass shape. Plus her torso is too short for the size of her head. Anime style isn't necessarily 100% anatomically correct, but a basic understanding of proportions is pretty much essential. then you can adjust to your liking after. But proper proportions would put her torso at 2 1/2 to 3 times the height of her head. I usually do 2 1/2 heads since that leave more room for legs and it gives the character a bit of a younger look.

Here's another more generalized tutorial. It shows proper proportions then some anatomy tips for proper balance and range of motion.
http://majnouna.deviantart.com/art/Big-Guide-to-Drawing-the-Body-15014442?q=favby%3Aperverted-dan-hibiki%2F47617343&qo=16

One last thing, I think her eyes are too high up on her head. Though that might be more a problem with her hair not being high enough. I always draw a character as being bald first, then put the hair on. That way I know where the skull is at and I can make sure the hair has the proper volume.
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Posted 12/17/12

PervertedDanHibiki wrote:

I don't have anything of my own to submit, but I can give you some pointers.

First thing I notice, because I'm a perv like that, is that her boobs are messed up. Despite how we've drawn boobs when we were kids, boobs are NOT spherical.

Here's a tutorial that really helped me out with that.
http://bardi3l.deviantart.com/art/Breasts-Tutorial-201656109?q=favby%3Aperverted-dan-hibiki%2F47617343&qo=9

Also, her torso is too box shaped. You need to remember that women have an hourglass shape. Plus her torso is too short for the size of her head. Anime style isn't necessarily 100% anatomically correct, but a basic understanding of proportions is pretty much essential. then you can adjust to your liking after. But proper proportions would put her torso at 2 1/2 to 3 times the height of her head. I usually do 2 1/2 heads since that leave more room for legs and it gives the character a bit of a younger look.

Here's another more generalized tutorial. It shows proper proportions then some anatomy tips for proper balance and range of motion.
http://majnouna.deviantart.com/art/Big-Guide-to-Drawing-the-Body-15014442?q=favby%3Aperverted-dan-hibiki%2F47617343&qo=16

One last thing, I think her eyes are too high up on her head. Though that might be more a problem with her hair not being high enough. I always draw a character as being bald first, then put the hair on. That way I know where the skull is at and I can make sure the hair has the proper volume.


i have to agree with this 100%, u saw right through me and all my mistakes, thanks for the pointers they will help in my progress as a drawer and ill check out the two website you listed, i iddid start out with her as bald and added in the eyes and hair but now i see how i screwed up thanks man
-stoner out
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Posted 12/22/12
This is an Orochimaru fan Art I did last year, my drawing has improved since but I am still quite happy with this one
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Posted 12/22/12
8/10 Awesome job on the shading!

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Posted 12/28/12
9/10. The coloring and the highlights are very nice, but there are a couple issues in terms of the anatomy. Such as, the lack of the collar bone leading up to the shoulders. You put it at the same spot on both sides, and didn't let it carry up into the shoulder, with at least a bit of shading. Another thing is, the shading under the arm shows she has moderately sized breasts, but when you follow the shading down onto the dress she looks completely flat chested. She also looks like she has bucked teeth...Last issue I see, is her hair isn't free-flowing enough for your style. It'd look better if you shown more then just the think strands.

This otherwise is very beautiful! The flowers are stunning, and like I said, I love the coloring. I also really like her eyes! This is overall a very great piece!

I know I'm not much one to critizize so much but none of the issues are very big! ^__^

Posted 12/30/12


7/10 :^)
nice pose!
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Posted 12/30/12
8/10, I like the simplified style, could use some more details though

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Posted 12/30/12 , edited 12/30/12
DAMN! Seeing all the other art, I really got self concius, I don't know how to remove a post all together, so just ignore me, and rate the art above me... I really do sucked at drawing...
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Posted 12/30/12 , edited 1/2/13
7/10 -- I really like the color and details in it! Some of the proportions look a little off, though.

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Posted 1/3/13
Nice! 8/10



Heh, i'm not a very experienced artist but I tried to draw Kagamine Rin! ~Without any referances.
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Posted 1/5/13
Awesome job! 8/10



Here's mine, An old one I did of Itachi :)

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Posted 1/9/13 , edited 1/9/13
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