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Dude!!! This is excellent! 9/10 (because I want to see it when you're done coloring it!)
This is excellent work for just using a vector program (I'm going to guess... Adobe Illustrator?)
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The eyes, PERFECT proportion, and great looking hair too! I love the way that fang on her mouth kind of fades, and the boldness in the eyelashes looks really really good!
Okay here's 'nother of mine, not really as good, as I just stopped trying to do the hands (Drawing hands, why is it SO HARD??)
Sorry for the bad quality, I had to resort to taking a picture of it with a crappy digital camera.  |
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Gaah!! Another master piece! 9/10
I'm so jealous of your shading skills! Plus I wish I could draw torsos as well you! :D.
Btw. Da-daann.
Here's the finished product of Karin. I hope you like it! :-)
(My first time using the Photoshop Pen tool xD)
EDIT: Re-drew the mouth. Didn't like it lol.
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very nice :3 I like the colors, shadows are nicely done I'll give it an 8/10
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not bad, the proportions are a little wonky but do like that you put details like wrinkles and stuff in the clothes. that's onething i've always had trouble with.
6/10
V- shading is my favorite part. i love working on the details so i tend to fall shot when it comes to the bigger things like proportions and stuff. i was having reservations about the face though. it seems very flat :/ |
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6/10
The Head could definitely use more attention. Breasts could also be moved down a couple centimeters.
You seem to have your shading and highlights down to a science and applaud you for this. (I'm very jealous x_x)
Here is a redrawn colored version of my Tattered boy. Which certainly doesn't look very "tattered" since I've yet to figure out how I want to draw out his clothing and add additional scratches and scrape marks.
I hope you enjoy it. <3
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5/10
The eyes needs more emotions and the brush you use for highlight of the hair seems a little too.. hmm thick / big. Not too sure which word's better , but I can say it doesn't looks smooth and natural in a way.
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8/10
Very Nice gara! Exellent shading and the picture has a nice "flow" to it.
(Btw are those feathers? I could barely make them out with the gradient background you have)
Could definitely have more going on in that huge space you have there, but over-all it's a good piece of art.
Here's something I'm still working on, but I hope it will be satisfactory!  |
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I'm a realistic artist so i'm kind of not my thing to rate/comment on anime arts since i don't done them but I give it 9, it's empty
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Very nice, the upper lip looks thin. I like your style your line art is very clean.
I can't upload mine sorry! Everyone is looking great though |
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Selwhyn wrote:
Very nice, the upper lip looks thin. I like your style your line art is very clean.
I can't upload mine sorry! Everyone is looking great though
Aww, Please do! :-(
We need more artists here!!
As it is I feel like I'm double posting. -_-
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something else i just noticed with your coloring. the dark parts of her socks isn't shaded. but still 8/10
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Nice try and effort on the Bgm , but the perspective's a little off.
As for your character , try more foldings =]
6.5/10
And previously someone said they'd like to see me drawing girls. So here goes , but due to lack of time thanks to college assignments , I'll just upload a quick sketch of it. Gomen , no time for finish work.
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Gaara-sama wrote:
Nice try and effort on the Bgm , but the perspective's a little off.
As for your character , try more foldings =]
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so you think i should have a lower horizon line of the background?
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UnbridledChaos wrote:
Gaara-sama wrote:
Nice try and effort on the Bgm , but the perspective's a little off.
As for your character , try more foldings =]
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so you think i should have a lower horizon line of the background?
Let's not talk about the horizon line for now. Did you construct the perspective lines properly at first? Or this is just a rough idea? Cause in your case , it's a one point perspective here. Try look up for some perspective tutorials online and see the initial construction of it.
And btw , please don't forget to rate.
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Gaara-sama wrote:
UnbridledChaos wrote:
Gaara-sama wrote:
Nice try and effort on the Bgm , but the perspective's a little off.
As for your character , try more foldings =]
6.5/10
so you think i should have a lower horizon line of the background?
Let's not talk about the horizon line for now. Did you construct the perspective lines properly at first? Or this is just a rough idea? Cause in your case , it's a one point perspective here. Try look up for some perspective tutorials online and see the initial construction of it.
And btw , please don't forget to rate.
the thing is i did have a vanishing point, pretty much right behind her, but the thing is its all free hand so i don't have a single straight line.
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