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Posted 11/16/11

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Gaara-sama wrote:


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Nice try and effort on the Bgm , but the perspective's a little off.
As for your character , try more foldings =]

6.5/10




so you think i should have a lower horizon line of the background?


Let's not talk about the horizon line for now. Did you construct the perspective lines properly at first? Or this is just a rough idea? Cause in your case , it's a one point perspective here. Try look up for some perspective tutorials online and see the initial construction of it.

And btw , please don't forget to rate.



the thing is i did have a vanishing point, pretty much right behind her, but the thing is its all free hand so i don't have a single straight line.


And there you go. Which is why it doesn't looks right. Try looking up for some simple basic perspective construction first. The one point and two point perspective. Good luck.~

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Posted 11/16/11

Gaara-sama wrote:


UnbridledChaos wrote:


Gaara-sama wrote:


UnbridledChaos wrote:


Gaara-sama wrote:

Nice try and effort on the Bgm , but the perspective's a little off.
As for your character , try more foldings =]

6.5/10




so you think i should have a lower horizon line of the background?


Let's not talk about the horizon line for now. Did you construct the perspective lines properly at first? Or this is just a rough idea? Cause in your case , it's a one point perspective here. Try look up for some perspective tutorials online and see the initial construction of it.

And btw , please don't forget to rate.



the thing is i did have a vanishing point, pretty much right behind her, but the thing is its all free hand so i don't have a single straight line.


And there you go. Which is why it doesn't looks right. Try looking up for some simple basic perspective construction first. The one point and two point perspective. Good luck.~



well thank you for your input, i'm going to go back on toic now :D

i'd give it like a 7 i know you'd do a lot better once you actually get to sit down and draw it out nicely.

here's one that i drew a while back, I haven't put anything up here that i drew on paper i don't think so....
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Posted 11/18/11
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it's a cute style but it's lacking in a lot of areas.

this is NOT my best artwork, Ulquiorra's very disproportioned XD


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Posted 11/19/11
5/10

Proportions could be improved.

Here's something different for a change. I notice so far no one has upload any landscape stuffs. So I'll go with this one.

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Posted 11/21/11
7/10

I really like the clouds and are probably my favorite part of it. Everything looks nice, however the castle looks out of place.

Here's a sketch I did of Mayuri Shiina from Stein's Gate.
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Posted 11/27/11
hmmm 5. i admire that you can so simplistically but keep it anime looking but its not really my thing.
Posted 11/28/11 , edited 11/28/11
Your drawing improved. Your proportions has gotten better. I give it a 7 out of 10.

Somebody, rate and please tell me wtf is wrong with this darn picture aside from the lines (it was the scanner and my terrible coordination of keeping consistency).


Argh, damn it. I forgot to erase my pencil lines.
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Posted 11/28/11
Yaaaaaay more people posting in Fan Art section :D!!!!!

getting a 8/10 for that one for the crazy level of detail!

Finished this one 30min ago hope you all like :3
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Posted 11/28/11 , edited 11/28/11
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Wow that's really pretty! I'm not very good with profile pictures, myself
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Posted 12/4/11
not bad, my only complaing is that its a little hard to tell what she's laying on. 7/10

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Posted 12/12/11
very nice :3 love the colors, faces are just a bit off with shapes so I'd give it a 5/10


I loved the manga books on Maximum Ride and this is Iggy
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Posted 12/13/11
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Looks nice! Will it ever be colored?

I haven't posted anything in a while but here's an outline of something I'm working on. Happy Holidays!

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Posted 12/13/11
*sigh* I wish, but I'm not very good at coloring =_= but thanks :3
I really like it, 8/10 is wearing a shirt? maybe some wrinkles


the tablet wouldn't let me draw the top of the head so yeah just ignore that hahah
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Posted 12/13/11 , edited 12/13/11
i don't really understand but it looks sad and kinda creepy o.O 5 i guess.


my computer was busy rendering a video so i was forced to use paper and a real pencil.
it took an hour, maybe an hour and a half to draw.
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Posted 12/17/11
5/10
Watch out on proportions.
Shadings are rough too.

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