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You can write your stories here. This is just a one time thing. By one time thing, I mean don't write a series. If you want to write a series sign up in the other forum. But before you write your story, you must invite your buddies. I hope I can trust you.
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(I got the chills writing this story. I'm like scared out my skin that this is gonna happen to me...I'm gonna have nightmares....DX But I had to write it....The inspiration came to me after reading the heading...I'm a horror hater yet gravitated to want to read/watch it...This is mild horror [I think] take precaution as you read....Reviews are appreciated!!)


Mirror mirror on the wall,
Mirror mirror save us all.
It's been years since we've been locked,
It's been centuries since we ate.
I wonder who is going to be our next delicious meal.
One person eaten equals one person saved


"That is so creepy...." Yuki shivered. Fumio stood proudly after he had recited the chant. "I heard of it...It was said that if it was recited during a full moon at that old mansion in front of the mirror in the lobby, something would appear." Mikuni stated. Everyone stared at him, "What?" he asked. "How did you know that?" Takeshi asked. "It's the legend..." Mikuni shrugged. "Did you hear that once there was a group of kids that went and did the poem but only one came out? Seems like he claimed that he saw ghosts and the people that went in with him, they all got eaten and only he survived" Yuki said. Mikuni shrugged, "It could be bull, y'know?" Fumio grinned, "Wanna find out? There's a full moon in 2 days." Yuki looked at Fumio, "You crazy? There's no way I'm going." she shook her head. "Narumi is going." Fumio taunted. Yuki stiffened, “Fine, but only cuz Narumi is going.” Yuki huffed. Fumio smiled, “Okay, we have Yuki, Narumi, Takeshi, Mikuni and me. We need find one more person,” he announced. “How about that girl in 3-A…er… Rikuo? She claims she can see ghosts.” Mikuni suggested. “Sure.” Fumio shrugged. “Neh… Should we study about this?” Takeshi asked. “I guess.” Fumio shrugged.

After school, everyone gathered at Fumio’s house. “Okay, guys! Let’s get started!” Fumio said. “HAI!” everyone said, taking a book from the ground. Everyone started reading on the legend. “Hey, guys! Listen to this….” Mikuni said after a while. Everyone looked up from their books. Mikuni cleared his throat, “Well, apparently at the mansion….

There was some sort of accident in the lobby in 1892. The wife of the owner died from tripping down the stairs. After that incident, the owner claims that he could see her apparition. He moved out immediately. The second house owner moved in 10 months later. Apparently, the second owner was a witch and often casted spells in the mirror. It seems that the mirror absorbed such energies and soon became cursed. The witch was caught 2 years later and burned at stake. At the stake, she cried out, ‘Mirror mirror on the wall, mirror mirror will destroy us all. Years come, years go; I will take what enters the house and devour you all.’ Then she was burned. Since then, no one entered the house.

Yuki shivered, “That’s crazy!” Mikuni shrugged. “Hey…I found something too!” Takeshi said. “In the year 1899, two teenagers entered the house, in order to escape their parent’s scrutiny. But they never came out. And 3 years later, a group of bandits entered the house; only one came out alive, delirious and was sent to the asylum. He was heard chanting: Mirror mirror on the wall, mirror mirror save us all, it’s been years since we've been locked, it's been centuries since we ate. I wonder who is going to be our next delicious meal. One child eaten equals one child saved over and over again.Before he died, he pointed towards the ceiling and said, “She’s watching. She’s going to eat us all…She’ll never rest.” Takeshi ended. “This isn’t a good idea….” Rikuo said. “You afraid?” Fumio taunted. Rikuo didn’t reply and went back to her reading.

When night fell, everyone bid each other good bye and promised to meet each other in 2 days at Fumio’s house. Fumio smiled, “We’re going to break this mystery!” he said triumphantly before going to bed.

Come one, come all. Come join our merry making, come join out lovely feast. Just step through the mirror and you can have it all. Join us, you lonely soul and we’ll help you heal. We’ll be your friends; we’ll be your family! Once in, never out, you’ll have so much fun; you’ll never want to leave!

The day of the adventure came and everyone arrived at Fumio’s house with their stuff. “Okay guys, here’s what we’re going to do, we’re going to go in, look around and go to the mirror, recite the chant and see if anything happens.” Fumio said. Rikuo seemed uneasy but said nothing. “It’ll be quick and easy. There’s nothing at all! I bet everyone that went in is just lying about it.” Fumio said. Yuki clung on to Narumi’s arm and nodded slowly. “Alright! Let’s go!” Fumio said.

The group made their way to the mansion and entered the house. They all switched on their flashlights; they swept the lights around, looking at their surroundings. “There’s the mirror,” Takeshi said, pointing to the mirror at the top of the stairs. “Alright, let’s go.” Fumio said, leading the way. Rikuo followed behind everyone, walking slowly, observing the surrounding.
Once in front of the mirror, Fumio faced the group, “Ready?” he asked. Everyone swallowed and nodded. “1, 2, 3 go!” Fumio counted everyone in and everyone started the chant. Once done, they looked at the mirror, waiting for something to appear. “See? Told you. Nothing!” Fumio said after a few minutes, shrugging. Yuki swallowed before pointing to the mirror, “Fu-Fumio…l-look….” Yuki stuttered out, pale. Fumio turned his head to the mirror to come face to face with what looks like a carnival. “A carnival?” Narumi whispered.

“Come one, come all! Come join our merry carnival and have some fun!” a male voice boomed. The group jumped at the voice and looked around for the source. “Guys….Fumio, we need to go. This is too dangerous!” Rikuo warned. Takeshi was staring at the mirror and slowly began walking towards it with his hand out before him. “Takeshi!” Rikuo called but it was too late, Takeshi had walked through the mirror and was in the carnival. Yuki gasped in surprise then ran to join Takeshi on the other side when she saw how much fun Takeshi was having. “Yuki!” Narumi called, following Yuki. Mikuni, who couldn’t resist the temptation, ran after them. Fumio stared incredulously. “Fumio, we have to leave! It’s too dangerous!” Rikuo tugged at Fumio’s shirt. “What? You two don’t want to join?” the male asked. Rikuo swallowed, “Fumio! Let’s leave!” Rikuo tugged harder, more desperate. “Come, young man, ignore that lady over there, join your friends!” the male voice beckoned.

Fumio slowly walked towards the mirror, “Fumio!” Rikuo called once Fumio entered the mirror. The male laughed, “Little lady, why don’t you join us?” the male asked. “I’m not stupid! I know what you’re trying to do, witch!” Rikuo hissed. The male’s jolly face turned ugly and into a female face, “I’m not a witch!” it screeched, the image in mirror changed into a horrific scene of many faces, twisted in pain, screeching, “Help us! Let us out!!” Rikuo reeled back in horror as she saw how mutated each one looked. “Let her eat your soul and let me out!” one screamed. Rikuo swallowed, ‘Where’s everyone?’ she looked in the mirror for her companions.

“Are you looking for your friends?” a cold voice asked. Rikuo looked up to see a woman holding a crystal ball; in the crystal ball were where her friends were in the house. Rikuo scowled, “Give them back!” she yelled. The woman smiled, “That’s a bit no-no, darling, you see once in my domain, one cannot return.” She tutted. Rikuo growled at the woman. “But of course, in the chant, it did say, one person eaten equals one person saved. So come, go find your friends, but there will a an ultimate sacrifice.” The woman disappeared, the mirror showed the carnival once again. Rikuo looked around frantically, not seeing one of her companions.

Rikuo rushed through the mirror. “So you did decide to join us.” The man smiled, “Come, let me show you to a place you’ll love.” The man guided Rikuo towards tent. “NO!” Rikuo yelled and ran for it, looking desperately for her friends. “Narumi! Yuki!” she called. “Takeshi! Fumio! Mikuni!” she called out, passing one tent to another. She stopped, breathing hard, ‘That woman showed me where everyone was, but, I can’t find them…Wait…’ she thought, thinking back to the crystal ball, ’Everyone was in place with a mirror!’ Rikuo looked around and spotted the House of Mirrors.

She ran towards the House of Mirrors and entered it. She looked at the mirrors and spotted some movement in one of the images. She touched the image and walked through to another room. Rikuo was assaulted by a strong smell of blood, she gagged at the smell. “Narumi? Yuki?” Rikuo called out softly. “Fumio? Takeshi? Mikuni?” she called out another set of names when no one answered. She spotted a shadow near a table; she walked towards it, cautiously. When she discovered it was Takeshi, she sighed in relief, “Takeshi!” she touched his shoulder, Takeshi turned, he was missing his eyeballs and was crying tears of blood. “Why~ Rikuo? Why didn’t you save me earlier?” he wailed. Rikuo backed away slowly, and made a run for it. ‘I’m sorry, Takeshi.’ she thought, going back through the mirror.

Rikuo came out of the mirror and blindly ran through another mirror. She ended up in a bedroom, “Mikuni? Narumi?” she called out. When she heard a shuffle, she turned to the sound. There was sobbing. “Yuki?” she asked, slowly approaching the figure, crouched on the floor. She touched the figure’s shoulder, the figure turned, it was Narumi. “Narumi!” she said in relief, but to her horror, Narumi’s throat was cut and his voice box torn out. Rikuo’s eyes widened and ran for it. ‘Oh my god! Oh my god!’ she said, panicking. She ran through the mirror she came from and returned to the House of Mirrors. “Hurry~ Hurry~ Or your friends will die.” A shrill voice laughed. Rikuo was irritated and scared. She looked around the mirrors and chose one to run through.

Once again in a different room, she called out the names of her remaining companions. In that room, she came face to face to Mikuni, who wailed in anguish and in pain, “You! It’s all you fault! Look at me!” he screamed, he was missing limbs. Rikuo stared in horror then once again, ran for it, tears streaming down her face. “Run, run, run little lady, scurry and find your friends who will never return. Scamper around this twisted wonderland but never find a way out.” A voice taunted Rikuo as she ran through another mirror.

This time, she was in a closet; she looked around, “Fumio?” she called frantically. Receiving no answer, she called out, “Yuki?” She received a small whimper. “Yuki!” she said, approaching the sound. Rikuo screamed out in terror to see Yuki’s heart torn out and Yuki lying on the floor. She ran, even more scared than before. She ran through the mirror and quickly ran through another.

The room this time was a ballroom. “Fumio??” she called out. Searching for her companion, “FUMIO? YOU THERE?” she yelled. She saw a small shadow move. She walked cautiously to the shadow to notice it was Fumio. “Fumio,” she gently tapped Fumio’s shoulder. But Fumio quickly moved and pointed a shard of glass at Rikuo. “Fumio! It’s me! Rikuo!” Rikuo said, slowly approaching Fumio. Fumio discovered that it was Rikuo and dropped his weapon. He hugged Rikuo, crying, “I was so scared. There were bodies and…and…” he stuttered. Rikuo patted Fumio’s head, “I know…But we gotta leave now!” Rikuo said, tugging Fumio to his feet. She ran towards the mirror and found that they weren’t able to pass. “Crap!” she swore. “Time’s up~” a childish voice said. Rikuo turned to see a mob of people. “You had your turn, now let us devour you…” they said. Rikuo looked at them in fear. She took Fumio’s arm and ran towards the door of the ballroom.

Once outside the room, she ran blindly through the hallway. “Rikuo! Where we going??” Fumio cried out, trying to catch up with Rikuo’s pace. “Out! Out of this house and into the streets!” Rikuo yelled, searching for the lobby. She spotted a light down the hallway and realized it was their flashlights that they forgot to turn off. She ran towards the flashlights. Upon reaching the flashlights, she ran down the stairs and out the front door. “No~~ Our food! Our freedom!!” the people wailed in agony on losing Fumio and Rikuo.

In the streets, the two gasped for air. The sun was rising. “The…the others?” Fumio asked. “Dead…” Rikuo answered. “I should’ve listened to you and left then and there…But I…I didn’t listen! And now everyone’s gone!” Fumio cried. “Shh…” Rikuo hugged Fumio in order to calm him down.

Mirror mirror on the wall,
Mirror mirror save us all.
It's been years since we've been locked,
It's been centuries since we ate.
I wonder who is going to be our next delicious meal.
One person eaten equals one person saved
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I only read the end. I don't do good with scary stuff. I get scarred or scarred fr life (Don't judge me D:) Just the end, it was good. So I'm judging the whole story's great!! Sorry just in case I offended you by not reading the whole story.

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YuriStar12 wrote:




I only read the end. I don't do good with scary stuff. I get scarred or scarred fr life (Don't judge me D:) Just the end, it was good. So I'm judging the whole story's great!! Sorry just in case I offended you by not reading the whole story.



Nah, man. I even deleted the original off my computer and left the group I had previously posted in. I'm happy you read the end, at least you read a part of my story, da?
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YuriStar12 wrote:




I only read the end. I don't do good with scary stuff. I get scarred or scarred fr life (Don't judge me D:) Just the end, it was good. So I'm judging the whole story's great!! Sorry just in case I offended you by not reading the whole story.



Nah, man. I even deleted the original off my computer and left the group I had previously posted in. I'm happy you read the end, at least you read a part of my story, da?



Yeah..I guess...reading some is better than reading none.

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YuriStar12 wrote:


SensuallyYours wrote:


YuriStar12 wrote:




I only read the end. I don't do good with scary stuff. I get scarred or scarred fr life (Don't judge me D:) Just the end, it was good. So I'm judging the whole story's great!! Sorry just in case I offended you by not reading the whole story.



Nah, man. I even deleted the original off my computer and left the group I had previously posted in. I'm happy you read the end, at least you read a part of my story, da?



Yeah..I guess...reading some is better than reading none.



I'm going to PM you my first chapter for my fic, k?
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