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Posted 7/11/11 , edited 7/12/11
Katsumi woke up, finding herself in this unknown world.......where there hasn't been any signs of life yet, and wandered out in curiousity. Afterall, on Earth, it would have been hard to find a place so peaceful without any commotion. She wandered further and futher each day, not finding anything of the living, and finally realized that she was alone, but she was the first living thing to have came to this new world......as weeks passed, more and more known things on Earth became visable, such as the moon, some grass, the sun, and bugs. After even more time passed, she came to realize that she had a dream......and came to a conclusion that the stronger that you wish, the more things are visiable, this was probally the first discovery and history in this world.....

( 3 years later.......)

Katsumi sighed as she woke up the next usual morning. " I wonder if I really am the only kind in this world...."

( I just realiized how stupid I am.....sorry about that! Let's just say that when people come here for the first time, all you see is tiny patches of grass, only on some days the moon, occasionally the sun, and some bugs which are very rare....meaning that Katsumi's wishes still aren't strong enough.....hehehe sorry!!! )
Posted 7/12/11 , edited 7/12/11

(Hmm... So Katsumi has been the only one living there for three years? Must be lonely. I'm going to start off my character right from waking up in Unwritten.)
A piercing shriek of rage came from the southern end of the building. Minutes later, a loud ringing came from the hallway. The classroom got hotter and hotter. Flames could be seen on the outside through the windows. Everyone was in a desperate panic, except for Yuuki. Yuuki was watching everyone, curious why they were so afraid. She was fully aware that the building was on fire; but for some reason, her brain didn't trigger the feeling of fear from knowing that she was in a deadly situation with no way out. She watched the flames from outside grow, feeling almost amused by the fact her end was coming. She completely spaced out, in a peaceful trance. Soon, the flames broke into the classroom, and slowly engulfed everyone and everything. Yuuki watched as parts of her body burned, feeling numb to the pain. She closed her eyes, accepting this as the end of her.

Yuuki opened her eyes, slowly. She was surprised to find she no longer felt the heat of fire, and she wasn't in ashes. She wondered if it had only been a shockingly vivid dream(Yes, dream. Since she didn't actually feel afraid, I don't think she would refer to it as a nightmare.). She looked around. (While it had initially been a completely empty world, you wrote, quote, "more and more known things on Earth became visable, such as the moon, some grass, the sun, and bugs.") It appeared that she had fallen asleep(she's assuming it really was a dream) in a field of grass. She couldn't see a single thing for miles. She wondered how she had even gotten here. She had no memory of coming here before now. She thought of the possibility of this just being another dream. Deciding to just "go with the flow", she began walking north in search of buildings or other living things.
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(Yeah...must be lonely......glad I'm not really her! JK! Anyways....back to the story..)

Katsumi decided to go on a stroll, since she had nothing else to do and also since that she was really, really, curious to find out ASAP if she really was the only person in this world.

( Sorry about the moon, grass, and stuff.....really sorry...i lost my focus but I fixed it just now, hope that it will come to ur approval! Will fix it even more if I have to! Just tell me if something's bothering you in the roleplay! )
Posted 7/12/11 , edited 7/12/11
(Oh, it wasn't a problem. ^-^ I quoted that to confirm that those things would be visible to her, not to make a problem out of it! )
Yuuki felt like she had been walking for a long time, and yet, it seemed as if she had gone nowhere. She began to run, desperate to find someone to talk to or something besides the plains.
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Kamiru wandered the plains, looking for anyone else. "Am I the only one here....?" she said to herself.
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( Oh Okay I'm glad..... )

Katsumi was tired do she sat down to take a rest when out of nowhere she hears someone depreately run from something....or at least that's what she thought...surprised, she decided to call out just in case there really was someone.....besides her, in this world. " Hey! Is anyone there?" For a moment, she thought that nobody would reply and felt really stupid that she did that.
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"Who's there?" Kamiru asked. She continued walking through the fields and didn't notice the girl near her.
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Thinking that maybe her prediction was wrong she tried it again, this time louder. "HHHHEEEEEYYYYY ISS THERE SOMMEBBOODDY TTTHHHHHHHHERE?" yelled Katsumi hopeful.
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Yuuki thought she heard yelling. She stopped for a moment. Then she heard another yell, and it was clear to her it wasn't just her imagination. Starting to fear her loneliness, she yelled desperately, "I'm here!", and sprinted as fast as she could go towards the source of the call (towards Katsumi).
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Feeling moments of silence after the yell of a unknown person (probally due to Yuuki or Kamiru either having trouble locating Katsumi or something else), Katsumi yelled out again just in case anything happened. "Heyyyy over here!!!"
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"So I'm not hearing things..." Kamiru said to herself. "Yes, I'm here!" She started running towards the source of the sound. (Which is towards Katsumi)
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(wow that took forever for someone to reply... )
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(wow that took forever for someone to reply... )


(sorry, this group suddenly went blank in my mind )
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(it's okay.... )
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Lily was sitting in her hospital bed.She could open her eyes only half open to see around her.She saw a nurse dressed in white with a clipboard in her hands.She quickly saw that Lily had opened her eyes and scrawled notes onto her clipboard quickly.Lily felt very weak,and did not remember anything that had happened before she woke up one day in this bed.She tried to sit up but could not find the strength to do it.So instead she tried to move her arm.It was hard work but she managed.Moving her hand towards the glass of water beside her the nurse stopped writing and realized she wished to drink water."Here you go Miss Evans."She caught the glass of water before Lily could even react and put it to her mouth.Lily drank tiny gulps of water and felt a bit better.She nodded."Thank you.."She said with a small smile.The nurse smiled back and began to test her."How do you feel?Can you move your legs?How about sitting up a little?"It went on until Lily was tired from moving her weak body so much and she laid back down on the bed in her white hospital gown."I would like to rest..."She said to the nurse.She quickly nodded,scribbling stuff onto her clipboard."Alright then Miss Evans.You rest there while I show these results to the doctor."She left the room and quietly closed the door behind her.Lily took a deep shaky breath and tried to go to sleep.She rested and dreamed.Dreamed of seeing her mother,father,and grandmother again and being together with them as the happy family they never got to be...Next thing Lily knew she felt a slight pain in the chest that would not let her breath.It felt like she was being pinched by with every breath she took.She could hear the hospital operation system beeping like crazy,and then she felt so weak.Weaker than she was after the incident.She started to die,slowly,painlessness taking over her.She felt like her body was going numb,and she was dying.Then,her heart stopped and...She died.


Lily opened her eyes quickly and found herself in a blank place.A place where she felt completely alone.She looked around,but saw nothing.Her first thought was "didn't I die?"...Turning her head around she saw a few tiny pieces of grass.The thing she did was follow the grass.
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