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Posted 8/9/11


Creativity -36 out of 36
Neatness - 14out 14
Followed Instructions - 9 out of 9
Style - 18 out of 21
Quality- 19 out of 20
Total = 96 / 100 = 96% +A

I love the coloring of it , i feel its a little too dark maybe lighten that up a little bit &
the text isn't all that visible that's all i have to say
All in all great job~
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Assignment 2- I went over board on the b anner xDDD
Posted 8/9/11 , edited 8/9/11

P R O F I L E ::
Creativity - 26 out of 36
Neatness - 9 out 14
Followed Instructions - 9 out of 9
Style - 16 out of 21
Quality- 20 out of 20
Total = 80/100 = 80% = B

TIPS ::
-When using Scan lines set the Mode to something other than Normal to give it less messy look
-use brightness and contrast or Curves to make the picture brighter
-Try to keep the theme & the text matching at all times if you want it bright and pretty make the text that way
-I suggest using a texture like ::
[set it as multiply ,darken only,Overlay, burn,Grain merge and mess with the opacity of it ]

keep up the good work ~

B A N N E R ::
Creativity - 30 out of 36
Neatness - 10 out 14
Followed Instructions - 9 out of 9
Style - 19 out of 21
Quality- 19 out of 20
Total = 87/100 = +B

-When using pixels use a soft brush to make it blend a little more
-use the texture above to get the text to blend a tiny more
keep up the good work ~

TOTAL OF ALL WORK 167/200


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Like this?
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Yeah! :3 see how it kinda blends everything together?

Posted 8/10/11


Creativity - 26 out of 36
Neatness -8 out of 14
Followed Instructions -9 out of 9
Style - 15 out of 21
Quality- 18 out of 20
Total = 76 / 100 = 76% = +C

Text ~ the text doesn't quite match,try using a gradient or pattern or outlining the text with the same color as the outside.
As far as your copyright heres tip :: keep your copyright near your text or the characters mid-body area,so people can't cut it off :3

background ~ It doesn't quite match heres tip that i like to do put a pattern as the background and put textures over it and set the mode to different settings and get a unique design it also makes the girl and the text blend.

Overall ~ overall i think it needs little more coloring birghtness, to match the background

good job~ :3 keep up the good work!


PS. : : . Sorry i hate it when i do that....i'll get one notification that someone quoted me and I'll go off and do something else~ DX but anyways i promise it wont happen again...
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Posted 8/10/11
heres my 2nd assignment
Posted 8/11/11



Username :: iRawh
Called :: Miki-Chan / Mikeira-Chan
Program :: Photoshop CS5
Did you Read the Rules :: Pocky Monster . :3
Examples ::
Posted 8/11/11


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Welcome to maii classroom , your gfx are wonderful, fantastic ,beautiful, i really have no idea why your in this class your so muc better then i am.. Anyways assignments are post please take our time i will be goin on semi hiatus for a couple of weeks and hopefulyl i'll be able to grade them over the weekend!

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Sorry I had an art block on Assignment 2. Sorry if it's not really... Love? o.O



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Username :: MissEverlasting
Called :: Kye
Program :: Photoshop CS5
Did you Read the Rules :: Pocky Monster
Examples :: http://www.crunchyroll.com/user/MissEverlasting/pages/Photoshop-Works
Posted 8/15/11


A c c e p t e d ::
Remember i can only give you tips and resources
the assignments are up do your best &&
also im on semi-hiatus for a couple of weeks or so...

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Assignment 1:

Assignment 3:
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Username :: [ do not link your self!] COLLETEREGAL
Called :: [ nickname/name] JING
Program :: [ GIMP & Photoshop ONLY] GIMP
Did you Read the Rules :: [ i suggest you look] POCKY MONSTER
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