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Posted 1/17/08
Hopes at times...

Life is a path we'll all have to walk
No matter what you do

Tomorrow never ends, Yesterday will always remain
My crying tears don't know when to dry up

What i've created is my future, all by myself
Would've been great if my failure to you were mistakes

Hopes at times...who i am
Hopes in reality...remember?
Hopes to have...feelings

To care for a cure, i would rather "Try" to survive this life
"Cry" If i cant face the day anymore
"Lie" for you to understand me

Just like you that day
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Posted 1/17/08
I want to be...


I probably had cried
I can't get over it
why me?

picking up the cold cat
made tears come
cry me

I want to be free
I want to be recognized for once
I want to be thirteen forever

Alright? Okay?

Looking back tonight
The past, I couldn't understand
That I never escape from

I want to be...
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Posted 1/17/08
Fantasy world

I'm tired of gaining and losing
love in life
gaining and losing could both
be something pecious

So I'm returning to my
Fantasy-world where i have
no regrets just pride
to the point where i can hate and love

Ignoring the adults sayings thinking
"i dont want to grow up like you"
of course, not after seeing what you
have done

Im a child who have just yet
begun life, a bird who will fly to survive
will i grow up like you if i had listen?
even when my heart runs a mile away

Its not as if you could draw a picture
over and over again
but its me who is living my
Fantasy-World over again
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Posted 1/17/08
Winding Sky

As the wind blew across the sky
I impateintly waited for a cry
Once its gone ill gain another

Simply open my arms and said goodbye

My winding sky, my winding sky
Finding a room that would let my era of wind come in
Looking up as the leaves stretches across my head waving good bye, my winding sky

I think i can pick up my head now, my lonely cloud
I'll slowly play our song
On top of this hill my tears finally came
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Posted 1/17/08
Need you


Wanting my past
to remain as my future
For lies to be the turth
and darkness to be light

What's your reason in life?

Skipping chapters in a book
so it will end faster
Thats why i repeat every series

Why can't we just live freely?

If your face could be form under
the night sky
If my tears could be my smile
Then when I look at the sunset
my tears won't be so dry

I know every thing is going to change
Thats why i had love you


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Posted 2/8/08
You know?


I'm loving this feeling
Still feeling the future
within the deep wound of my heart

I feel as if tears are being left
thought its only echoing from inside
I wish I was stronger but
I have a weak soul

I'm sure I've hurted people
the feeling from their side
is hurting me even more
I know I'm weak
I can't even hold myself

I feel as if reality is a lie
though I knew i can't accept anything
I want to be looked upon
but I'm weak, right?

Surely everyone is living for just one thing
No one can see what they've created
Believe it, I've open a path

I'm sure I've hurted everyone
this feeling that I destroyed
is hurting me more than life
I wanna make sure with my eyes, I'm not that nice
You know?
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Hm.. I think you're thinking too much about life lol

"I want to be free
I want to be recognized for once
I want to be thirteen forever"

I'm not quite sure what's going on there. So were you free and famous at 13? I'm seeing those first 2 sentences as I Don't want to be what I am now - caged and not acknowledge, and I don't want to be 13, I want to grow up. The last line was a total contradiction in that sense. Bah.. so confused now sorry lol
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Hm.. I think you're thinking too much about life lol

"I want to be free
I want to be recognized for once
I want to be thirteen forever"

I'm not quite sure what's going on there. So were you free and famous at 13? I'm seeing those first 2 sentences as I Don't want to be what I am now - caged and not acknowledge, and I don't want to be 13, I want to grow up. The last line was a total contradiction in that sense. Bah.. so confused now sorry lol



its not a cage...um something like...im wanting to be something more than what i am
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Posted 2/23/08
They all sound like lyrics of songs than poems to me. =D

Still.. I must say you do have the talent to write freestyle poetry. And apart from a few typos and grammatical flaws, they're all really nice. Do keep it up.. and share more with us.
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SARON-That boy's life


The years have passed
From beyond the trees to the sky
The wind whispered, so long

Have your dream come true?
The time it takes is to good
But dreams are made to be reality

Oh yeah, this song that
showed me that boy's life
The seasons he crossed by quickly
Oh yeah, this melody i
want to share with you, baby

It will soon fly away with the wind

Whats coming your way?
paddling for your own good
But through our eyes only lies
the future

I vowed by the side of the wall

Oh yeah, this beat that
taught me that boy's life
He crossed by without giving up
Oh yeah, this rhythm that
disappear within my wounded heart

It will soon lie in the deeps of tears

I don't mind being a sly person
but I've vowed to prove my dream

oh yeah, this repeated
feeling about that boy's life
I'll too cross the seasons without giving up
oh yeah, the melody I want to share with you

Will soon lie in that boy's life~
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Posted 3/1/08
by the way they are my songs~~~
^^ thanks
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Posted 3/7/08
wow tats soo cool!!i tried to make a poem once but it end up in the trash can!hahaxD
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Posted 3/26/08
Songs and poems, that's what they are~ Keep posting~ Though some are confusing, others are beautiful~I look forward to reading more~!
Keep posting to this thread onegai =3
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Posted 4/5/08
SARON-Between


You say you're aiming for the past
life is just not easy to deal with
when you gather nothing

You say you're tears are for the past
reality is just made that way
when you limit everything
what about the future? oh~
Let me tell you!

You can cry for miles, but
thats not gonna help
You can try to smile, but
they know you can't live on
Give it up, thats the past...
now the future

The day you cry, trying to hold on
hurting anyone, no matter who
Now about the future oh
I'll just tell you

You can look for better days
but thats the future
Like an unread book
a new page will be turn
Keep it up, live the past...
now the future

Come on, the future will soon
become the past
Come on, we live between the future
and the past

Bacause~

Life is a mystery
Living with the darkness
Life is a mystery
Living with the light
Live your life, tomorrow
may not be here

Posted 4/5/08
even if its a preview i love it
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