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He stays still, a bottle is in his hand, it looks like some healing essence.

He sticks his claws into your soul, its essence leaking on his fingers. He pulls it out and looks at it, biting into it. She is suddenly in a dark room with him. He smiles, she was glowing. He took another bite and she felt an extreme pain.


She noticed the bottle in his hand and wondered what it was exactly.

Ruby screamed when he stuck his claws into her. She opened her eyes, the whole place so dark she can't see nothing. She suddenly feels an extreme pain. Ruby fell to her knees, hugging her stomach.


She couldn't see him eating her soul, he was deep insideher contiousness, he liked it, her on her knees before him. 'Beg, child. If you wish to live…'

His hand uncurls, the healing potion rolling out, he stopped breathing.


"get out of my body ! no.! i wont beg !" she screamed in pain again, it was hard to breathe.

Sapph picks the bottle up and notices it as a healing potion. She pops open the bottle cap and feeds it to him.


He opens his eyes, seeing her and trying to back up. He sees that shes just a human. 'W-What?' His wound was healed, but he still needed care.
Phantom shrugs. 'More soul for me… you cant stop me now… you can't hurt me here.' He bites half of her soul, causing her to scream in pain and crumple at his feet.
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LightsAndSpirals wrote:


Kuromicat wrote:


LightsAndSpirals wrote:


Kuromicat wrote:

He stays still, a bottle is in his hand, it looks like some healing essence.

He sticks his claws into your soul, its essence leaking on his fingers. He pulls it out and looks at it, biting into it. She is suddenly in a dark room with him. He smiles, she was glowing. He took another bite and she felt an extreme pain.


She noticed the bottle in his hand and wondered what it was exactly.

Ruby screamed when he stuck his claws into her. She opened her eyes, the whole place so dark she can't see nothing. She suddenly feels an extreme pain. Ruby fell to her knees, hugging her stomach.


She couldn't see him eating her soul, he was deep insideher contiousness, he liked it, her on her knees before him. 'Beg, child. If you wish to live…'

His hand uncurls, the healing potion rolling out, he stopped breathing.


"get out of my body ! no.! i wont beg !" she screamed in pain again, it was hard to breathe.

Sapph picks the bottle up and notices it as a healing potion. She pops open the bottle cap and feeds it to him.


He opens his eyes, seeing her and trying to back up. He sees that shes just a human. 'W-What?' His wound was healed, but he still needed care.
Phantom shrugs. 'More soul for me… you cant stop me now… you can't hurt me here.' He bites half of her soul, causing her to scream in pain and crumple at his feet.


She looked at him and blinked, not saying anything.

Ruby screamed and fell to the ground. "please stop !.." she uttered.
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Karin walks around and walked into the maze.


A Soul floats up to her. 'Hello' The voice ecos a little bit.


Karin stops and looks behind her. "Hello."

The spirit takes form, its a boy. 'Who are you?'
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He smiles. 'More… only one bite left… What happens if i let you live?'

He gets up slowly, putting his hands in front of him, displaying hes not a threat. He touches your hand, then pulls his hand back.
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He smiles. 'More… only one bite left… What happens if i let you live?'

He gets up slowly, putting his hands in front of him, displaying hes not a threat. He touches your hand, then pulls his hand back.


Sapph just looked at him. "h-hai."

She tried to get up but was too weak to move. "you won't want to just eat me and waste it. Maybie I could be sone other use to you ?"
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He smiles. 'More… only one bite left… What happens if i let you live?'

He gets up slowly, putting his hands in front of him, displaying hes not a threat. He touches your hand, then pulls his hand back.


Sapph just looked at him. "h-hai."

She tried to get up but was too weak to move. "you won't want to just eat me and waste it. Maybie I could be sone other use to you ?"


He gulped. 'H-Hello… Who are you?'
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He smiles. 'More… only one bite left… What happens if i let you live?'

He gets up slowly, putting his hands in front of him, displaying hes not a threat. He touches your hand, then pulls his hand back.


Sapph just looked at him. "h-hai."

She tried to get up but was too weak to move. "you won't want to just eat me and waste it. Maybie I could be sone other use to you ?"


He gulped. 'H-Hello… Who are you?'


"i-i.. im Sapph.." she looked at him, cautiously. He was wounded but still, he was a suol.
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Kuromicat wrote:


LightsAndSpirals wrote:


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He smiles. 'More… only one bite left… What happens if i let you live?'

He gets up slowly, putting his hands in front of him, displaying hes not a threat. He touches your hand, then pulls his hand back.


Sapph just looked at him. "h-hai."

She tried to get up but was too weak to move. "you won't want to just eat me and waste it. Maybie I could be sone other use to you ?"


He gulped. 'H-Hello… Who are you?'


"i-i.. im Sapph.." she looked at him, cautiously. He was wounded but still, he was a suol.


He shivers. Her soul looked ripe, but he looked up at her face. 'My name is S-Sixxi…'

He thinks. 'What will you do for me?'
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Kuromicat wrote:

He smiles. 'More… only one bite left… What happens if i let you live?'

He gets up slowly, putting his hands in front of him, displaying hes not a threat. He touches your hand, then pulls his hand back.


Sapph just looked at him. "h-hai."

She tried to get up but was too weak to move. "you won't want to just eat me and waste it. Maybie I could be sone other use to you ?"


He gulped. 'H-Hello… Who are you?'


"i-i.. im Sapph.." she looked at him, cautiously. He was wounded but still, he was a suol.


He shivers. Her soul looked ripe, but he looked up at her face. 'My name is S-Sixxi…'

He thinks. 'What will you do for me?'


She felt uncomfortable. It would only be a matter of time until he decided ot attack her and go for her soul. "w-well.. it was nice meeting you.. i should get going.." she said and started to walk away.

"a-anything you suggest..? lure other people in here..?" she said weakly.
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Sixxi gulps. 'O-Oh…' He touches his bleeding wound and sits down. He was all out of healing essence.

He smiles. 'Luring is fun… part of the hunt. What can you do for me?'
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Sixxi gulps. 'O-Oh…' He touches his bleeding wound and sits down. He was all out of healing essence.

He smiles. 'Luring is fun… part of the hunt. What can you do for me?'


Sapph walks into the maze, not knowing exactly which way she was heading.

"anything you suggest. im willing to be your servent, as long as you dont eat my soul."
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Sixxi gulps. 'O-Oh…' He touches his bleeding wound and sits down. He was all out of healing essence.

He smiles. 'Luring is fun… part of the hunt. What can you do for me?'


Sapph walks into the maze, not knowing exactly which way she was heading.

"anything you suggest. im willing to be your servent, as long as you dont eat my soul."


A Suol suddenly grabs her soul, biting half of it, almost shattering it. Sixxi smells a soul and gets up, he would need some if he wanted to heal faster. The guy smiled in the uncontious realm, before dissolving as Sixxi grabbed the soul. He diddnt see the body, so he wasnt sure who it was.

He smiles and puts it back. She regains contiousnes but is weak. He picks her up and carries her to a tree.
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Sixxi gulps. 'O-Oh…' He touches his bleeding wound and sits down. He was all out of healing essence.

He smiles. 'Luring is fun… part of the hunt. What can you do for me?'


Sapph walks into the maze, not knowing exactly which way she was heading.

"anything you suggest. im willing to be your servent, as long as you dont eat my soul."


A Suol suddenly grabs her soul, biting half of it, almost shattering it. Sixxi smells a soul and gets up, he would need some if he wanted to heal faster. The guy smiled in the uncontious realm, before dissolving as Sixxi grabbed the soul. He diddnt see the body, so he wasnt sure who it was.

He smiles and puts it back. She regains contiousnes but is weak. He picks her up and carries her to a tree.


sapphy screamed and her necklace repeled them off. It paralyzed them for a few minutes, giving Sapph just enough time to run.

The pain has gone away but she felt weak and dizzy. She looked at him and notices she is up in a tree.
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Kuromicat wrote:


LightsAndSpirals wrote:


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Sixxi gulps. 'O-Oh…' He touches his bleeding wound and sits down. He was all out of healing essence.

He smiles. 'Luring is fun… part of the hunt. What can you do for me?'


Sapph walks into the maze, not knowing exactly which way she was heading.

"anything you suggest. im willing to be your servent, as long as you dont eat my soul."


A Suol suddenly grabs her soul, biting half of it, almost shattering it. Sixxi smells a soul and gets up, he would need some if he wanted to heal faster. The guy smiled in the uncontious realm, before dissolving as Sixxi grabbed the soul. He diddnt see the body, so he wasnt sure who it was.

He smiles and puts it back. She regains contiousnes but is weak. He picks her up and carries her to a tree.


sapphy screamed and her necklace repeled them off. It paralyzed them for a few minutes, giving Sapph just enough time to run.

The pain has gone away but she felt weak and dizzy. She looked at him and notices she is up in a tree.


(wait when did the necklace repel them? Cuz if it was before he grabbed the soul she would only repel the guy and if not the soul wouldnt have entered her again)

He sighs, taking his spirit form. he was a small blue ball, inside a blue fire. The 'tail' of the fire curled around the 'body', and appeared to be asleep.
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Kuromicat wrote:


LightsAndSpirals wrote:


Kuromicat wrote:


LightsAndSpirals wrote:


Kuromicat wrote:

Sixxi gulps. 'O-Oh…' He touches his bleeding wound and sits down. He was all out of healing essence.

He smiles. 'Luring is fun… part of the hunt. What can you do for me?'


Sapph walks into the maze, not knowing exactly which way she was heading.

"anything you suggest. im willing to be your servent, as long as you dont eat my soul."


A Suol suddenly grabs her soul, biting half of it, almost shattering it. Sixxi smells a soul and gets up, he would need some if he wanted to heal faster. The guy smiled in the uncontious realm, before dissolving as Sixxi grabbed the soul. He diddnt see the body, so he wasnt sure who it was.

He smiles and puts it back. She regains contiousnes but is weak. He picks her up and carries her to a tree.


sapphy screamed and her necklace repeled them off. It paralyzed them for a few minutes, giving Sapph just enough time to run.

The pain has gone away but she felt weak and dizzy. She looked at him and notices she is up in a tree.


(wait when did the necklace repel them? Cuz if it was before he grabbed the soul she would only repel the guy and if not the soul wouldnt have entered her again)

He sighs, taking his spirit form. he was a small blue ball, inside a blue fire. The 'tail' of the fire curled around the 'body', and appeared to be asleep.


{ oh . i didnt now they werent in human form the necklace only repels living bodies. it cant replel souls. }

Ruby looks at the small blue ball. She reaches out to touch it.
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