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BellaSwanCullen wrote:


TakafumiSakagami wrote:

Wooh! Free writing. I may go over the top a little
Would a short snippet be better than pages of text?

UnIcOrNs-N-gLiTtEr wrote:

writting report wud be lejet

Would you happen to be a teenager?
Sorry, It's just you like to use slang.
I presume that was meant to be leet and in another post you said art was beast, definitely how teenagers talk.



okay cool your the first 8th grader to finish the homework

So what do we do with it, do we just post it here?

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TakafumiSakagami wrote:


BellaSwanCullen wrote:


TakafumiSakagami wrote:

Wooh! Free writing. I may go over the top a little
Would a short snippet be better than pages of text?

UnIcOrNs-N-gLiTtEr wrote:

writting report wud be lejet

Would you happen to be a teenager?
Sorry, It's just you like to use slang.
I presume that was meant to be leet and in another post you said art was beast, definitely how teenagers talk.



okay cool your the first 8th grader to finish the homework

So what do we do with it, do we just post it here?



yes you do
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This is just a little snippet of a side project I am doing.

*smash*
Woman: Why would you do this to me?
How many times have I lived through this scene now?
Woman: Do you know how I feel?
Always acting like she gets the worst of it
Woman: Answer me!
This woman, I hate her.
Woman: FINE THEN! GET OUT OF THIS HOUSE!
“you finally shut up, i’ll be going then”
I wave farewell to my father who is watching
Woman: IS THAT ANY WAY TO TALK TO YOUR MOTHER!?
I turn my back on the Woman I hate so much, and make my leave
“You must be mistaken, I don’t have a mother”
*Slam*
I’m glad to be out of there
“Well, I guess I’ll be sleeping in the park tonight”
The same thing every day…
*Honk*
A car swerves past me as I cross the road.
All every day occurrences, what I’d give for a change of scenery.
I turn off the pavement and begin to walk along a path, the frozen dirt making a crunching sound every step I take.
Anyone who wasn’t looking would miss this path, it’s covered in branches from the surrounding woods.
That’s why I like it, nobody comes here. The old abandoned park.
At least, no one had before today.
About 10 minutes down the path there was something that was never there before.
Pale skin, long flowing silver hair, beautiful aqua eyes and wearing a long white nightgown...
Layed still on the cold, frozen dirt path was the figure of a girl.
“hey, are you okay?”
I crouch down beside the girl and gently touch her arm.
“Still warm, she’s alive”
But what should I do? I can’t just leave her here
Well, I guess I can wait for her to wake up, not like I have anything to do
I pick her up, trying not to wake her.
She’s light, too light for a human, and her perfume is almost hypnotizing, but I manage to carry her to the nearby bench before I fall into a deep slumber.
“No luxurious bench for me tonight…”



“My back hurts…”
The next morning I wake up on the frozen grass
“Still dark?”
Ignoring the pain in my back I stand up and stretch.
My parents should still be asleep.
Then I remember…
“She hasn’t woken up yet”
I could probably go and get something to eat before she wakes up.
Trying to be quick I go home and take enough money to buy food for the day.
“They need to start locking the door at night”
I leave the house and head back to the abandoned park buying 2 bowls of Miso soup on the way.
I sit down on the edge of the bench beside the sleeping girl, and put one of the bowls down.
“I hope she likes Miso soup”
Girl: Miso...soup?
“You awake?
Girl: Huh?
It looks like the aroma has woken her up”
“Here, I got you a bowl”
I pass her the Miso soup and start to eat mine.
“nothing like a nice warm bowl of Miso on a cold Winters morning”
And we eat in silence.

“Wow, that was fast”
She finishes eating surprisingly quickly.
Girl: I haven’t eaten like this for a while
“So was that why you passed out last night?”
Girl: I guess so…
I finish my Miso soup and the girl changes the topic
Girl: So where did you sleep if you found me here last night?
“The grass”
Girl: Oh, I’m sorry
“Don’t be, if anyone is to blame it’s my family”
Girl: Your family, did you get in a fight?
“This town is full of bad memories, I don’t like to talk about them”
Girl: I understand, everyone has their problems
It goes back to being quiet. I can’t help but notice that the girl seems to be staring into nothingness, maybe she is just daydreaming.
“Oh, won’t your parents be worried if you don’t go home?”
Girl:I don’t really want to go back
“huh?”
Could she be like me? Is she having problems?
No, I shouldn’t be prying into other people’s lives.
Girl: Hey…
“yeah?”
Girl: Can I ask you something?
“sure”
Girl: You said this town is full of bad memories, right?
“I did”
She begins to look worried
Girl: Then…
The girl looks up at me, her eyes locked onto mine.
Girl: Let’s run away...
Girl: just the two of us!
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TakafumiSakagami wrote:

This is just a little snippet of a side project I am doing.

*smash*
Woman: Why would you do this to me?
How many times have I lived through this scene now?
Woman: Do you know how I feel?
Always acting like she gets the worst of it
Woman: Answer me!
This woman, I hate her.
Woman: FINE THEN! GET OUT OF THIS HOUSE!
“you finally shut up, i’ll be going then”
I wave farewell to my father who is watching
Woman: IS THAT ANY WAY TO TALK TO YOUR MOTHER!?
I turn my back on the Woman I hate so much, and make my leave
“You must be mistaken, I don’t have a mother”
*Slam*
I’m glad to be out of there
“Well, I guess I’ll be sleeping in the park tonight”
The same thing every day…
*Honk*
A car swerves past me as I cross the road.
All every day occurrences, what I’d give for a change of scenery.
I turn off the pavement and begin to walk along a path, the frozen dirt making a crunching sound every step I take.
Anyone who wasn’t looking would miss this path, it’s covered in branches from the surrounding woods.
That’s why I like it, nobody comes here. The old abandoned park.
At least, no one had before today.
About 10 minutes down the path there was something that was never there before.
Pale skin, long flowing silver hair, beautiful aqua eyes and wearing a long white nightgown...
Layed still on the cold, frozen dirt path was the figure of a girl.
“hey, are you okay?”
I crouch down beside the girl and gently touch her arm.
“Still warm, she’s alive”
But what should I do? I can’t just leave her here
Well, I guess I can wait for her to wake up, not like I have anything to do
I pick her up, trying not to wake her.
She’s light, too light for a human, and her perfume is almost hypnotizing, but I manage to carry her to the nearby bench before I fall into a deep slumber.
“No luxurious bench for me tonight…”



“My back hurts…”
The next morning I wake up on the frozen grass
“Still dark?”
Ignoring the pain in my back I stand up and stretch.
My parents should still be asleep.
Then I remember…
“She hasn’t woken up yet”
I could probably go and get something to eat before she wakes up.
Trying to be quick I go home and take enough money to buy food for the day.
“They need to start locking the door at night”
I leave the house and head back to the abandoned park buying 2 bowls of Miso soup on the way.
I sit down on the edge of the bench beside the sleeping girl, and put one of the bowls down.
“I hope she likes Miso soup”
Girl: Miso...soup?
“You awake?
Girl: Huh?
It looks like the aroma has woken her up”
“Here, I got you a bowl”
I pass her the Miso soup and start to eat mine.
“nothing like a nice warm bowl of Miso on a cold Winters morning”
And we eat in silence.

“Wow, that was fast”
She finishes eating surprisingly quickly.
Girl: I haven’t eaten like this for a while
“So was that why you passed out last night?”
Girl: I guess so…
I finish my Miso soup and the girl changes the topic
Girl: So where did you sleep if you found me here last night?
“The grass”
Girl: Oh, I’m sorry
“Don’t be, if anyone is to blame it’s my family”
Girl: Your family, did you get in a fight?
“This town is full of bad memories, I don’t like to talk about them”
Girl: I understand, everyone has their problems
It goes back to being quiet. I can’t help but notice that the girl seems to be staring into nothingness, maybe she is just daydreaming.
“Oh, won’t your parents be worried if you don’t go home?”
Girl:I don’t really want to go back
“huh?”
Could she be like me? Is she having problems?
No, I shouldn’t be prying into other people’s lives.
Girl: Hey…
“yeah?”
Girl: Can I ask you something?
“sure”
Girl: You said this town is full of bad memories, right?
“I did”
She begins to look worried
Girl: Then…
The girl looks up at me, her eyes locked onto mine.
Girl: Let’s run away...
Girl: just the two of us!


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moderatorsz mess up
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moderatorsz mess up


why ???
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