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I was bored so I starting writing this story...I'm posting it because I am also bored. If you want to read the prolouge go ahead..but I probably won't continue or keep it up for long...enjoy this suckish work It's called White Blood by the way...I was going to make an RP out of it but I got bored...

Her mother screamed, calling out her name over and over again. Eira covered her eyes to block out the noise, as much as she wanted to help her mother she couldn't risk being seen.

"Eira help me! Eira!" Her mothers hand came into view, mom's beautiful porcelain like skin was covered in that horrible red. She seemed to be reaching out for Eira, was she trying to get her own daughter killed?

She backed up further against the wall, sliently praying her mother would be killed before they were to find her.

A heart stopping scream, more blood. Her mothers hand stopped moving and her mother no longer called for her.

But Eira could still hear it, that soft, pathetic scream. Why had it been her name her mother called? Why couldn't it be one of Eira's many brothers?

The feet of the creature came into view, it walked slowly, probably looking for her.

After a few minutes the creature exited her view. Eira sighed a sigh of relief and wiped the nervous sweat from her forehead. Her mother was dead and yet the tears of sorrow did not fall. Why cry for her mother? The tears would not bring her back.

Eira took this opportunity to escape, she crawled out from under the bed, coming face to face with the twisted body of her mother.

She had back vomit as she crawled slowly and steadily into the corridor. The screams of horror and bloody murder was only louder in the hall as the soon bounced off the walls.

Eira got to her feet and walked nervously. Would they smell her? She hoped they would be too busy killing the servants to notice the princess.

But then a hand wrapped around her snow white neck. Eira struggled as the hand dug its claw into her skin.

She gasped, death would surely be painful. She was not yet ready to die.

"Stay away from my daughter, cursed demon!" holy water was splashed on the demon, the demon sizzled and burned and backed away from Eira.

Her father hurried to push her away, for the demon was not yet dead.

He gave his daughter the ring he always wore.

"Run now Eira! You must not stay here!"

"But--"

"Go!"

Her father shoved her just as the demon got back to it's feet.

Eira fled down the hall, tears falling out of her eyes as she clutched her father's ring.

Just as she was got to the end of the hall, she turned to see her father one last time.

The demons clawed hand was thrust through her fathers crest, holding his heart.

Pure, cold, snow, white blood splattered everywhere.
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Posted 9/19/11
Wow. That was really awesome! I loved reading it.
Don't say it's "suckish," 'cause it's not! xP
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Posted 9/19/11
^.^ thank you! My boredom is not useless after all!
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Posted 9/23/11
Very nice. I now see Eira going on a trying and gruesome adventure in a demon-infested world where she must cherish the ring and discover the meaning of the white blood.
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Posted 9/23/11
that's what I'm trying to write now, but it's hard...
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Posted 9/23/11
I'm sure you can do it!
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Posted 9/23/11
Yay! but I think this was just a one time thing, I don't know where the plot is going, which sucks because I quite like the idea of white blood
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Posted 9/23/11
Well, you at least have an idea and that's better than having no ideas at all.
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Posted 9/23/11
...I agree
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It's good writing, I just don't like to read good writing, as stupid as that may sound, but yes, you write like an author.

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Posted 10/31/11


That actually doesn't sound stupid at all. And thank you~
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