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I don’t use Gimp, so I can’t tell you exactly what effects to use ( the name of them ), but I can tell you what should the avatar looked like in my opinion.
For that image a grunge background would have looked better … something with splatter brushes or some grunge-vector brushes. You could have used a displace filter ( if you have that on Gimp too ) on the hair of the boy and erase the parts that didn’t look good ( or something similar with the spattered effect of photoshop ).
Also the text it’s too simple and the font doesn’t match the image. A grungy/distorted one would have looked better.
Nope! D; Gimp Doesn't Have A Displace Filter, Well Not That I Know Of. I Looked And Couldn't Find It. I Have A PS C4 But I Have No Clue How To Use It xD I'm More Experienced With Gimp Than PS. Thanks For The Criticism! :3 I Appreciate It x3 I Just Made A New Avi o; It Doesn't Have Any Text But This Was My Usual Style When I Was On Crunchyroll A Year Ago xD
Theme For It Is Playful And Bubbly :3
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The lines around the image don't look good and the background doesn't fit well the image. You should have used instead some cute/funny patterns and a big text with some nice effects. And work some more on blending! :P
Haha Ok! I'll Try It Out x3
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cool idea ^^... i think i hav something i could use advice for:
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◘ I think I am pretty much used to textures and stuff. But it just seems so messy sometimes, and so I can't make them fancy yet "clean" lol.
◘ and my text is totally uncreative
◘ compared to some avis here, mine are like.. bright xD . i might want to darken them a bit . . .
this is probably one of the few i am satisfied with xD although i know there is always room for ..improvement in there ._.
Spoiler Alert! Click to show or hide well u certainly have a different style. i know what u mean by "bright" to make it dark,its good to use photoshop actions
or if you have gimp,then u can download psd's which creates a whole new look for the pic. (it makes the pic lighter or darker
depending on the psd u use).
2. i agree,your textures are everywherexD it's good to keep things nice and clean. start off with something simple, like
where you wanna place the pic and how you want it to "show" it,and then work your way up to adding textures etc....
because most of your works are cramped with textures,and it's covering the pic.
3. i wouldn't say the text is "uncreative" since you have a variety of different fonts you use
but sometimes, the most simple fonts are the best. And i see you use a lot of text textures/brushes on your works.
When you have a long text, it's best to keep it to a minimum or text textures, because that just makes it look messier. whereas if your
text was short such as 1 word, than it's good to put a few text textures..but never overload that it fills the whole thing.
P.S-- remember,the important thing of editing the pic is to show the pic, not the stuff you use.
Make your picture stand out more than your resources:)
ahh..sorry for writing alot:/
I got the text part clear so thank you for that!
And by "starting off simple", do you mean i should place the picture first and THEN add the textures on top? or should i start with like an actual background b4 putting on the picture...
and yes i use photoshop btw xD
well start of simple is like make it look simplesh,and then if u think it needs to add more stuff
then do it. try to make a couple of simple ones and lets see how that turns out:)
but yeah placing the pic is the first step,and then try to think of a "theme" u want and place the textures rather then
randomly adding textures on.
ok.. does this look a little better? i went for a dark, somber-ish theme lol. i know it might still look messy >_> but looks a bit more "on topic" xD
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cool idea ^^... i think i hav something i could use advice for:
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◘ I think I am pretty much used to textures and stuff. But it just seems so messy sometimes, and so I can't make them fancy yet "clean" lol.
◘ and my text is totally uncreative
◘ compared to some avis here, mine are like.. bright xD . i might want to darken them a bit . . .
this is probably one of the few i am satisfied with xD although i know there is always room for ..improvement in there ._.
Spoiler Alert! Click to show or hide well u certainly have a different style. i know what u mean by "bright" to make it dark,its good to use photoshop actions
or if you have gimp,then u can download psd's which creates a whole new look for the pic. (it makes the pic lighter or darker
depending on the psd u use).
2. i agree,your textures are everywherexD it's good to keep things nice and clean. start off with something simple, like
where you wanna place the pic and how you want it to "show" it,and then work your way up to adding textures etc....
because most of your works are cramped with textures,and it's covering the pic.
3. i wouldn't say the text is "uncreative" since you have a variety of different fonts you use
but sometimes, the most simple fonts are the best. And i see you use a lot of text textures/brushes on your works.
When you have a long text, it's best to keep it to a minimum or text textures, because that just makes it look messier. whereas if your
text was short such as 1 word, than it's good to put a few text textures..but never overload that it fills the whole thing.
P.S-- remember,the important thing of editing the pic is to show the pic, not the stuff you use.
Make your picture stand out more than your resources:)
ahh..sorry for writing alot:/
I got the text part clear so thank you for that!
And by "starting off simple", do you mean i should place the picture first and THEN add the textures on top? or should i start with like an actual background b4 putting on the picture...
and yes i use photoshop btw xD
well start of simple is like make it look simplesh,and then if u think it needs to add more stuff
then do it. try to make a couple of simple ones and lets see how that turns out:)
but yeah placing the pic is the first step,and then try to think of a "theme" u want and place the textures rather then
randomly adding textures on.
ok.. does this look a little better? i went for a dark, somber-ish theme lol. i know it might still look messy >_> but looks a bit more "on topic" xD
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yes much better! ur actions make with ur theme:)
another thing is..try not to hide the pic too much that only her head is showing...try to show some body parts
unless its just a pic with a headxD i think the font could be different..like theres an empty space in the middle...
try to make the font bigger ..and the purple texture at the top just bugs mexD
but this looks a lot better than the others....keep it up!:)
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cool idea ^^... i think i hav something i could use advice for:
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◘ I think I am pretty much used to textures and stuff. But it just seems so messy sometimes, and so I can't make them fancy yet "clean" lol.
◘ and my text is totally uncreative
◘ compared to some avis here, mine are like.. bright xD . i might want to darken them a bit . . .
this is probably one of the few i am satisfied with xD although i know there is always room for ..improvement in there ._.
Spoiler Alert! Click to show or hide well u certainly have a different style. i know what u mean by "bright" to make it dark,its good to use photoshop actions
or if you have gimp,then u can download psd's which creates a whole new look for the pic. (it makes the pic lighter or darker
depending on the psd u use).
2. i agree,your textures are everywherexD it's good to keep things nice and clean. start off with something simple, like
where you wanna place the pic and how you want it to "show" it,and then work your way up to adding textures etc....
because most of your works are cramped with textures,and it's covering the pic.
3. i wouldn't say the text is "uncreative" since you have a variety of different fonts you use
but sometimes, the most simple fonts are the best. And i see you use a lot of text textures/brushes on your works.
When you have a long text, it's best to keep it to a minimum or text textures, because that just makes it look messier. whereas if your
text was short such as 1 word, than it's good to put a few text textures..but never overload that it fills the whole thing.
P.S-- remember,the important thing of editing the pic is to show the pic, not the stuff you use.
Make your picture stand out more than your resources:)
ahh..sorry for writing alot:/
I got the text part clear so thank you for that!
And by "starting off simple", do you mean i should place the picture first and THEN add the textures on top? or should i start with like an actual background b4 putting on the picture...
and yes i use photoshop btw xD
well start of simple is like make it look simplesh,and then if u think it needs to add more stuff
then do it. try to make a couple of simple ones and lets see how that turns out:)
but yeah placing the pic is the first step,and then try to think of a "theme" u want and place the textures rather then
randomly adding textures on.
ok.. does this look a little better? i went for a dark, somber-ish theme lol. i know it might still look messy >_> but looks a bit more "on topic" xD
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yes much better! ur actions make with ur theme:)
another thing is..try not to hide the pic too much that only her head is showing...try to show some body parts
unless its just a pic with a headxD i think the font could be different..like theres an empty space in the middle...
try to make the font bigger ..and the purple texture at the top just bugs mexD
but this looks a lot better than the others....keep it up!:)
lol yeah i get what you mean . this pic in particular had part of the body like chopped off xD so yeah i accidently covered a lot.
and i was wondering what to do with that purple texture cuz it was kinda out of there haha
Soo anyway, THANKS a lot! Many of my problems hav been clarified !  ill come back when my skills go up a few levels XDD
thank u again ♥
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cool idea ^^... i think i hav something i could use advice for:
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◘ I think I am pretty much used to textures and stuff. But it just seems so messy sometimes, and so I can't make them fancy yet "clean" lol.
◘ and my text is totally uncreative
◘ compared to some avis here, mine are like.. bright xD . i might want to darken them a bit . . .
this is probably one of the few i am satisfied with xD although i know there is always room for ..improvement in there ._.
Spoiler Alert! Click to show or hide well u certainly have a different style. i know what u mean by "bright" to make it dark,its good to use photoshop actions
or if you have gimp,then u can download psd's which creates a whole new look for the pic. (it makes the pic lighter or darker
depending on the psd u use).
2. i agree,your textures are everywherexD it's good to keep things nice and clean. start off with something simple, like
where you wanna place the pic and how you want it to "show" it,and then work your way up to adding textures etc....
because most of your works are cramped with textures,and it's covering the pic.
3. i wouldn't say the text is "uncreative" since you have a variety of different fonts you use
but sometimes, the most simple fonts are the best. And i see you use a lot of text textures/brushes on your works.
When you have a long text, it's best to keep it to a minimum or text textures, because that just makes it look messier. whereas if your
text was short such as 1 word, than it's good to put a few text textures..but never overload that it fills the whole thing.
P.S-- remember,the important thing of editing the pic is to show the pic, not the stuff you use.
Make your picture stand out more than your resources:)
ahh..sorry for writing alot:/
I got the text part clear so thank you for that!
And by "starting off simple", do you mean i should place the picture first and THEN add the textures on top? or should i start with like an actual background b4 putting on the picture...
and yes i use photoshop btw xD
well start of simple is like make it look simplesh,and then if u think it needs to add more stuff
then do it. try to make a couple of simple ones and lets see how that turns out:)
but yeah placing the pic is the first step,and then try to think of a "theme" u want and place the textures rather then
randomly adding textures on.
ok.. does this look a little better? i went for a dark, somber-ish theme lol. i know it might still look messy >_> but looks a bit more "on topic" xD
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yes much better! ur actions make with ur theme:)
another thing is..try not to hide the pic too much that only her head is showing...try to show some body parts
unless its just a pic with a headxD i think the font could be different..like theres an empty space in the middle...
try to make the font bigger ..and the purple texture at the top just bugs mexD
but this looks a lot better than the others....keep it up!:)
lol yeah i get what you mean . this pic in particular had part of the body like chopped off xD so yeah i accidently covered a lot.
and i was wondering what to do with that purple texture cuz it was kinda out of there haha
Soo anyway, THANKS a lot! Many of my problems hav been clarified ! ill come back when my skills go up a few levels XDD
thank u again ♥
ohh, i seexD and np, glad to help!:) cant wait to see ur new works^^
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well uhm i did your advise and here is the outcome
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well i did this just now.. ITS FRESHLY BAKED LOL C:
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1. It's better this way than the first try, but still you could have removed the pattern around the girl and make it a bit darker ( you can use levels, curves, color balance or channel mixer for that too ).
2. It's nice, even though the idea is inspired from someone else. The only "mistake" is the text - the white one. If I see well you used blur over it; correct me if I'm mistaken! It's not bad, only that, in that case try to not use drop shadow as an effect to the text. You could have used instead to duplicate your text layer, make the one under a darker color and move it slowly till it looked like a shadow. Or leave it simple if it still doesn't good! :D
your really a true master!! *bows* thank you so much!! I'll keep trying and then post again my new one
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lol ok, i changed my style: (a bit ._.)
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You still have to work on the background. Try to be more creative! For example with the first avatar it would have worked better a floral background. And you should not have used that stroke around the image. Also pay more attention to the fonts you use.
For the second avatar I would have used some patterns to make more interesting the background and a large text in two colors or filled ( clipping mask ) with a pattern.
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On the first one ( pair ) you shouldn't have put the text below and you should have worked more on the blending. But the background and colors are nice. XD
The other one it's not so good. The background doesn't fit the image ... you should have added some other kind of effects: some other type of c4d's and maybe some flower texture or c4d ( there are also c4d with flower elements on DA ). And again more attention on blending!
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Spoiler Alert! Click to show or hide Caroline_24 wrote:
On the first one ( pair ) you shouldn't have put the text below and you should have worked more on the blending. But the background and colors are nice. XD
The other one it's not so good. The background doesn't fit the image ... you should have added some other kind of effects: some other type of c4d's and maybe some flower texture or c4d ( there are also c4d with flower elements on DA ). And again more attention on blending!
Oh so i guess blendings the main issue lol .. and ok maybe ill check out DA sometime too
Thanks , Ill try all this out then ! ^^
Btw sorry for the later reply
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Caroline_24 wrote:
First of all you should work more on blending the image with the background. There are tutorials that you can watch and try out.
Also pay more attention to the image you use and the kind of resources that fit best that image.
In the end, try using some other effects on the text … that stroke doesn’t look so good. Try using a thinner stroke or drop shadow. You can also try gradient map or bevel and emboss.
Could you give me suggestion with the resource? Since i always search some texture i like and also thought that it fit best to the image(but i was wrong and ends up making a worst gfx)
effect? such as? change different fonts?
and thanks for the suggestion. I will keep that in mind (:
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here's the other gfx. suggestion and advice are needed (:
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LastImmortality_x3 wrote:
Caroline_24 wrote:
First of all you should work more on blending the image with the background. There are tutorials that you can watch and try out.
Also pay more attention to the image you use and the kind of resources that fit best that image.
In the end, try using some other effects on the text … that stroke doesn’t look so good. Try using a thinner stroke or drop shadow. You can also try gradient map or bevel and emboss.
Could you give me suggestion with the resource? Since i always search some texture i like and also thought that it fit best to the image(but i was wrong and ends up making a worst gfx)
effect? such as? change different fonts?
and thanks for the suggestion. I will keep that in mind (:
Well, it depends on the image you use. If, for example, you have an image with a cute girl, then use some textures ( floral and some with frames think that will do the job ). Or you could use some patterns with some interesting and cute designs.
If instead you have a dark image ( not referring exactly of being black - a character that gives a dark aura ) the try using some c4d or abstract wallpapers.
You can also use text brushes if the background looks too empty.
As for the text, I've already mentioned the effects you can use. And yeah, you can try combining different fonts.
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Caroline_24 wrote:
On the first one ( pair ) you shouldn't have put the text below and you should have worked more on the blending. But the background and colors are nice. XD
The other one it's not so good. The background doesn't fit the image ... you should have added some other kind of effects: some other type of c4d's and maybe some flower texture or c4d ( there are also c4d with flower elements on DA ). And again more attention on blending!
hey is this a little better? i tried out a c4d like u said lol:
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