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Bassically.. i will make a story then you will give the next part of it ..got it?

let me explain 1st my idea...this is like yrs before the story of tiger and bunny..kotetsu is just 15 yrs old this time..of course my idea this is his 1st time/debut as "wild tiger" as 3rd main character later on the story so he is not the main character of this story ..only a few "heroes" beside Mr.legend (more like 3 more or less) yet in this time

Someone standing in a dark place(we can only see a faint shadow figure but obviously hes a guy)..people laying on
the floor around him ..blood starts to flow from their bodies..he slightly turn around exposing his eyes glowing red..

"hey wake up!!" a voice suddenly come from nowhere

a man with a blond hair open his eyes..his 1st sight is the ceiling..he sits up and see a policeman standing on the other side of the bar (yes he is in prison)
"get you ass ready...your free to go" the policeman said with an angry tone

"ok..just..a mi..nute" he replied while yawning"..he get out of the bed...walked to the sink ..pick up a toothbrush and put toothpaste on it...he scratches his beard and going to start brushing to teeth..but he suddenly stopped inches close to his mouth with a wide opened eyes and shout "huuuuuuhhhh???!!!!"

everything went black and a word appeared "from now on ..your gonna be my partner" (of course its the title of the ep/chapter)

(back to the story scene) theyre walking toward the front door of the police station
(character introduction):[main character]= hayate katsuragi! [age]: 29 yrs old [hair]head to shoulder long blond hair [eyes] dark green [others]beard covering the side of his cheeks (bec not shaving)
overall his hair style and looks is close to harima from schoolrumble i repeat :"only close to harima looks"(google harima schoolrumble if you dont know)..

hayate:"can you plss explain to me what happened?. i remember that the court said 60 yrs..but im only in prison for 6 yrs then after i wake up ..im free to go now?"
"i dont need to answer that..but all i can tell you that someone paid ten million yen for your freedom" the policeman replied"
[Hayate]:'t-t-t-ten million??!!' ( after a while they arrived near the front door ..the policeman take off his cuffs)
[Policeman]:"your ride is waiting for you outside"
[Hayate]:?!..{thinking}:"theres no way a normal people can pay 10 million like that..its must be some kind of organization or company" (sweating while looking at the door).
then he remebered something
[Hayate]{thinking}::it doesnt matter anyway..i have nothing to lose anymore"(he opened the door ,step outside and sees a butler standing beside an expensive car)
[Butler]:"plss get in"
[Hayate]:(suspicious expression)"theres no way im gonna get in that easily.." (sudden stomach growl)
(next scene)
hayate is inside the car (moving)..eating expensive food...[Hayate]:{thinking}:"theres no way im gonna waste delicous food!!" (kept putting food on his mouth ..eating like luffy from one piece"
(after a few minutes the car stop)[Butler]:"were here" [Hayate]:"woahh"..(thinking)"just as i thought...a huge building (hes thinking some evil organization inside)
they walk inside,take the elevator stop at the 15th floor..[Butler]:(opened the door and said)"ojou-sama is waiting for you" (point his hand inside the room)
[Hayate]:"ojou-sama?!" (he walks in and sees a young girl) the young girl quickly said when she saw him "at last we've meet again" (happy smile) [Hayate]:"??"..she told him to sit and introduce herself "hinata kusangi"
(character) : [Main character] hinata kusanagi [age]15 [hair] brown head to neck long [eyes] yellow orange
[Hayate]:"wait a sec. dont tell me that your the one paid 10 million!" (point at the hinata)
[Hinata]:"your right...as you can see theres no one else in this room right?..anyway you can call me hina!"
[Hayate]:(facepalm)" i thought some kind of organization that will use me or experiment on me...but its just a brat"
[Hinata]:(quickly walk straight infront of hayate pouting and shout) "i said call me hina not a brat!!" (>0<)
[Hayate]:"anyway (backs away) what are you thinking?!! paying 10 million to someone in prison that you dont even know..(sigh) you just wasted a huge money .."
[Hinata]:"i didnt just paid for someone randomly"(serious face) -[Hayate]?!- "and i dont think i wasted my money on you..if you didnt save me back then(worried face)..i wont be here today!" (smile at him)
[Hayate]:" {thinking}:"i..saved her?.back then?..that means..im still a hero at that time"
(she realize thats his trying hard to remember) [Hinata]:"its ok if you dont remember (slightly dissapointed face)..after all you saved many people so it cant be helped..the now is what important"
[Hayate]:"i..see...well you have a point there whats the exactly your reason...."'
(next scene: next day)
[Hayate]:"so...this is the reason.." (watching the cops going after 6 armed criminals on the car) (hayate remembered what they talk about yesterday)
[Hinata]:".from now on..your gonna be my partner!!"(points at hayate )
[Hayate]:"..partner???"
[Hinata]:"were going to start fighting crime! and save people for justice!! just like you always do"(excited)
[Hayate]:"ohh..{drinks coffee from a mug..and spit it right back to the mug after realization) huuwhaaatt!!."
[Hinata]:" pay me 10 million if you dont want to..." (cute evil smirk)
(a huge sword with ten million written on it pierced hayate in his mind)
[Hayate]:"kuhh!..(droop on his knees) critical.. strike.."(what he really means its impossible)
(flashback over..next scene..hinata discussion the situation with hayate near the place)
[Hinata]:"its seems the cops trapped the criminals inside that warehouse but..they manage to get hostage"
[Hayate]:"hey your really serious about doing this?..you should know you might die right?"
[Hinata]:"but my partner is the legendary the king of speed..so its fine" ^_^
[Hayate]:(sigh)"so thats why your very confident..dont rely on me you know!..and whats with this costume..its...(he sees hinata wears a mask..of course shes already in her own costume)
[Hayate]:(he finally remembered)"..i see..and also that day.."
(6 yrs ago..a guy with a gun robbed a bank but the police cornered him but he has a mother and 1 yr old kid hostage)
[Criminal]:"dont move or i will kill this girl and her child" (slowly retreating on the side of a small alley between 2 buildings while the police is pointing their guns at him)
(meanwhile..hayate is walking on the road and he sees a lot of people gathering..he was curious so he went there)
[Hayate]:"whats going on here?" (he asked someone but before that someone answer his question.. a little girl comes out from the crowd running.. she bumped hayate some of her stuff from her pocket went all over the floor. but she still kept running)
[Hayate]:(he sees a wallet) "oi you dropped your wallet!!" (but the kid is far to hear him) "kids these days"
(a sighing smile)
(since the crown is focused on the event..hayate eyes glows blue ..he disappeared in just a sec (looks like a flashstep from bleach -google it-)..leaves a little gust of wind)
(hayate appeared on the building roof and he sees the littlegirl hiding on the building corner)
[Hinata]:[age]:9 yrs old " ok!..i can do this! (trying to convince herself).."this time im gonna be a hero." (puts on a mask from her bag)and runs into the alley [Hayate]:?!.."what the hell is she doing?"
[Criminal]:its seems the cops is buying this hostage crap really good hehe.
[Hinata]:"hey!" (shes standing on the exit of the alley)
[Hayate]:(saw the situation) "could it be.." (but before hayate move the criminal laugh so hard) [Hayate]:"?!
[Criminal]:" your supposed to be a hero " *still laughing*
[Hinata]:"dont under estimate me!!" (her eyes glows blue and blue aura on her body) [hayate]:?!!
[Criminal]:"your a next!.(suprised face but turns into angry face).then.." (point the gun at her..but its seems hinata didnt get scared she still has a determined look on her face)
(Hinata eyes glows even more.. the gun glows blue) [Criminal]:?? (he cant fire his gun) (instantly the blue glow spread over the criminal) [Criminal]:!!" i cant move"(the hostage manage to get off from his hands and runs away safely) (hinata points her finger at the criminal ) [Criminals]:"whats happening?!!" (his feet starting to get off the ground and continue to rise up to 2 floors)
[Hinata]:"i really did it...i really did it" (happy excited face)
[Hayate]:"wow...i was really worried for a sec back there (-_-).."(the glow in his eyes dissapeared)
(satisfied face )
(but the glow on hinata's eyes dissapeared...the criminal falls to the ground)
[Hinata]:"eh?!" ( then she sees the criminal standing up) "now way" (looking at her hands and body cant believe that her powers dissapeared)
[Hayate]:"thats it?..."
[Criminal]:"f*ck you little brat!!" (points the gun at her and fires the gun) [Hinata]!!(shocked expression her eyes almost went blank))
[Hayate]:"sh*t!:" (going to activate his powers again)
(but it seems its too late the bullet is inches away from her..the criminal let a big smirk..
before the bullet reach her it stopped) [Hayate]:"!!? (bullet his covered in red aura and instantly crushed as thin as a needle and falls to the ground..hinata eyes is glowing red ..but only for a 3 sec and dissapeared again)
[Hinata]:(blank empty eyes went to normal) "huh?" (she sees the criminal shaking in fear)
[Criminal]:"you monster!!!" (fires all his bullets..hinata close her eyes..everything becomes silent for a while)
"oi....your a troublesome brat" (hinata hears a voice..she opened her eyes and sees a guy standing infront of her..she can only see his back but she noticed his spiky short blond hair)
(hayate open his palm and the bullets started to fall on the ground)
[Criminal]:" king... of... speed.. your one of the most feared next" (starts stepping back)
(hayate step one foot forward..the criminal turn around....but before he start to run..he felt a hand on his shoulder)
[Hayate]:"if you know about me..then you should also know that running away from me is impossible"
(the criminal peed his pants..after a while the criminal was arrested..and soon the event is on tv (hayate costume is only a mask and the rest is what he normal clothes..and no hero name ..he leaves before anyone talk to him so people called/prefered him as the king of speed)
(next scene:)
[Hayate]:"dont do that ever again" (hands over her wallet)
[Hinata]:"no!.. i cant!...i want to be a hero... like mr.legend"
[Hayate]:".what if im not there..you probably died back there.."
[Hinata]:"still..i want.."( determined but going to cry face) [Hayate]:(sigh and pat hinata head)
[Hayate]:"then promise me.. you have to master your ability before you do this hero stuff again...is that ok?" ^_^
[Hinata]:(wipe her tears and nod) "i'll train and train and train very hard everyday!"
[Hayate]:(laugh a bit) "then if you become a really strong next ..we might be partners oneday" (but he didnt really mean it.. he just unconciously said that)
(the flashback is over: it was interupted by hinatas voice "lets go")
[Hayate]:"......" (they both staring on the warehouse sorounded by the police)

(everything went blank) "to be continued" (of course by you....)
WARNING:
DONT POST @SS HOLES COMMENTS : 1ST OF ALL ENGLISH IS NOT MY 1st LANGUAGE SO DONT B!TCH ABOUT ANY WRONG IN ANY SENTENCE,SPELLING ETC..I RARELY USE ENGLISH SOMETIMES ONLY IN CHATS
OR SHORT COMMENTS
IF YOU THINK YOUR BETTER THEN MAKE A BETTER STORY THAN ME!

everyone can participate..mail me [email protected].just check this thread for any updates

i will select the best story...(the continuation) its up to you how they will deal with the 6 criminals nad the hostage situation..

EVEN IF JUST A SHORT STORY/SCENE IS OK YOU DONT HAVE TO MAKE LONG ONES..I WILL ANOUNCE THE USERNAME OF THE BEST STORY I PICKED...BUT DONT WORRY THIS IS NOT A CONTEST ITS EVERYONES THREAD
BUT THERES ONE THING I SHOULD TELL YOU BEFORE SUBMITTING YOUR STORY>>I MIGHT EDIT OR CHANGE SOME OF YOUR STORY DEPENDS ON HOW I SEE IT...MORE LIKE IM THE DIRECTOR...
LIKE I SAID I WILL ANOUNCE ALL THE USERNAME OF THE STORY PART I USED...SO THE CREDIT IS STILL FROM THE PARTICIPANTS

JUST CHECK THIS THREAD FOR ANY UPDATES...I LOOK FORWARD TO IT.


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Sorry but these types of threads aren't allowed in the anime forum. Please make a group instead.

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