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Spectre77 1216 cr points Send Message: 22 / M / Brisbane, Australia Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 2/9/12 Looking good so far. Might want to go back over your text and double-check it though, there are a few area's were your sentence structure doesn't really make sense (mostly in the prelude, but on a few of the pages as well).
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Member eternal_shenlong 28379 cr points Send Message: 27 / M / USA Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 2/10/12 Thanks for pointing it out. English is my third language, so sorry for the bad grammar mistakes.
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Member hiroy_raind 1269 cr points Send Message: 23 / M Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 2/10/12 Pretty good :). Though some fonts outside the balloons are a little bit hard to read (specifically, the two male character). So both of us had characters that uses seasons as their names, hahaha ;^^
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Spectre77 1216 cr points Send Message: 22 / M / Brisbane, Australia Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 2/10/12, edited 2/10/12 hiroy_raind wrote: So both of us had characters that uses seasons as their names, hahaha ;^^ Make that three, since I have a character named Natsumi in my current project as well. Coincidence, or something more mysterious? eternal_shenlong wrote: Thanks for pointing it out. English is my third language, so sorry for the bad grammar mistakes. No prob. I kinda suspected that might be the case. Still, three languages huh, not bad. Better than me, ive dabbled in both Japanese (self taught) and German (school taught) and yet I can still only speak English :P. By the way, what did you use for the static on the TV broadcast? Seeing that gave me a bit of an idea.
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Member hiroy_raind 1269 cr points Send Message: 23 / M Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 2/10/12 Spectre77 wrote: hiroy_raind wrote: So both of us had characters that uses seasons as their names, hahaha ;^^ Make that three, since I have a character named Natsumi in my current project as well. Coincidence, or something more mysterious? Remember my first chapter?
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Spectre77 1216 cr points Send Message: 22 / M / Brisbane, Australia Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 2/10/12, edited 2/10/12 hiroy_raind wrote: Spectre77 wrote: hiroy_raind wrote: So both of us had characters that uses seasons as their names, hahaha ;^^ Make that three, since I have a character named Natsumi in my current project as well. Coincidence, or something more mysterious? Remember my first chapter? I was going to say 'that may be the case for you but only one of my characters is season based' , but then I thought about it for a few seconds and was like 'Wait...I have 2 Haruna's as well don't I...forgot about them lol'. Apparently ive been following a season based naming motif without even thinking about it, which is actually kind of hilarious.
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Member hiroy_raind 1269 cr points Send Message: 23 / M Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 2/10/12 Well, it's probably the easiest Japanese naming other than taking existing names from other sources, so it's somewhat expected haha ;^^.
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Member eternal_shenlong 28379 cr points Send Message: 27 / M / USA Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 2/10/12, edited 2/10/12 Spectre77 wrote: hiroy_raind wrote: So both of us had characters that uses seasons as their names, hahaha ;^^ Make that three, since I have a character named Natsumi in my current project as well. Coincidence, or something more mysterious? eternal_shenlong wrote: Thanks for pointing it out. English is my third language, so sorry for the bad grammar mistakes. No prob. I kinda suspected that might be the case. Still, three languages huh, not bad. Better than me, ive dabbled in both Japanese (self taught) and German (school taught) and yet I can still only speak English :P. By the way, what did you use for the static on the TV broadcast? Seeing that gave me a bit of an idea. The main character and the three sisters names are all related to seasons, and their names will have a connection to their special abilities. In the spoiler link is the one out of the three Character Profiles that I made, and please read it after reading the 13 pages first. Spoiler Alert! Click to show or hide Spectre77, You can find it by searching for TV Noise on Google images search or if you want the one I am using, then download this link: http://redcanvasthemovie.com/mys/skins_videos/TV_Noise_02.jpg
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meygaera 18491 cr points Send Message: 23 / M / on your lap, purring Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 2/10/12 Hey even though the contest winners haven't been decided, I couldn't sit back idly and not create more pages. Here is the start of Mr C's Calculus Class part II http://www.crunchyroll.com/showphotoalbum?id=12683230
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Visioneer 48 cr points Send Message: 33 / M Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 2/15/12 Hey all, don't know if you are interested, but I just got ComiPo! today, and I've started making a little comic. It's not very far along, but I would love to hear what ya'll think of it. The addy is: http://kamipo.thecomicseries.com/ It's called Kami Po! A Tale from the God Potato
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Member hiroy_raind 1269 cr points Send Message: 23 / M Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 2/15/12 Visioneer wrote: Hey all, don't know if you are interested, but I just got ComiPo! today, and I've started making a little comic. It's not very far along, but I would love to hear what ya'll think of it. The addy is: http://kamipo.thecomicseries.com/ It's called Kami Po! A Tale from the God Potato Hey, it was pretty nice! Liked the poses and the interesting angles on the background :). The motion effects can be done better though. Also, turn on the "render 3D layer in high definition on export" feature on the preference. Can't wait to see more!
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Visioneer 48 cr points Send Message: 33 / M Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 2/16/12 I'm not sure what you mean with "the motion effects can be done better" so if you wouldn't mind offering some insight into that, I would be much obliged! I appreciate your review, so thank you very much. Also, I'm using the Japanese version, and since I can't read most of it, I'm not sure where to find the "render 3D layer in hi def on export" feature is. I'll try to look for it, though. Again, thanks for your input!
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Member LordofHearts 271 cr points Send Message: 20 / M / Texas Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 2/16/12 Visioneer wrote: Hey all, don't know if you are interested, but I just got ComiPo! today, and I've started making a little comic. It's not very far along, but I would love to hear what ya'll think of it. The addy is: http://kamipo.thecomicseries.com/ It's called Kami Po! A Tale from the God Potato I'm not sure what to say about it. Although... There could be less panels and more pages...
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Visioneer 48 cr points Send Message: 33 / M Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 2/16/12 LordofHearts wrote: I'm not sure what to say about it. Although... There could be less panels and more pages... That bad, huh? Well, if you have any input on what I could do to improve, I'll be more than pleased to hear what you have to say. (Aside from the panels thing, I feel weird if there is 4 or less panels per page, unless there is a specific reason for it.)
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Member LordofHearts 271 cr points Send Message: 20 / M / Texas Offline	Permalink Reply Quote Posted 2/16/12 Visioneer wrote: LordofHearts wrote: I'm not sure what to say about it. Although... There could be less panels and more pages... That bad, huh? Well, if you have any input on what I could do to improve, I'll be more than pleased to hear what you have to say. (Aside from the panels thing, I feel weird if there is 4 or less panels per page, unless there is a specific reason for it.) After looking at the other pages that have magically appeared on your site, I can say that some of the character's text could be darker. Some of the characters are pixelated and look pretty bad because you enlarged them too much. I haven't quite figured out how to avoid things like that myself, so I'd say you should try to avoid having any scenes like that in the manga. All in all, your manga is not the greatest, but definitely not the worst I've seen. But, you know, everybody has to start somewhere. Try reading our mangas and take some notes from them. At the very least, take some notes from the mangas we made for the most recent contest.
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