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Posted 11/2/11 , edited 11/17/11
Dont worry it doesn't have 2 be that good, I'm going 2 write my own and im so not good.. Here I go, here is my poem, I'm not good, just do your best at one...



( Never say something but if u mean it then say it ! )

Never say I love you
but if u mean it
because I will believe it.

Never say I love you so
many time If you don’t care
Never talk about feelings
If you dont really feel it
Never hold my hand
If you don't care about me
Never look into my eyes
If all you do is breaking my heart
Never say hello
If you really mean forever
Than say you will try
But don't say 4ever
If forever is a lie
Cause saying
forever makes me
sad in side
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Posted 11/2/11 , edited 11/2/11
O Jose, where art thou?

Jose: I'm having tequila outdoors, amigo!
Posted 11/2/11


Gotta admit thats rather humerous
Posted 11/2/11

AngelXxShinxX wrote:



yea it was ! hehee ^^ but I was bored


Posted 11/2/11
I seek demons.
I seek flies.
I seek melons.
I seek ties.
I seek dragons.
I seek guys.
I seek women.
I seek men.

I seek reflections.
I seek humans.
I seek aliens.
Posted 11/2/11 , edited 11/2/11

AngelXxShinxX wrote:


AngelXxShinxX wrote:



yea it was ! hehee ^^ but I was bored




ya what something dark ok here i go..

dont be rude about it ! I wasnt all sweet b4, i was more like a rock girl way but I had stop being one. but dont miss with me ! hehee



How did this happen?

I tremble in darkness
Afraid of the unseen
Scared of what lurks in shadow.
I yearn to be free
Unbound from my chains
To run through field and medow.
Unable to move
From this place I am in
Will I ever be released?
My doubt and my pain
I hold deep inside me
Prevent me from finding peace.
Alone in the dark
Trapped forever
I wonder if here I will die.
Falling to the ground
I Clench both my fists
And reach them to an unseen sky.

You tell me and act like a ass
In front of your crew
Hoping to get a reaction
In revenge for your contraction.
I look away from you
Whispering that it can't be true.
You and your friends mock me
I want nothing more than to flee.
Then you have the audacity
To ask to remain friends with me.
I shake my heand and draw my gun
My turn to laugh as your friends all run.
Now you're all alone, how does it feel?
Your mind must surely start to reel.
Going over the events of your life
Seeing your joys, sorrows, pain and strife.
u act like a ass 2 me? That is fine.
I must then kill you and make you mine.
Together we'll be immortalized
The whole world will sympathize
Hold your breath as the bullet flies
To your head, a second between my eye
s.
Posted 11/2/11

D01BCDN3 wrote:

I seek demons.
I seek flies.
I seek melons.
I seek ties.
I seek dragons.
I seek guys.
I seek women.
I seek men.

I seek reflections.
I seek humans.
I seek aliens.


Oo wow I'm singin it while readin it.. wow im so wired !!
Posted 11/2/11

AngelXxShinxX wrote:


D01BCDN3 wrote:

I seek demons.
I seek flies.
I seek melons.
I seek ties.
I seek dragons.
I seek guys.
I seek women.
I seek men.

I seek reflections.
I seek humans.
I seek aliens.


Oo wow I'm singin it while readin it.. wow im so wired !!


No, you're not weird, you're just poetically involved. I hope you do understand the real meaning behind this "poem" though.

Posted 11/2/11

D01BCDN3 wrote:


AngelXxShinxX wrote:


D01BCDN3 wrote:

I seek demons.
I seek flies.
I seek melons.
I seek ties.
I seek dragons.
I seek guys.
I seek women.
I seek men.

I seek reflections.
I seek humans.
I seek aliens.


Oo wow I'm singin it while readin it.. wow im so wired !!


No, you're not weird, you're just poetically involved. I hope you do understand the real meaning behind this "poem" though.



yea I do, dont worry ....
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Posted 11/2/11
Eh what to lose, I call this one Immoral Kismet;;


As I clench this gapping wound
Knowing you won’t be coming
To heal it anytime soon
I hold on to that feeling that would heighten my mood

If i take a heart one not of my own
Remove mine and replace it with other
Will this vapidness go
Would reconcilement be my new status quo
Will this pain go away
Even if it means losing so much I hold dear….
Would I possible be able to repair
Once its out?
In broad daily light away from that lonely town

Will things be clear
Will the pieces fall together
Will destinies path being foreshown?
Will faith be changeable, bendable to my own will
Like a White Chronicle to save the world from certain peril?

But instead just to save you from me
And
Me from you

The irony of it all
Desperate desires as if to superabound god.
If I could simply let go.
Would I still be human though...Maybe instead i should wish to not be myself
Humane needs human to be so

Perhaps i should balance the skill
Take punishment for the crime precendently railed.
Posted 11/2/11

kalikoko wrote:

Eh what to lose, I call this one Immoral Kismet;;


As I clench this gapping wound
Knowing you won’t be coming
To heal it anytime soon
I hold on to that feeling that would heighten my mood

If i take a heart one not of my own
Remove mine and replace it with other
Will this vapidness go
Would reconcilement be my new status quo
Will this pain go away
Even if it means losing so much I hold dear….
Would I possible be able to repair
Once its out?
In broad daily light away from that lonely town

Will things be clear
Will the pieces fall together
Will destinies path being foreshown?
Will faith be changeable, bendable to my own will
Like a White Chronicle to save the world from certain peril?

But instead just to save you from me
And
Me from you

The irony of it all
Desperate desires as if to superabound god.
If I could simply let go.
Would I still be human though...Maybe instead i should wish to not be myself
Humane needs human to be so

Perhaps i should balance the skill
Take punishment for the crime precendently railed.



mmm, nice !! kool ( like it ) 4 some reason
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Posted 11/2/11
Thanks ^^, I have a bunch of more but I don't want to flood the thread haha, I thought it'd have more traffic and I can post a poem per page..
Posted 11/2/11

kalikoko wrote:

Thanks ^^, I have a bunch of more but I don't want to flood the thread haha, I thought it'd have more traffic and I can post a poem per page..


I wouldn't mind.. hehee, I love 2 read poem, 4 some reason.. ^^
Posted 11/21/11
Pink lingering pedals blossoming love's fair time
Daily days enroll into harsh, rapid drills
Harpooned in the bosom of youth
Because those tender lips became the pills
Of eternal loss

Evening to midnight, ways were approved--
Not much engaged however were improved
Saying three words were easily sung
Because they were the truth

Burning sun swallowed the glorious taste;
Much like bitter sweet memories-
They cleansed disperse.

Agony spoke for bloody tears
It lurked so much, it withered.

In due time, pink blossoms rebirth.

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