Chapter 3 part 3 -School Begins-
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The Greenhouse, Alpha Students Training Grounds
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Hikaru drowsily got up from her bed. She threw the blanket aside and put her foot on the ground. There was something below. She picked it up and noticed it was the letter from yesterday night. She open and read it. The message said, “Greetings Hotaru Mikawa! Congratulations on becoming the Second Alpha Student. Please be informed our first meeting will be tomorrow at 4PM inside the greenhouse.” Hikaru let out a sigh, “Great…. Another addition to all my problems.” Hikaru felt even less thrilled to go to school than ever. Just going there was already a drag. Thankfully, the day passed quietly. It was expected after the ruckus caused yesterday.

Hikaru had a few things she had to take care of before going to the meeting because of her student representative duties. She gathered the papers and the logbook. She walked out the empty classroom and into the large room of the Disciplinary committee. There was no one inside. It was strange since clicking sounds echoed around the room. She didn’t mind it anymore and approached the desk that was filled with tons of papers. She was surprised to see someone there that she jumped back and fell down. The person looked at her with a bored expression on his face. He asked her, “Uh…who are you?” Hikaru got a bit annoyed. It was worst than being made fun of. So she replied, “I think I should be asking you! Wait you look familiar….” Hikaru tried to remember where she saw this boy with ruffled hair. It just hit her. “Are you that boy with um… what’s her name… I think it was Aiumi…” The boy changed expressions and had eyes that begun to glitter. He looked like he was in heaven. He suddenly burst out in a poetic dream-like tone, “Aiumi-san, that lovely and charming face of yours. The wonderful look of dedication…” Hikaru raised her eyebrow. She was taken aback by the sudden character change. He continued with his numerous praises for Aiumi. She knew telling him to shut up won’t work so she completely ignored him once again. She got on his desk and tinkered with the computer. Once she understood the process, she began to encode the papers. Another student came in, she dropped the papers she was holding and ran towards the boy. She was shaking him rapidly while repeatedly saying, snap out of it. She eventually got tired and shouted, “Urgh! I give up, I’ll call boss then.” The boy turned serious and started panicking. He dropped to his knees then grabbed her foot while trying to plead angelically, “Please don’t, A-a-a” The girl chuckled and shook her head.” I won’t but you serious need to fix that terrible habit of yours. Plus someone else saw you….” The boy seemed to remember that Hikaru is still present until now. He grabbed her hand and bowed down. “I’m begging you not to tell anyone.” He had puppy eyes you couldn’t resist. Hikaru gave a look of no interest. “Do I look like I care?” “Please, please.” The girl interrupted with a smirk, “Haha, you should follow his plea. He won’t stop until you agree…. and it can get annoying at some point. “ Hikaru sighed, “Fine. In exchange can you do the rest of these?” She pointed to her paperwork. The girl said, “It’s a good trade off. Think about it Vice. Oh, I forgot to introduce myself. I’m Caren” The guy said, “You’re right. Ok, I accept. I’m sorry to be rude but I haven’t introduced myself. I’m Erik Takeno, the Vice Head of the Disciplinary Committee.” Hikaru said, “I’ll be going now….. Uhhhh, thanks for finishing those. The name is Hikaru.” Erik smiled politely and said, “Of course.”

Hikaru walked through the quiet hallways. She was wondering how someone like Erik can have an extreme mood swings until she bumped into someone. She looked up to see it was Ryuusaki. She felt a chill down to her spine as she faced him. He looked annoyed. “Watch where you’re going idiot!” Hikaru really hated him. “Ummm, if you weren’t so slow this wouldn’t have happened!” “Slow? You’re the one just covering up your mistake.” “Am not!” Suddenly laughter in the background was heard. They both turned to a boy with dark brown hair chuckling, “I haven’t seen you this agitated Ryuu. Who’s this girl anyway?” “A stupid idiot”, Ryuuki muttered under his breath. Hikaru said in annoyed tone, “I told you not to call me that.” “Hey, don’t be mean dude. I’m Hiroshi Aoyoma, and you are?” Hikaru replied, “Hotaru Mikawa.” “Wait, as in the Hotaru Mikawa, 2nd Alpha Student? Ryuu, is this the girl you mentioned?” Ryuusaki shook his head in disbelief while Hikaru raised her eyebrows, questioning the statement. She finally asked in a threathening tone, “So what have you both said about me, huh?” Ryuusaki answered coolly, “Just how someone like you is so stupid.” “Hey!” Hiro chuckled again. “Don’t mind him, he’s cynical about those kind of things. He left out the fact you were pretty.” “Uhhh…. Thanks.” “Haha, just saying the truth. Well anyway, let’s get going to the greenhouse.” Hiro whistles as the three of them walked away.

They finally reached the greenhouse. Madison was snuggling in Kaito’s arm. Kaito seemed like he is tolerating it the whole time. Both of them looked at the newcomers. Kaito’s face suddenly turned white. Hiro sneered “Ahaha. What’s this I see? We have ourselves a loveydovey couple.” Kaito pushes Madison aside. He stares particularly at Hikaru and exclaims, “It’s not what you think!” Hikaru and Ryuusaki didn’t care. Madison cooed, “Why, are we not a couple already?” Kaito said annoyed, “You’re delusional. You decided that on your own.” Madison was about to start a commotion when a sleepy looking girl popped out from the bush behind her. She said in a sleepy monotone, “Shut up. You’re disturbing my sleep!” Another girl comes running, “So that’s where you’ve been hiding Kira. Meanie, why did you leave me alone?” She stares at the girl blankly, “You took so long Melody….” Madison displeased that she wasn’t the center of attention any more, was about to make a commotion but she stopped herself.

As if on cue, Erik arrived. The first thing he did was to grab Hikaru’s hands together. He whispered, “Please keep our secret well.” Kaito felt a surge of jealously and let go of Madison’s arm. He swiftly went beside Hikaru and grabbed one of her hand back from Erik. He said in a gruff tone, “Why can’t you let that ordeal from yesterday go?” Erik rebottled, “Excuse me. I’m not a sore loser like you. We weren’t even talking about that.” “Why you little son of a ---“ Madison immediately screamed and her eyes are glowing at Kaito. “I don’t want you to hang out with her. We’re supposed to be engaged. Why do you keep pushing me away?!!!!” She began to sob a little bit. Hikaru in the middle of this conflict had about enough. She freed herself abruptly from the two guys’ clutches and gave scary stare. “Don’t include me in this stupid drama all of you.” She began to walk away when Madison burst. She Madison seized Hikaru’s hair and yanked it. Seeing his chance, Erik took hold of Kaito’s collar and angrily saying, “Don’t put me in the same class like you.” Kaito punched Erik in the face saying, “You embarrassed me once but I won’t let you go this time.” They started a fistfight. The whole room began to be chaotic as Kira and Melody started finishing their quarrel earlier.

Hiroshi teased Ryuusaki once more. “Wow Ryuu, no wonder you got curious. Look at that scary glare. Hahaha too bad you have A LOT of competition.” Ryuusaki was little bit annoyed, “I told you I’m not curious at all. Gosh, you and your runway imagination. “Whatever man. You don’t need to lie. Ohhh, look at how the fights are getting intense.” He was highly amused with the ongoing fights that he started to emcee everything. Ryuusaki just looked with disgust at how beneath everyone was from his level. Aiumi and Naomi, the last of the Alpha student entered the room. Aiumi saw the mess they made so she tried to get them to stop and clean. But no one was budging, she was clearly about to go ballistic. She calmed herself down and began looking for the megaphone in the cabinet. Naomi went over to help Hikaru but was also captured in Madison’s grip.

Finally, Principal Schezella entered and was appalled by the scene. This just aggravated her more after the food fight incident that she snapped. She got out her violin and played an abrupt tune which stopped them in their tracks. She shouted in a sharp tone, “Excuse me. Are you actually the Alpha Students we carefully chose?!” She was about to continue her sermon when the glass from the roof suddenly broke. Some of the shards hit them but what really bothered them was the sound of an ugly roar. In a flash of a moment, a hideous monster appears once again.

End of chapter 3 part 3.
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Sorry for the extremely long wait everyone! I haven't written in awhile so it was hard to get back on rhythm. I hope the conversations aren't too confusing. I tried to make this part as fun as possible to make up for the delay.

PLEASE COMMENT! I would love to hear what you have to say. I use those to improve on the story. You guys can be harsh.
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I will promise to read it tomorrow cause I'm only passing by and I'll need to read the older chapter to remember the events and where it stopped, for now, gonna sleep, still have classes tomorrow. Thanks for updating zani, love you guys, gonna read it tomorrow
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Thanks for the update! what I really like was the characters and how you introduced them but I think, most of them almost have the same attitude toward things but the scene where you place all of them really shows something, like a beginning of something special. Over-all I think that the story is a little slow-paced but the events are really something that enhances the story. I like it! Waiting for the next one
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I actually think the story is slow as well.... but getting enough exposure time for each character is a feat. The next time I make a story, I have to keep that in mind... to just use a few characters. Anyway, the next 3 parts might be exciting then it will go back to being slow. The reason for why is because:

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Really? Then can't wait for it. Hope I can read it immediately Stupid school.....
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I know what you mean. Stupid school, I can't write..... waaaaaah

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Wait, I take that back.... I forgot the next chapter is an explanation chapter so its not going to be that exciting.
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Still ok, its an update to one of my fab story
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Really? Wow, you flatter me too much. If you like, I'll inbox you my other stories (if ever I do start writing them) :))
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observantzani wrote:

I actually think the story is slow as well.... but getting enough exposure time for each character is a feat. The next time I make a story, I have to keep that in mind... to just use a few characters. Anyway, the next 3 parts might be exciting then it will go back to being slow. The reason for why is because:



KYAAAAA~!!! Continuee the story continue the storyyyyyy~~~~ <3
lololololol!
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Tsukishima_Amu wrote:


observantzani wrote:

I actually think the story is slow as well.... but getting enough exposure time for each character is a feat. The next time I make a story, I have to keep that in mind... to just use a few characters. Anyway, the next 3 parts might be exciting then it will go back to being slow. The reason for why is because:



KYAAAAA~!!! Continuee the story continue the storyyyyyy~~~~ <3
lololololol!


Thanks Utau! You guys really motivate me to do so. I know I'm suppose to post the next part but I'm busy as hell to search for a picture. I'll probably put it up next week. So look for forward to that
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O-OMG....YOU RMB ME!?!?!?!?!? *CRIES*
I haven't come online on CR for like....a decade already i think...lolololol! CR seems new to me suddenly...ahahhaa!
I am really glad this group is still active! ^ ^

Oh! And I saw my character being stated that it will appear in Chapt 3-4! OMG! *faints in happiness* lolololol! Thank you very muchh!!!! ^^
I will continue to support you and look forward to the other chapters!!!! =D
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Tsukishima_Amu wrote:

O-OMG....YOU RMB ME!?!?!?!?!? *CRIES*
I haven't come online on CR for like....a decade already i think...lolololol! CR seems new to me suddenly...ahahhaa!
I am really glad this group is still active! ^ ^

Oh! And I saw my character being stated that it will appear in Chapt 3-4! OMG! *faints in happiness* lolololol! Thank you very muchh!!!! ^^
I will continue to support you and look forward to the other chapters!!!! =D


Of course, I remember you. Anyone who managed to lurk here for some time is someone who I'll remember.
Hahaha, I guess you're pretty excited to see that. I think your first appearance will be around 4.3. Not too sure since I haven't written anything yet. And thanks for the support! I appreciate every ounce of it
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