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Posted 12/3/11



It's nice to know that everyone receives nice positive comments about their graphics. But there is always room for improvement, no?
◘ For this "game", you have to say one thing the graphics above you can improve on, whether it be the whole background he/she uses or the location of his/her little copyright symbol; it doesn't have to be anything big. After commenting, post one graphic (it can be banner, profile, avatar, render, typography, anything) so that the next poster can comment on yours!


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Posted 12/3/11 , edited 12/3/11
ill start
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Posted 12/3/11
the graphic looks very....hmmm...i guess ill say "dark".(idk how to explain. . . . :X)
the face shouldnt be covered or however you say it and "I Support is covering the dude's face.
Try to erase some parts softly or something. o.o;;
Also the text seems plain, but not thaaattt plain. depends on the program you use.
Also, the light textures you used...did you put it on overlay or something? o_o
ANNDDD (sorry for so much critism. >_< I KNOW IM VERYYYYYY NUBBBB i have no right to critisize this ;A;)
I like the purple. but the red doesnt match. Try working on the color scheme. Either make it purple and black and white, or a different color since the other colors disturb the graphic.
sorry if im harsh. >__< tell me to be more nicer on it if you want. ;D


SHIELD YOUR EYES.!! (i warned you)
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Posted 12/3/11
I'm not really good at judging. But i'll try. XD
I'm not sure if you trying to make the bubble thing to be in the front, but on cinema films, try to erase the background of the bubbles...you know like make it more popping out.
Also, it's really hard to see the "a" in "Jessica"
also the shiny looking thing, make more real like how you did those other shiny looking thing. (:


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Posted 12/3/11 , edited 12/3/11
its very obvious to see what textures u used.. and perhaps some better blending would be nice? ^^

lol my contest avi:



p.s. @ Fashion: dw about it, that banner was SUPER OLD xD
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Posted 12/3/11
before i say anything rlly, U FORGOT UR COPYRIGHT xD

my wallpaper :3 looks blurry here but there is a bigger version
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Posted 12/3/11
i actually like this except:
-the characters are "glowing", but for the outline i think you should first darken the sides then glow it. (idk how to explain ._.;;)
-text is actually placed good but the reflection is....a bit "wierd". idk how to explain but maybe its just me. ;A; and i think the text should have an outer glow.
-the texture should be placed near the characters.(my opinion.)
-the texture/brush on the girl's clothes(the text and a bit of the squares)....is kind of distracting once you look at it even thought it doesnt stand out.
-it looks like you used a building (texture) i think..? nice idea, but i think you should have placed it closer to the main attraction.
-to make the graphic not look so blurry and all..."dull" like...hmm or simpler way to explain "LQ"..try using contrast to make it not so plain looking. Also try messing with the colors...not too much though.
i liked:
-the choice of font.
-the light is focusing on the boy.
-mosaic effect.
-that the wallpaper is mostly "blue".
-the copyright isnt HUGEEEEE. :DD
well this is in my opinion. i dun think the size of the wallpaper effected anything thought. :O unless my eyes are decieving me. o.e



this is a sig i made for fun. i liked the pic so i wanted to use it.
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Posted 12/4/11
its a cute siggy :3 but if u sharpened all those textures encircling her, u might wanna soften parts of it slightly cuz i can see the pixels clearly ^^
idk if u intended to do that but ... yeah xD

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Posted 12/5/11 , edited 12/5/11
OwO
Okays SO.
-the girl with yellow hair (is that flandre. o.o;) her hair is distracting me. o.e
-good choice of font.
-the animation you did isnt really noticable...but it doesnt distract anything.
-the girl on the right..it looks like you didnt want her ..in the graphic as much but idk why but it look like shes staring at me while her other part of her body is "CUT" off. :DD idk why it freaks me out. QQ.
overall i liked it. :O 85 / 100



this graphic was a pain in da ass. i hate this one.
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Posted 12/5/11 , edited 12/5/11
i think this avi is rlly cool *o*
- (ok where does everyone get that enigma texture lol -.-)

this is just me, but if theres stuff going on at the top of the avi, there should be at least something at the bottom too, which right looks completely blank . .

and yes fashion, that was flandre xD. and i got another flandre! x3:
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oo this is pretty too but i think the ribbon could be another color and the gradient for the test could be yellow and red or something. Also idk why but somethings missing. o.o;;

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Posted 12/6/11
i think the beams dosen't really fit there and oso i think there is sumthing missing and u shud put summthing too the left n oso i think u shud put ur copyright sum where else becuase it kind spoils the banner .


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Posted 12/7/11


Okay.
1. I like the picture you chose, but the color editing didn't turn out so well. The contrast between the pink-ish skin and the rest of the picture (which was mostly blue) didn't quite work for me.

2. Try using some more textures in the background. Experiment and play with textures. Its quite fun actually, and makes the gfx look more professional.

3. Too long of a copyright. And it was too noticeable.

4. I like the fonts! But its too much blue. Next time try making the fonts pop by using the red-ish color at the top of her dress to mix with the blue.

5. Overall, too much of the same color (blue).

6.I'm not quite sure what exactly is at the top of the avvie (the squiggly brown thing), but its kind of distracting since it doesn't quite seem to serve a purpose.

Overall I like your style, just keep trying and learning, and you'll have some great gfx!
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Okay, here is mine. Simple I know.






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Posted 12/7/11
Umm the words on top of the girlie is distracting...The texture is a tad bit plain too.. Blend in some C4D textures or some cute textures :3 whichever would fit more~
Recent freebie i made..
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Posted 12/7/11
i can see u added some nicer textures and a little psd coloring ^_^. Anyway, at first glance, the little colorful bottom picture with the "boom" struck me as odd a little. adding a texture with large frame-like squares might be good on it ^^

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