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Posted 12/7/11
the overlayed text next 2 the galz's face does not fit in and i think the blueish scheme on the left does not really fit in to the picture and also kind of spoil it

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Posted 12/8/11
owo;;
-the color scheme is distracting and its too strong.
-the white circles could be fixed smaller, or placed differently (i find it distracting..idk about you..;A;")
-the avatar seems simple. (idk if thats good or not)
-your copyright seems to have to many words..o-o


okay this is resized A LOT. so yea.
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Posted 12/8/11 , edited 12/8/11

wew xD colorful ~
But at first glance, the fading bird at the center-ish kinda struck me as odd ..

something probably feels awkward about this avi:
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Posted 12/9/11
the "acen" text is like popping out a lot lol. flatten it (:

random profile i made, it might be a profile freebie xD:

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Posted 12/10/11 , edited 12/10/11
For the boy's hand, you should try to erase it from being colored over the shaded area. And the brighteness, its too like distracting, I mean like its basically drawing attention from the actually main point. So What I mean is, try to balance out the lighting.
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Posted 12/10/11
Get rid of the parts of the picture that are covering the top of the text. I can hardly read it xD. Also, maybe have a thin border around the letters.

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Posted 12/18/11
get rid of the text on the middle and sharpen your pixelize thing and maybe make the avi a little brighter and add border around the avi ._.
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Posted 12/20/11
Try not to make it too bright, or you won't be able to see the text nor the image you're using.

Posted 12/28/11 , edited 12/28/11
The yellow ribbon seems to block everything ><
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Posted 12/29/11


1-I think the texture is a tad bit obvious..Maybe blending in some more cutesy textures..
2-The pink line stroke thing is distracting....
3-Your copywrite should be small.Maybe using 04b03,Skinny,Visitor,Wendy,any pixel font.The good font size would be 7/8 with the"Force auto-hinter"(GIMP) on.
4-For most Non-Anime avatars they should be 200x500 but its okay if its 200x600 ^^~
5-It kinda lookie plain..Add somme PSDs~

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Posted 12/30/11
Lol you don't have to quote them. XD
The first one is better than the second and third one. Try using a different font, because its hard to read what you wrote. When you are using lines or dots, try to erase some of the areas of the skin. (: or the whole body itself.
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Posted 12/30/11
hmm i think it would look much cooler ifu put more psd coloring into them ^^ and also its obvious to see what u did to the "feeling this" decoration (if thats wat u wanted tho, oops srry xD)

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(⊙▂⊙✖ )Try using a different font for the smirkers., because the s is not noticible.
And try to cover the extra arm . XD
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Posted 2/4/12
its a bit tooo simple and i think you shud erase the background and add more textures . overall its good especially the shape and font type
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Posted 2/7/12
If I erase the background it'll look black and the background is actually textures.

For yours its simple and neat; but hard to read for the cursive part.
The phone doesn't really match the theme; you should have change the decoration to orange/yellow like your image.
Try not to make the text in the box look clumped up; like there's no room.
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