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Posted 2/24/12
The render is a bit "rough" (the outline) and you should try to use a soft brush to erase the ..cut or w/e of the elbow and the green...thingy...? and some of the parts that look .. sharpened / rough. rendering rl pics are hard tho..especially for me. .__.
the shadow or w/e you call it / clone could be placed somewhere better..
the copyright is blurry. and the color doesnt stand out to me as much as the gurl but i suggest making it another color.
could have used a psd, but its not so bad.
the background should be colorful.
the "Baby" texture is blurry and in my opinion it kinda ruins the graphic.
in the top, theres some space thats empty. seems to me like the clone is used to cover that space? o-o; well i personally think that the space doesnt bother me as much as the stretched (i think) clone.
sorry if my opinions are a bit too harsh or something. .__.;; im not trying to be mean or anything. > <



quick freebie i made..... looks quite messy to me. ._.

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Posted 2/28/12
in my opinion i think that the text "Phantomhive" i cant see it that much the rest looks good too



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Posted 2/28/12 , edited 2/28/12
9.8 I can't really say anything about it. But try learning to use variety of different fonts. (:
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Posted 3/16/12
he copyright should have glow of purple or something, but it doesnt ruin the graphic in my opinion sooo idk.
-avatar seems sharpened a lot.
-the blur behind the text prob is unnecessary. . .maybe..
-avatar seems plain
- the girls legs (left) seems dark and then on top she has bright skin..o_o
-the yellow is blinding my eyes. Q_Q



weee i killed the colors. yay for me.
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Posted 3/17/12 , edited 3/30/12
lol its nice :3 but i feel like the complete purpleness on the left side needs to be changed?.. xD. with the orange effects ~ it would look rly consistent and nice , in my opinion (:



Edit: @chokopokki: there is a copyright
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Posted 3/20/12
WOWZHA. IT LOOKS BEAUTIFUL~ The font is very small though :| I dont really see a copywritte either... /shot/


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Posted 3/21/12
It looks simple. You should try to change the color of the girl to blend her in .
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Posted 3/31/12
It's cute -W- LOL

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Posted 4/1/12 , edited 4/1/12
LOL WTF IS THAT PERSON DOING. O_O;;
-the text could be a less cuter font. and the gradient ....hmm....in my opinion it doesnt match.
-the c4d doesnt match with the gif.
-the right is sooo blank in my opinion.
-eggroll should be either orange or something .idk that just bothered me idk bout you.




now this is old btw. i find the "crack" brush unnecessary. anyone else think so? :O and the enigma and the text thing part of the c4d... -.-;; whut was i thinking. >8'D -note: angelyoumu14 is me btw. i did not steal rofl. o-o;;
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Posted 4/1/12 , edited 4/1/12
LOL @ CHOCO'S BANNER

and omg i seen that kana creation banner, im surprised to see its done by u o_o so epic looking
..if i had to say something to help improve.. it looks a bit cloudy compared to other gfx xD. ehh not that it matters much b/c i love it :/ . but try to increase contrast or something and see how it turns out ^_^
lol btw that enigma text is everywhere xD

crappy old banner, ik, its like downgraded compared to my works now
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Posted 4/3/12
Lol. I can see your works improved a lot. Well everyone starts something like that... like me lol. XD


just a freebie i made . . . idk when rofl.
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Posted 4/3/12
you should move the all part over a little. I really have nothing to say actually. your gfx is soo cute. (: I know i got worser. :X

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Posted 4/17/12
oh the all text was actually together with all night!

- text needs to be ..fixed in my opinion.
- the 10 system texture part could be erased.
- the blank filled pattern thing on the top and bottom could be changed or taken off. in my opinion it doesnt really match.

made this like..uh long time ago prob. lol. it looks veryyyy sharpened. xP
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Posted 4/19/12
it look blury around the text. And the lighting is a little too bright.
You should add some musical notes.
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Posted 4/22/12
its a lil to simple and it feels empty on the top

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