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Posted 4/23/12

The images looks confusing. What part of if are you trying to focus on? if its that pink girl, then you should remove any decorations on her. But if you want to do fading images, lower the capacity of the image, and erase the decorations on them.
As for the text, "Text" the second one you be less opacity. Basically, I think you put tooooo much decorations.
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Posted 5/7/12
-the render looks ..well the outline mostly looks "rough"...idk how to explain. >_<;;
-the text "Prabashi" it looks fine to me but the "black and white 2" could have been placed somewhere better or a different font.


made this like ....a long time ago prob...well around when i made this account i guess...? o.o
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Posted 5/13/12
Yes, I didn't really did that; whoever rendered it was horrible at it. and well i was too lazy to renderize it. Where would you have put it?

Well it looks fine, it matches the theme.But I think it would have been better if there were some grays in there. The gray part just shows up more, I think its better if you balanced them out. :D

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Posted 5/16/12
i like it but it needs a little more color, and text try a different font


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Posted 5/18/12
I think you should lower the opacity of the other text, or you can just erase the second bunnies and just keep two only. The credit should be on the side. The picture on the top, I guess you should add a little bit more of that kind, so that it won't be the only one on the image.

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Posted 5/23/12
-why not try to make the text bigger?
-i cant say anything about the colors cause idk whut the original looks like so i guess it is okay..?
-try cropping the image a bit unless that is the mandatory size.



my first c4d graphic with a rl person lol. i think..

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Posted 5/25/12
oh wow xD looks amazing ~

hmm i can't find much, but maybe you can make it more vivid looking by using a red-ish gradient (in color dodge mode) xD

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Posted 5/26/12

The text and stuff looks amazing. But it looks like as if the photos and decos are low quality.
But it's better than mines. >_>

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Posted 6/4/12
simple simple<3
thought i think if you made it a bit brighter it prob look better.

this is old..prob.. lol. i think i made this in march.. or something
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Posted 8/22/12

Everything you do it perfect.
but, I think that the light is a little too bright.
also the left part looks kind of plain.
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