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Posted 1/18/08
The balloon made of rubber and air
As fast as it can
Climbs the stairs
It floats toward the door
Looking out the window, toward the shore
For the balloon wishes to be free
But it cannot leave and it cannot touch
It can only yearn for what is out of reach,
As the sun sets and the moon rises
The balloon trys to reach the brightest
Point in the sky
It slowly pulls forward
Drifting as it goes where it wishes
Out the window and into the night
Reaching up toward the broken stars
But then the sun starts rising
And the stars say goodbye
It slowly floats down
Back to earth
Its domain
And into the ocean where it has been claimed

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if its good i'll put up others
Posted 1/18/08
wow, great job u really should post more in my opinion
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kagura4 wrote:

wow, great job u really should post more in my opinion


ty very much
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