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Posted 1/18/08
The balloon made of rubber and air
As fast as it can
Climbs the stairs
It floats toward the door
Looking out the window, toward the shore
For the balloon wishes to be free
But it cannot leave and it cannot touch
It can only yearn for what is out of reach,
As the sun sets and the moon rises
The balloon trys to reach the brightest
Point in the sky
It slowly pulls forward
Drifting as it goes where it wishes
Out the window and into the night
Reaching up toward the broken stars
But then the sun starts rising
And the stars say goodbye
It slowly floats down
Back to earth
Its domain
And into the ocean where it has been claimed

by johnny l
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Posted 1/18/08
The New Year is coming
It is coming here
The New Year that I love
That I hold so dear
My resolution is simple
This time around
Is simply to be as happy as I am now
When The New Year comes back to our town
Now that would be something great
Now the New Year is finally here
I’ll see you later this time Next year
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The one that helps
Is the one that doesn’t start
For the one that starts is the one who hasn’t begun
The ones who don’t start are the ones you love
They help you and will carry you far
From the sea all the way up to a shining star
Because that’s what good people do
They will form your crew
And they will help you stay true
Because that’s what good friends do
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The Grand blue bird would sing in spring
Yet it wouldn’t sing in winter
That left me wondering why
It didn’t leave to where it wasn’t cold
Then suddenly it was shown
Like the Christmas star high up on the tree
Up at the top the blue bird lay
Looking down at our Christmas cheer
Not sing not dancing or prancing
But simply smiling.
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No single person can ever hold you up
It takes many pillars of faith and virtue
To keep a person standing true
Even if you are alone
Someone will always be there
No one is ever isolated
Friendship is often underrated
So keep on loving
And keep on caring
Because that is the most important thing you can do for someone
And keep them living under the sun.
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Posted 1/18/08
You make me feel unlike any other girl every has
You make my heart race
Even when I grow up there will still be a trace
Of how you made me feel
Because wherever I go
I will always remember
The most amazing girl in the world
Who made my heart race
From sunrise to sunset
From right to wrong
As long as I thought about you
I knew I would stay happy and sane
For as shy as you want to be
And for all I see
Is the most beautiful girl in the world
Who is worth more to me than the most marvelous pearl
No one in the world is perfect
But in this small simple world no one is closer to heaven
And you are the reason I love life

dedicated to a girl i like but she rejected me
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In a way
i wish I couldn’t sway
Because it makes me feel like I’m being served on a heating try
What I’m trying to say
Is simply hey
Let’s do this my way
And each day as I lay
On top of my bed of hay
I realize that the flame in some peoples hearts
Shall never start
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When u say up
I say down
You say left
I say all around
We are different
But we are the same
For we are friends
And friendship doesn’t end
It continues and we continue
On happy or sad
Based on what our friendship has had
I know it will not end
Because friendship is all I have

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The dragon flys up there in the sky
Right next to the clouds that are shadowed in the night
But when the sun is out
The clouds shout
But on other days or maybe nights
The bright lightning lights up the evening dusk
Slowly burning a right through the darkness
It is in a test
A test that has no test
Even if it last for only a few seconds
It is a sight and power to be reckoned
Rain, hail and snow
All reside in the endless sky
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Whoever breaks down from Heavens height
Is not always the one who wishes to flee into the night
Maybe they wish to stay in sight
Maybe we are not always in the right
And when we when we break our cocoons we go into flight
We shall go into the light
That’s how it will always be
And we shall always be seen
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Posted 1/18/08
this is all made by me johnathan q.huy Luc so if u steal it i will kick your butt
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Posted 1/18/08
and anyone can use this page for short poems
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Posted 1/18/08
The first poem with the balloon seems like it's just a really long sentence instead of a poem..

I like the second, it seems full of hope for the future

The third poem is like a riddle.

The fifth one is really sweet ^^

And I'm sorry to hear about that girl, it's a beautiful poem~

Oh just to let you know (and everyone else out there), poetry does not only have rhymes, it also has symbolism (like using smilies and metaphors) and other devices. To write a poem, you need to know what comprises it first.

If you're working on rhymes, try and use a meter to make the poem flowing. (just remembered, Shakespeare uses the iambic pentameter in his works etc etc)

p.s. Try to "edit" your previous post instead of posting again and again.
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Posted 1/21/08
i write my poetry deppending how i feel at that time.. you know? well i hope that you all injoy this as for all you might think me emo but i know how i am. just take it as is thank you come again.....



drop's of blood roll off of me again
as my tear's fall there is nothing
left for me to do.
i sit here,
i lick my wounds
i cry a little more.
but this battle with in is winning.
what ever shall i do?
this is getting old.
there are always changes in
how it
actat's me
it get's me as a i sleep
it get's me when i'm awake
it try's to eat my soul
but my soul has been gone a long time now
so i sit here
i lick my wound's
i cry a little more...
but the blood
it start's to flow faster
it's a river i tell you
i'm alone again
no one to help me
yet again
what did i do?
what did i do for you to hate me so?
i have so much pain as it is.
must you push more of the pain from,
others?
must you?
damn it.
i sit here licking my wound's
i look up and see there sun light today
i look down and see that i am
dead
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Posted 1/22/08
monkey.......thats a great poem but kinda sad
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