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My manga
Posted 12/16/11 , edited 1/29/12
Hi!
I am currently working on manga named Guardians and I am 100% an amateur. I only do this in my spare time and because I love fantasy and love to to draw. The first page of the prologue is done. English is not my mother tongue so there might be some grammar errors! ATM the grammar is being corrected by a Scottish friend but seems like he does not have much spare time so that is gonna take a looong time before it is corrected so if there is any native speaker who would want to help me in correcting the grammar in my story, I would be really happy, you can PM me if you are interested. I gladly take critism in order to make the manga even better. For the tones and highlights I use manga studio EX4.0. Please enjoy!

Genre


Synopsis


Characters

Angels


Wisely Shin


Odah Shin


Kanh Rynart


Kingzley Kanh


Alma Ald, Prince of Labunagaan


Oruka Sheema


Abbadon: Angel of Penalty


Grudy Ireenal


Draconis


Caudata


The four first Prayers in the world


Spiritual guardians


The Mother Tree


Front page is finished, I only need some coloring :



(when reading the manga please read from right to left, the Japanese way)

The manga: Prologue, first page

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Posted 12/16/11
very nicely done! I'm interested in seeing more!
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Posted 12/16/11
awesome!!
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26 / F / Heaven
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Posted 12/16/11
It looks good. What software are you using for the tones and highlights?
Posted 12/17/11
Serenity_07: For the tones and highlights I use manga studio EX4.0
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Posted 12/17/11
Oh nice, that's what I thought.
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21 / F / Under your skin.
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Posted 12/18/11
That's very good.


I didn't know we had mangakas in CR.
Keep it up.

Posted 12/19/11
Congrats! I just read it very well put together Im no expert but, I will look forward to seeing how the story evolves
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20 / M / a dimension where...
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Posted 12/21/11
Been waiting lols :3 !!!!!
Posted 12/26/11
Very, very nice.
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Posted 12/27/11
Definately interested kinda want more right now....Nice job
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Posted 1/7/12
that was a great storyline and WOW!!!!
LOVE your art it AWESOME
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Posted 1/10/12
bravo. your art is very nice, especially the toning, it's amazing ( * w * )b
with just one page, you left us wanting for more
as for the grammar, yeah some work needed, and the plot is cool (I've been reading some of this)...

sooooo... hope to see more from you young sensei
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Posted 1/12/12
That's really cool, have you thought about making it a web comic?
Posted 1/13/12

bangladeath wrote:

That's really cool, have you thought about making it a web comic?


No I haven't since I don't think anyone besides my friends would read it :3
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