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Then Luna went over to Eli. "umm excuse me but could you help me" Luna said
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Then Luna went over to Eli. "umm excuse me but could you help me" Luna said


"what now?" Eli said.

(getting off my lazy side and putting in color ;o)
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(getting off my lazy side and putting in color ;o)

"well could you help me I'm kinda lost" Luna said
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(why the heck did i write /link when i wanted to write /style ._. ...)
"What? Eli asked.
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(idk)
"i'm lost" Luna repeated
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(idk)
"i'm lost" Luna repeated


(I ALMOST DID IT AGAIN D;.. but with /url ._.)
"Don't you have a map or something?" Eli asked.
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"am i supposed to have one?" Luna said
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"am i supposed to have one?" Luna said


"Well its easier if you get lost around here a lot." Eli said.

(FINISHED CHPT 1.. NOW TO UPLOAD IT AND ADD LINK)
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"I see...where can I get a map?" Luna asked
(awesome i'll read it when you do)
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"I see...where can I get a map?" Luna asked
(awesome i'll read it when you do)


(LINK IS UP >D)
"Reception room. But I bet you'll get lost just to get there." Eli said he took out a map from his pocket.
"You can have mine.. I don't really need it." He said.
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(XD. btw you spelled though at the end wrong)
"are you sure" Luna said
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(XD. btw you spelled though at the end wrong)
"are you sure" Luna said


(scmaskojashmls ._.)
"Yeah, I dont need it." Eli said.
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(you should really get someone to proof read the chapters before you post them.)
"oh ok. Thank you. I guess i owe you" Luna said
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(you should really get someone to proof read the chapters before you post them.)
"oh ok. Thank you. I guess i owe you" Luna said


(Im alone at home, dad doesn't know english and mom at work. YEAH... perfect. and ima single child)
" "No problem." Eli said and walked away.
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(ask a friend if you could just send into to their e-mail account so they can proof read it. you don't need a person who's at your house)
Luna looked at the map for a moment "wait.....to use it don't I have to know where I am" Luna said
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