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EmPtInEsS

You know that feeling i told you about?
the feeling of emptiness
the one where i want and need something
but dont know what
well ive got it all figured out now
its you...
remember the first day you told em how you felt?
i know ill never forget
i was in a state of shock at first
not that i could blame you
you did tell me it would be shocking
when i got over it i thought
awwwww how sweet
we chatted for about three hours after that
then you said you had to go
thats when i started feeling empty
when you werent around
when i see you at school
my day brightens
when you talk to me
my heart sings
bu thtne i see you with her
and i think about what you told me
but it doesnt make a difference
cuz you cna alwayz change your mind
you can never predict the twists and turns of life
i guess i cna already tell who your going to choose
maybe thats why it hurts so much
i see her all over you
shes clinging to your arm
like a parasite
like a leech
like she owns you
and that emtiness turns into a hole
a hold that only you cna fill in
a hole that keeps growing
it grows pityless
until i cant take it anymore
until the depths of it drown me
leaving my face soaked with tears
until my lungs are crushed
and i cant breathe
leaving me gasping for air
but ull never know this
because it doesnt show until im alone
and therews no one there to hold me
and the impact hits hardest
cuz i alwayz dreamed of being in your arms
but my dream is then shattered by a nightmare
a vision of her in your arms
and i wak up sobbing
crying like theres no tomorrow
because without you
there is no reason for tomorrow
no reason for my existence
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Posted 7/4/08
^^the poems are relli good up there ty
i relli love making haiku poems like
MHMMM
let me try to remmeber a part of my friends haiku

when it comes to letting you go
its always a no
surely we will never be apart
because you will have my heart

I forgot the rest lmfaooo
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Posted 7/4/08
I don't think very many people in this thread actually knows what a haiku is.
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Posted 7/22/08
The Life Of The Wife Ended With A Knife

Closing my eyes tight,
Here i thought that you were my light.
Your hitting you said was for my own good,
But your acting not like any man should.

I have proof of your so called love for me,
Theres cuts, and bruises that are so easy to see.
I wish at night for my end, praying for this time,
Dear God I wish for my death, Please give me a sign.

So day after day I let you hit me,
Deep down inside, the pain that you will see.
Month after Month, Year after year,
All of this 'love' is causing my fear.

I'd Call for help but you will see,
You would hit and break me.
So I lay in bed by you, I was your wife,
but in the end I killed myself with a knife.

I wonder what you thought about, when you saw,
I wonder if you felt the pain, or even about the law.
I hope you go to jail for this, I have something planned for you,
In your top draw is the blood knife, You a through.
Posted 7/22/08
wow... i love all the poems...
Posted 7/22/08 , edited 7/22/08
heheh... this poem is by me.... (nikkilovesanime)

there her loved one stood,
just a few feet away.
yet she could do nothing,
but listen to the leaves and branches sway.

her heart broke,
with the sight of her dear.
she could not believe what she was seeing,
even though it was all crystal clear.

"he could not love me"
said she with tears in her eyes.
oh, how the words hurt,
how her heart cries.


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Posted 7/22/08
The Sammich

I have a sammich
One that's very tasty
It's pretty delicious
Though it's making is hasty

But what is a sammich?
I thought you may want to know
A sandwhich, my friend
But it's misspelled, though

But there's much more to it
"What?" I hear you ask
It can walk, it can talk
It can wear a mask

So if you called it
An ordinary sandwich
It would be upset
But you'll probably never meet it
So don't fret

Now i'm sure you're wondering:
"What is it for?"
I'm glad you asked
It brakes the law

Yes, you heard right
It robbs, it kills,
and many more things
When his tea is spilled

For you see, when it spills
The sammich goes berserk
Doing crime after crime,
and then goes to work.

So that's the tale of the sammich,
Although it's poorly wirtten
You can tell so because
this last part doesn't rhyme


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Posted 7/23/08
This is "A Life Poem", it draws my attention and so I decided to share with you guys.
I hope you guys like it and same applies to you.

Life can seem ungrateful and not always kind.
Life can pull at your heartstrings and play with your mind...
Life can be blissful and happy and free...
Life can put beauty in the things that you see...
Life can place challenges right at your feet...
Life can make good of the hardships we meet...
Life can overwhelm you and make your head spin...
Life can reward those determined to win...
Life can be hurtful and not always fair...
Life can surround you with people who care...
Life clearly does offer its Up and its Downs...
Life's days can bring you both smiles and frowns...
Life teaches us to take the good with the bad...
Life is a mixture of happy and sad...

So...

Take the Life that you have and give it your best...
Think positive, be happy let God do the rest...
Take the challenges that life has laid at your feet...
Take pride and be thankful for each one you meet...
To yourself give forgiveness if you stumble and fall...
Take each day that is dealt you and give it your all...
Take the love that you're given and return it with care...
Have faith that when needed it will always be there...
Take time to find the beauty in the things that you see...
Take life's simple pleasures let them set your heart free...
The idea here is simply to even the score...
As you are met and faced with Life's Tug of War

By: Heart & Soul Group

jx
Posted 7/23/08
ok heres mine

i love me and only me
i go shopping for hopping
i loove shirts i hate skirts
its may and i have to pay
i have to kill and go up the hill
im hot ur not...

so how did i do lol....this is a joke
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Posted 8/1/08
Please tell me what you think of this poem, I wrote it earlier today in memory of a very dear person to me so I want to know what you think and if it was good/bad.


I’ll see you again

This is not the end
Because I know
I’ll see you again
I don’t know were
I don’t know when
But I’ll live on
Until the end
And then
I’ll see you again

I’ll cherish the days
I’ll cherish the nights
Be happy to be alive
Live for the both of us
Because I know
You are out there somewhere
And you want me to be happy
So until I see you again
I’ll live on
Carry a smile and be happy
Knowing that whatever happens
You’ll be watching over me
And when the time comes
I’ll meet you with a smile
So that you know
It was you
Who made me feel happy
To be alive.
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Posted 8/3/08

LazyZombie wrote:

Please tell me what you think of this poem, I wrote it earlier today in memory of a very dear person to me so I want to know what you think and if it was good/bad.


I’ll see you again

This is not the end
Because I know
I’ll see you again
I don’t know were
I don’t know when
But I’ll live on
Until the end
And then
I’ll see you again

I’ll cherish the days
I’ll cherish the nights
Be happy to be alive
Live for the both of us
Because I know
You are out there somewhere
And you want me to be happy
So until I see you again
I’ll live on
Carry a smile and be happy
Knowing that whatever happens
You’ll be watching over me
And when the time comes
I’ll meet you with a smile
So that you know
It was you
Who made me feel happy
To be alive.


wow, amazing!!! i can actually 'feel' the peom...
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24 / F / Sweden
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Posted 8/4/08

saran11 wrote:


LazyZombie wrote:

Please tell me what you think of this poem, I wrote it earlier today in memory of a very dear person to me so I want to know what you think and if it was good/bad.


I’ll see you again

This is not the end
Because I know
I’ll see you again
I don’t know were
I don’t know when
But I’ll live on
Until the end
And then
I’ll see you again

I’ll cherish the days
I’ll cherish the nights
Be happy to be alive
Live for the both of us
Because I know
You are out there somewhere
And you want me to be happy
So until I see you again
I’ll live on
Carry a smile and be happy
Knowing that whatever happens
You’ll be watching over me
And when the time comes
I’ll meet you with a smile
So that you know
It was you
Who made me feel happy
To be alive.


wow, amazing!!! i can actually 'feel' the peom...


thank you so much, i was worried because i haven't written a poem in memory of someone before and i was afraid that it was bad
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24 / F / Sunny San Diego,...
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Posted 8/4/08
I would post one of my own....but i dont want anyone to steal my work...
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Posted 8/4/08
Flowers are nature
but nature is swine
its like a terranced evergreen with pine
acorns , trances of the wind
senses tingling in the mind
harmonious yet unspoken
to beset by awoken
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21 / F / Malaysia
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Posted 11/26/08
you are always there whenever i need you
you hear me laugh and cry
you are a friend, an angel to me
seeing you smile makes me delightful
seeing you cry makes me wanna die..
in deep silence i love you
in distance i adored you..
one day i braved myself to tell you
all my feelings towards you..
but all those feelings was crushed
vanished with the winds
as i saw you with her, holding hands
so happily together..
i put my crushed heart inside
in deep silence
in farthest distance
never want to reveal it
cause love really kills me softly..
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