Post Reply Can you help me on this poem? @.@''
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Posted 1/19/08 , edited 1/19/08
ok I got like the first sentences to this poem but I don't know how to like end it. xD'' So I'm just wondering if you guys can end it! ^_^ It doesn't matter how long or short it is,as long it's a poem that matters!! (somehow that sounded corny XD'')
BTW I'm not using your poems for anything, thats all I got to say.

"Hearing his voice every time I talk to him.
seeing him everyday makes me wonder..." Thats all I got ^.^''
Posted 1/20/08
Its not much but this is wat i came up with hope it helps

Hearing his voice every time I talk to him.
seeing him everyday makes me wonder
He makes me do things just on a simple whim
He makes my heart beat as loud as thunder

He is what fuels my every thought
The reason for my every word
Untold joys he has brought
He makes me soar like a bird
Posted 1/20/08
or u can change the secound last line to

He is what fuels my every thought
The reason for my every word
my heart he has finally caught
He makes me soar like a bird
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Posted 1/20/08
Whoa thats REALLY good!! O_O somehow it makes me get this weird feeling xD''' Really awesome! ^_^
Posted 1/21/08
thanx so did it help u
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