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Posted 4/3/12 , edited 4/3/12

SHOW US YOUR WORK!

PUT YOUR ORIGINAL IN A SPOILER BUT NOT YOUR EDITED
and we'll criticize it, saying what's good but what you can improve, all members can participate(:
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Posted 4/3/12
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Posted 4/3/12
TIME: 20 mins (I couldn't find any texture that would work well with the pic)
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I failed badly on this one orz
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Posted 4/4/12

I really like the text on that, but your copyright should be smaller or atleast less visible, i love your blendings!
try and add more brushes or something and i see you dont your colourings? try it out, it enhances your work
loads!<3
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I really like the text on that, but your copyright should be smaller or atleast less visible, i love your blendings!
try and add more brushes or something and i see you dont your colourings? try it out, it enhances your work
loads!<3


I was kind of unsure about the psd.. I thought it made the edit look strange .w." I think I should learn how to make psd enhance the edit.. not ruin it.. haha.. thanks for the critics, I appreciate it (now I know my weak points in editing.. I think .w.")
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Posted 4/4/12 , edited 4/6/12
TIME: 20 somthin minutes x)
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It's too simple -w-
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Posted 4/4/12 , edited 4/6/12
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Posted 4/6/12

There's alot missing, more brushes, more textures, more effects, more colouring.
try and spend time, and if you do, spend more time, cause i can see where you're coming from, but it will be alot more
better if your put more stuff into it, not cramp it in and make it look messy, it'll really be better (:
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Posted 4/6/12 , edited 4/6/12

i mean it's good, but the picture is low quality, always get a high quality picture, or atleast something that it's not blurry,
the text doesnt really work, with the black outline, also try and get a good brush, and mess with the blendings, it shows a
variety of effects, and use colouring aswell, boost your work by miles.
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Posted 4/6/12 , edited 4/6/12

it's really good, i like your animation, but if i was you i'd make it slower, cause it hurts my eyes looking long loool.
"key academy" text is good, but i dont really like the "support" like try leaving it as white and do a white outer glow,
other than that it's good, your vintage style is not really my style, so i dont know how to criticize your work, oh also your
copyright, but it in the corner or make it smaller, or change the opacity
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Posted 4/6/12 , edited 4/6/12

try a different font, or you can type in the number yourself, or ctrl+t (:
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Posted 4/6/12 , edited 4/22/12
TIME: Half An Hour I think O.o Don't remember
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TIME: 1hour i thinkXDD
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Posted 4/13/12
TIME: i dunno,between 15-35 minutes.. (_ _||)
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