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Eh...I broke down and decided to enter!

Title: “Miyu and Mitzy – Survivors of the Third Apocalypse!”
Story © 2012 Andrew Mitchell, all rights reserved.

“Miyu? Do you have a sec?” Mitsy asked, hiding behind an overturned desk. The two girls had just taken shelter in the Chemistry Lab – the zombie hordes right behind them. With a crash, a hand broke through the door’s glass pane, reaching for the latch.

“Hold that thought,” Miyu retorted, firing off a quick round and severing the undead limb in the process. “I’m a little busy saving our lives at the moment.”

“I know, but it’s just that…I don’t think I have what it takes to survive….”

“What do you mean?” came Miyu’s reply, with a cocked eye in her friend’s direction. “You’re with me, aren’t you? I have enough skills to get us both out of this mess.”

Mitzy’s eyes had a glazed look about them, and she seemed on the verge of tears. “But that’s just the point: I don’t have any special abilities of my own. I can barely hold a gun…my medical skills are worse than useless. I wouldn’t even be good for procreation – have you seen how flat my chest is?!”

Suddenly Miyu was before her, a soft smile touching her face. “Don’t worry…you can leave all that to me. We’re in this together.”


This one was really really good but it was more inspirational and funny than scary. BUT I LOVE IT ANYWAYS. I say if you expanded it and made it into a novel, I would buy it for sure.
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Am I Innocent

We had finally figured it out finally realized who or what had been doing it making the teachers and students die in blood. We rushed through the halls of our school the corridors we had dragged are feet in these past 5 years of elementary school and rushed through after the day was done never seemed longer. We counted the rooms turning hard into one the 8 of us all dressed alike in our simple uniforms blue jackets white shirts and dark blue pants or for the two girls’ long dark blue jumpers. The only thing making us different was our shoes our haircuts and the weapons we clutched. Bats, hockey sticks, desk legs even a metal pipe. There we saw him dressed like us over the body of our art teacher her chest covered in blood. Without a second thought we rushed forward and began to strike at him he was demon to us no longer a fellow student it was him or us. Once we realized he was no longer moving our heads went up and we looked down at him or what was left of his body. Then from a corner I heard the laughter looking to it I saw a young girl with more blood on her body then any of the bodies we had seen and she was smiling. She brushed back her blonde curls and looked at us with the sweetest eyes we knew that instant she had killed the others not this boy who we had seen looking at each body. She then spoke in an angelic tone, “Now mommy and daddy will have to buy me whatever I want I am an only child.” She would stand up and walk past us as we stood there unable to move for we had become like her murderers.
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Oh here! i'll try one! x') this sounds fun. i write novels alot..not with just 200 words though. eek! what a challenge. i guess i'll try to keep it short.

Title: -Clingy-

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it was too noisy. a short statured boy found himself twitching slightly from all of the noise around him. it was like static to his ears..he winched when a student pushed past him. acting like the boy was invisable.

You see. Loki was a very shy boy. often ignored. often overlooked. thus he disliked everything about his high school.

"Big Brother!" Loki shouted once he saw his figure of idol status. but his brother didn't seem to hear him...Loki whimpered. biting his lip. then he shouted again. this time giving a small wave. a signal to try and attract the attention of his brother.

But nothing. his brother. Naku, didn't give him any notice at all. too busy talking to a new 'girlfriend'....

At this moment. Loki's eye's widened..and he watched in silence as his brother walked away with the preppy girl.

Loki's mind railed with anxiety..fear of abandonment..
But then he just smiled. "What did i tell brother about needing anyone else over then me..? i guess another incident is going to happen now..he didn't listen." Loki mused to himself. thinking of just how he would dispose of the obstacle.
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There it is x') teehee~
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Akuyaku High

Random Student 1: "Did you hear about the rumors going around" Random Student 2: "You mean the rumors about what happens to the senior class of this school" Random Student 1: "Yeah I already discussed it with my parents that as soon as I graduate my junior year we are moving to another city" Random Student 3: "We might have to say a prayer for one of this year senior classes you know what happens on grad night" Random Student 1: "Yeah the hunt for them begins".
This is Akuyaku High where you are a pretty unlucky kid to get enrolled into this high school for when you become a senior you must be on your guard every waking moment you are in that school because if your not your liable to get your head cut off but when grad night comes around the hunt for the remaining seniors begin and the class who is targeted is Class C12 which consists of the majority of popular kids at the high school now that they are targeted what will happen now.
Sosuke: "So our class has been picked what can we say except we have sheer rotten luck" Kaname: "The principal is a cruel man to have chosen us" Karin: Does it really matter I mean were popular who would want to kill us" Sosuke: Do you really want that question to be answered " Karin: "Right good point but we just have to keep our guard up" Satoshi: But grad night is in one more week and most of us will die by then Eiji what do you think" *As Eiji was sitting there listening to some music ignoring the whole situation he notices that everyone was looking at him* Eiji: "Ok why are you all looking at me" *As a fist went upside his head* Vicki: "BAKA we are the targeted class of seniors" Eiji: Sosuke: "This is serious the rest of the seniors will be after us when that bell rings we are all fair game and the principal and staff must turn a blind eye meaning they cannot do anything about it what do we do when that bell rings" Satoshi: "The Logical explanation is to stick together" *As the students all looked at each other they shook their heads in agreement*
As the bell rung for the dismissal of class a few of the students didn't listen so 3 of them left from the group as one was going down the stairs someone pushed her from behind as she fell breaking every bone in her body the tragic part was she was still alive but a random student stood over her and cut her wide open revealing all of her intestines with a grin on the students face he walked away as if nothing happened, the other 2 were together as a student saw the two run together he threw a knife at them as a knife impaled one of them in the back and she fell to the ground as the other person was running she was screaming out to her classmate as the classmate kept running he ignored her cries ad the last thing she said to him before he was out of sight was I Love You, as the student went up to her body he took the knife out of her back and jabbed the knife right through her skull it was so powerful that it actually impaled the ground, as the last one was running down hallway after hallway he saw the exit as a sign of relief came upon his face as he was leaving a female student was standing in the way as he kept running the female student blocked his path as she had a broken glass and slit his throat with blood gushing from his neck he fell to the ground and he was so close to the exit the only thing showing was his feet as the blood ran out like a stream onto the pavement what is this weird ritual where seniors kill seniors only time will tell

I WILL CONTINUE WITH PART 2 IN A BIT JUST TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK
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Tough, but I shaved it down to 200 words! This is a really interesting challenge. If I won, I'd just skip the premium membership and go for the goodies Ah, well... Here goes! I didn't count the title stuff in the word count, BTW.

Blind
By Kandid/Goodbyes/whatever

“Lilly, are you sure your glasses are in here?” I called as I sifted through piles of ancient books that hadn’t seen the library’s upper floor in over fifty years. The old place was eerily dark and silent, and the only light I had to search by so far was that of the moon.
“I think so.” Lilly started toward me but tripped on an old stool and ended up facedown on the ground. She groaned and rolled over. "I can't see a thing!"
I pushed some fallen books aside. Moving to examine the ground next to it, I walked right into a cold metal cord. “I found the light switch!”
“No!” She shrieked, but it was too late. The light was on, revealing two bleeding, empty eye sockets. The girl tackled me to the ground with surprising strength and held me there.
Tears streamed down her face now. “It isn’t fair! Why can you see? Why do I have to be ugly?”
The last thing I ever saw, I saw too late: A rusty nail flying toward my head and the toddler-like glee on the girl’s face as she brought it to my eye.


Eeeeeeee! Don't mind the odd writing... Plot's hard to do in 200 words, so I just jumped right in. And it takes place in a school library, in case that wasn't obvious. I tried, but there's some good competition! Good luck, everyone!
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Uhh... after reading the stories people are posting, I'm feeling pretty bad about mine. I'll come back after I write one that I'm actually confident in.
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I'm no mod but I definitely like your story the best so far.
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21 / F / Charlotte
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The delicate music rose to the tainted atmosphere, its gears clicking amongst one another to create such a harmony. Even though, long ago it had become rusted beyond repair. The stampede of hungering footsteps overtook the halls. Aokigahara High had fallen victim to the origination of its very name. And would soon claim the last lives, within its blood stained corridors. Tucked away within the South Wing's closet, Moriko held him close. Yet no matter how much comfort he had offered her, the ruthless banging against the room's exterior was too much. Carefully, he pulled back, eyes gazing down at Moriko.
"...Kiyoshi..."
The door heaved against its hinges, the bottom hinge hitting the floor. He starred, unable to turn his eyes away from the wretched demons on the other side. She tightened her grip, unable to keep herself from jumping. His gaze returned to her, nearly void of hope. Miroko was shaking, hand gripping the wound that would soon relieve her of her life. He gritted his teeth before pulling himself nearer. She fell into his kiss, forgetting the pain as the music faded. The doorway gave in releasing the beasts that too them, no longer existed.
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‘Tskune-Kun!’
Oma-san, her long black hair tied in a multitude of coloured ribbons came bounding up to him smiling carrying a bento-box in her hands.
‘Wanna eat lunch together Tskune-Kun?’
She hadn’t changed at all since they were in preschool.
She was still as cute and childish as ever.

They had lunch on the school roof. It wasn’t sunny so they had the area to themselves.
‘I heard you confessed to a girl in your class yesterday, is she going to be your girlfriend now?’
He nodded awkwardly. She tightened for a second then smiled again.
‘Do you remember the promise we made in pre-school? That we would be each other’s first loves when we were older?’
Tskune coughed loudly in surprise.
‘It’s ok…I knew you’d forgotten. I have dessert too’ she said handing him a piece.
The bell for the end of lunch rang out in the distance and he gulped it down whole, catching it in his throat. He didn’t notice the razor blade until it was too late.
The blood began to cough out on his shirt as he tried to scream.

‘We pinkie swore on it Tskune-kun. When you pinkie swear you promise on your life.’
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Ehh, why not? It'd be nice to get a premium membership.
This story is exactly 200 words long, I had to take out lots of stuff.
EDIT: Spelled sacrifice wrong, fixed it. X)

Title: Sacrifice
By: AFF


“This way, Arisa!” Shizu shouted, pulling my hand. I tried as hard as I could to keep up with her pace. Shizu always knew what to do in times of troubles, and I was the opposite. Why couldn’t I be like her?

She led me down the stairs, and we were finally on the first floor. Many of the students were dead on the floor already.

“There you are!” A teacher shouted. We ran even faster towards the school exit.

But I tripped. I fell in a pool of blood. Shizu stopped and tried to help me get up. The teacher was a few meters in front of Shizu—knife ready to stab.

“STOP!” I screamed getting up. The teacher stabbed me instead. Shizu immediately jabbed the teacher’s head and he was knocked out.

Shizu picked me up. “You still have hope.”

“No,” my vision began to blur, “you’re almost there. I’ll only slow you down.”

“But I can-“ she began.

“Shizu!” I yelled with my last breath. “Please, just go!”

She began to cry. Silently, she put me down and turned around. “I’m so sorry.” She whispered and sprinted away. Her running figure was the last thing I saw.
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oh gosh i suck at writing horror stories. here goes...
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The New Arrival

The classroom was still buzzing with conversation about a particular topic. “Hey, I heard we had a new teacher coming to teach algebra.” Taki said, as she ate the last bite of her fried shrimp. “Oh, yeah. That’s cause Mr. Hayashi had to leave class for his other job outside the country.” Hiro mentioned in between bites. A loud crackling buzz came from the intercom. “Class, your teacher will be a little late this morning. She will be on shortly.” The principal’s announcement ended with the same buzz it started with. “She? I hope she looks good.” The boys laughed back and instantly fell quiet. The sound of crushed glass came from outside the classroom. A loud scream from down the hall stung their ears. Next, loud heavy footsteps pounded after lighter ones. These sounds petrified the entire class. The door rattled and shook just a little bit. The students froze in their seats. Suddenly, lace peeked through the opening. The door slammed open. A petite woman, who looked more like a girl, dressed in a black lacy dress with a leather corset walked into the room. “Hello class,” she whispered in her tiny voice. “I am your new teacher.”

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I hope you enjoyed your read. Good luck to everyone. I really enjoyed Another. I look forward to more series like this on Crunchyroll.
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RedLady2 wrote:


Ordaku wrote:

Eh...I broke down and decided to enter!

Title: “Miyu and Mitzy – Survivors of the Third Apocalypse!”
Story © 2012 Andrew Mitchell, all rights reserved.

“Miyu? Do you have a sec?” Mitsy asked, hiding behind an overturned desk. The two girls had just taken shelter in the Chemistry Lab – the zombie hordes right behind them. With a crash, a hand broke through the door’s glass pane, reaching for the latch.

“Hold that thought,” Miyu retorted, firing off a quick round and severing the undead limb in the process. “I’m a little busy saving our lives at the moment.”

“I know, but it’s just that…I don’t think I have what it takes to survive….”

“What do you mean?” came Miyu’s reply, with a cocked eye in her friend’s direction. “You’re with me, aren’t you? I have enough skills to get us both out of this mess.”

Mitzy’s eyes had a glazed look about them, and she seemed on the verge of tears. “But that’s just the point: I don’t have any special abilities of my own. I can barely hold a gun…my medical skills are worse than useless. I wouldn’t even be good for procreation – have you seen how flat my chest is?!”

Suddenly Miyu was before her, a soft smile touching her face. “Don’t worry…you can leave all that to me. We’re in this together.”


This one was really really good but it was more inspirational and funny than scary. BUT I LOVE IT ANYWAYS. I say if you expanded it and made it into a novel, I would buy it for sure. :)


Thanks! I deeply appreciate your thoughts! I had my doubts at first, but I'm really happy that I decided to pen out my idea -- it turned out better than I expected!

As for exanding the world of "Miyu and Mitsy," I completely agree. As soon as I submitted it for the contest, I thought about the possibility of writing more and turning into a full-length novel, but I wanted to wait and gauge reader's reactions first. You've definitely helped me think about my future plans for the characters!
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Aaah, scratch that last one! I came up with a better idea... Not sure if I should edit the last one out or not, though. At least this one kind of makes sense? 200 words on the dot!
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Roses are Blood Red
Kandid

Natalie turned to me, a childish smile spread across her face. “Hey, Tom, can I have your heart? I promise I won’t break it.” She brushed a lock of dark hair out of her face and pinned it lopsidedly on top of her head. She held out her hands, as if she was begging for something real. “Please?”

I grinned back at her and flopped down on the bench outside of the classroom. “I don’t know if you’d really want it, Nat.”

Natalie bounced over and wrapped her arms around me. “How could I not?” Her sparkling green eyes stared up at me, begging for a better response. Her arms felt warm, but she held me too tight.

She was taking this a little too seriously, but hadn’t she always been this childish? I decided to play to her game and just agree. “Sure, Nat. Just don’t break it, okay?”

Immediately, Natalie bolted upright, giggling, smile even wider. “Really? Promise?”

“Promise.”

Something silver glinted in the sunlight, and my stomach lurched when I realized it was a knife. Smile just as sweet as always, she plunged it into my chest, stuck a hand inside, and quite literally stole my heart.
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62 / F / LA CA and out of...
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I don't think I can write it in 200 words!
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