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(FIRST i can understand why you are asking me this but you must know that im not english and this is not a language i use very often, so please if i do make mistake try to understand ill try my best to apply my self at but ill warn you ill make mistake that i will not know they are , as for the rp ya on this one you are right i can do better than that)

The girl look a little suprise, hum just ... water. she said a little intrigue by this woman. Are you sure you don't want something a little .....stronger/ she said smiling at the girl.

(yes, we all can. and oh rlly? what language are you better acquainted with? sorry, im used to people just being half-ass. and to put in quotations hold down the shift bar and press the button to the left of the enter bar-in case you didn't know-)

Bree looked at her strangely, "What do you mean stronger?" Then dismissed her curiosity, "Water will do fine thank you." She waited impatiently.
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(ty for that one i did not knew and i speak french)

Looking at her whit a strange look she finaly give up and said... Ho well a glass of water then. She wave at the bar man and yell her order. Few second later the bar man came whit a glass of water and give it to leyna. here you go. She give the glass to the gilr. My name is Leyna if you want to know
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(ty for that one i did not knew and i speak french)

Looking at her whit(with) a strange look she finaly give(s) up and said(says)(, ")...Ho(Oh) well a glass of water then.(") She wave(s) at the bar man and yell(s) her order. (A) (f)Few second(s) later the bar man ca(o)me(s) whit(with) a glass of water and give(s) it to (L)leyna. (")(H)here you go.(") She give(s) the glass to the gilr.(girl.) (")My name is Leyna(,) if you want to know(.")

(np and oohhh wow, that's cool! So here's what I'm going to do so you can learn from your mistakes: I'm going to correct what you've already typed like the excerpt above and you will re-read it before you reply to see what you did wrong so you know how to do it the next time )

Bree downed it in one gulp, actually she didn't want to know. Placing the cup back on the counter she looked at the girl and said with a real smile, though soft, "Thank you." Then she stood up and left.
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(np and oohhh wow, that's cool! So here's what I'm going to do so you can learn from your mistakes: I'm going to correct what you've already typed like the excerpt above and you will re-read it before you reply to see what you did wrong so you know how to do it the next time )

Bree downed it in one gulp, actually she didn't want to know. Placing the cup back on the counter she looked at the girl and said with a real smile, though soft, "Thank you." Then she stood up and left.

(haha ol merci dans ce cas si tu a besion de lesson de francais il me feras plaisir de t'aider/ tank in that case if you need any help or want to learn french it will be a pleasure to help you)

She look at her. What a strange girl she tough to her self . Leyna drank her drink and follow the girl.
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She look(s) at her. What a strange girl(,) she tough(thought) to her(no space)self(no space). Leyna drank(finishes) her drink and follow(s) the girl.

(haha im good thanks)

Bree notices that she's being followed, this angers her. Luckily she continues amongst the shadows on the outskirts of the city so she can do what she pleases. However, she doesn't; deciding instead to drag this out and see if the girl will make a move first.
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Leyna stop and star loking around. HAAAA I lost her dam it I wanted to know more about her
She was heading back as to man got out of the shadow and got near her.

Man 1: Miss Leyna drown.
Leyna: Yes what do you want ? baking a little scared
Man 1 : ill ask you to follow me
The second man took her arm and she start welling. Let me go HELP SOMEONE HELP ME (go to go ty again and later)
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Leyna stop and star(ts) loking around. HAAAA(,) I lost her(;) dam it I wanted to know more about her(.)
She was heading back as(when) to(a) man got(appeared) out of the shadow(s) and got(came) near her.

Man 1: (")Miss Leyna (D)drown.(")
Leyna: (")Yes(?) (W)what do you want(no space)?(") ba(c)king(,) a little scared(.)
Man 1 : (")i(')ll ask you to follow me(.")
The second(erase) man took her arm and she start(ed) (y)welling.(,) (")Let me go(!) HELP(!) SOMEONE HELP ME(!") (go to go ty again and later)

(kk then ill say my character was too far to hear so someone else can jump in if they want and so im not tied up waiting, cuz i hate tht lol)

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Leyna stop and star(ts) loking around. HAAAA(,) I lost her(;) dam it I wanted to know more about her(.)
She was heading back as(when) to(a) man got(appeared) out of the shadow(s) and got(came) near her.

Man 1: (")Miss Leyna (D)drown.(")
Leyna: (")Yes(?) (W)what do you want(no space)?(") ba(c)king(,) a little scared(.)
Man 1 : (")i(')ll ask you to follow me(.")
The second(erase) man took her arm and she start(ed) (y)welling.(,) (")Let me go(!) HELP(!) SOMEONE HELP ME(!") (go to go ty again and later)

(kk then ill say my character was too far to hear so someone else can jump in if they want and so im not tied up waiting, cuz i hate tht lol)



(well in fact since your a member of the cult you should probably watch this)
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(hokayyyyyy)

Bree heard the scream and tried to tell herself to just ignore it. But for some odd reason she just couldn't. So she followed it back to the familiar girl and took action. With her hands ablaze she stood before them and demanded in a low grumble, "Let. Her. Go."
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(hokayyyyyy)

Bree heard the scream and tried to tell herself to just ignore it. But for some odd reason she just couldn't. So she followed it back to the familiar girl and took action. With her hands ablaze she stood before them and demanded in a low grumble, "Let. Her. Go."


From the corner of his eye Eli saw some sort of squabble "interesting" he started moving towards the noise when he saw a girl with fire red hair "Damn...". As he got closer he could make out that the two men were from the cult. Eli looked straight ahead as he walked past and at the last minute he grabbed the girl by the arm and whispered "Let's go"
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Realizing that they were also from the cult she no longer cared about the girl or the third man that appeared. Instead she let her rage build and unleashed her flames upon them, they've seen her, they know her, they must die if she wants to protect her freedom.
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Leyna look at eli trying to set herself free: What do you want ? let me go !
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ho rea ly then why where you looking at her back then




"Uh.. Um... I have to go!" The boy yelped fearfully and sarted to run away.
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Alex grab him by the neck and told him : If i were to ever saw you again near her your a dead man. Do i make myself clear ?
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"Y-yes sir" The man choked, still strugging to break free.
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