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-Homing arrows are a good idea. But there are two issues with this attack. You are not very specific, you say or something. What does that mean? Or something could range from a different amount of things. And saying that it will follow them everywhere until it hits them... No, please place a condition on this. An example is it will follow the person until hitting a hard surface, or something similar to this.
-I can deal with Great Blast. Firing off a large amount of arrows so that they form a single blast, sounds good.
-I am a little iffy on Mole Arrow but I have no reason to decline it. But controlling the speed they pop out, will not necessarily guarantee a hit in an rp.
-Arrow Wall, what kind of attacks are you blocking? Are you blocking physical attacks, kido,etc. Just saying attacks is too vague.
-Pride Slash. I'm not sure I understand this one. Are you saying that you place reishi on your claymore's blade and then slash at the opponent. The slashes create arcs of reishi that are sent at the opponent?
-Bright King Flash. Is there a certain amount of time that it takes to make it glow? Also, the rapid fire of arrows that are so loud it can knock out someone's hearing and sight, no. Temporarily blinding them or defeaning is acceptable, perhaps because they are so bright/loud.
-Storm of Justice. How large of an area? I'm a little confused with this attack. It says "this attack effects a large area" then goes onto to say "though now claymore hits me". I'm not sure what you're trying to say. Please clarify.

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LamiaZlogonje wrote:

-Homing arrows are a good idea. But there are two issues with this attack. You are not very specific, you say or something. What does that mean? Or something could range from a different amount of things. And saying that it will follow them everywhere until it hits them... No, please place a condition on this. An example is it will follow the person until hitting a hard surface, or something similar to this.
-I can deal with Great Blast. Firing off a large amount of arrows so that they form a single blast, sounds good.
-I am a little iffy on Mole Arrow but I have no reason to decline it. But controlling the speed they pop out, will not necessarily guarantee a hit in an rp.
-Arrow Wall, what kind of attacks are you blocking? Are you blocking physical attacks, kido,etc. Just saying attacks is too vague.
-Pride Slash. I'm not sure I understand this one. Are you saying that you place reishi on your claymore's blade and then slash at the opponent. The slashes create arcs of reishi that are sent at the opponent?
-Bright King Flash. Is there a certain amount of time that it takes to make it glow? Also, the rapid fire of arrows that are so loud it can knock out someone's hearing and sight, no. Temporarily blinding them or defeaning is acceptable, perhaps because they are so bright/loud.
-Storm of Justice. How large of an area? I'm a little confused with this attack. It says "this attack effects a large area" then goes onto to say "though now claymore hits me". I'm not sure what you're trying to say. Please clarify.



ok i have edited it
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-Arrow Wall. What level of kido does it block?
-Bright King Flash, add temporarily blinding

Once those are done you are good to go

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LamiaZlogonje wrote:

-Arrow Wall. What level of kido does it block?
-Bright King Flash, add temporarily blinding

Once those are done you are good to go



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-Blinding opponents for five minutes. No.
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Posted 6/22/12 , edited 6/22/12

shinsonic23 wrote:



-No to Heavenly Fire Seal
-No to Phantom Fire God Strike
-No to Heaven Dragon's Fire God Slayer


Cool names for ur attacks tho. Everything else look ok to me


Why?? I mean, I will change them, but what is wrong with the attack affects? I would like to know first, so I know what is wrong.
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LamiaZlogonje wrote:

-Blinding opponents for five minutes. No.


changed it
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Char Name: Sota Izunin

Rank: Shinigami

Position: Captain of squad 7

Zampakuto: A massive blade type

Shikai :eradicate all messatsu(obliterate)- After saying the release the entire sword and hilt break apart forming into 15 black spheres the size of volleyballs that destroy what they touch on contact or leave clean holes in whatever they shoot through. They can't destroy the zanpakuto's themselves, but the attacks can be destoryed, though if they constantly attack the weapon similar to a sword constantly hitting another with hard enough force can break them.

Spheres three form:

black -spheres that solely destroy what they touch and are made only for destruction

shielding -silver spheres that act as a powerful shield and can bounce back attacks.

Zanpakuto shikai spirit form:


Bankai: Eradicate all into nothingness Messatsu kaimetsu(obliterating catastrophe):

It takes on the form of a huge black sphere high in the sky that gives off a powerful force of pressure making it hard for others to get close to it. It can scatter into 100 normal sized spheres to allow the use of the celestial attacks. A new sphere ability also forms in bankai

Green spheres: these spheres have healing properties that slowly heals and restores limbs, but takes a good amount of reiastu to use them. They do not restore stamina or energy.

Skills:

celestial cage-This skill uses up 30 spheres to form a silver cylinder shaped barrier around the intended target or targets high as a tall building. Its height makes it hard to get out even through the top which is left open and for using silver spheres it bounces back attacks used to try and escape.

celestial judgement #1-tree of enlightenment): The drops sprout from the ground like plants forming a large silver tree around those trapped within the cave further trapping them in an even smaller space. The silver tree bounces back attacks so attacking the tree would only make the situation worse.

celestial judgement #2-tree of destruction): The tree then turns to the black form then by closing my fist the tree will start to compress or collapse on itself crushing and destroying those trapped within the tree.

Ultimate skill:

Hell's Oblivion: By forming all the spheres to one huge spheres and compressing the sphere to the size of a marble which takes time and concentration to do to the size of a marble. After maing sure to get a good distance and releasing my grip on the highly compressed sphere it will expand destroying everything within a diameter of a mile and massive deep crater.

(this pic is an example of the sphere expanding)

Zanpakuto Bankai spirit form:



Inner world: An endless forest of sakura trees except for a single clearing where a massive tree stands at the center that goes high up into the sky.

Gloves: The gloves he has may look like simple black gloves that protect his hands, but also have a single special ability themselves. They can be used to absorb energy from attacks and weaken them before it hits. It can then fire back all the energy the gloves had absorbed or can let the energy build up from other reiastu based attacks.

Sota izunin is an hakuda prodigy, but sucks at kido and mostly fights without using his zanpakuto or at most will only go up to shikai. In spars he never uses bankai as he see's it as unnecessary and it causes a great strain on his body whenever he uses bankai.

Hakuda techniques Sota has invented:

Kuma No Tei (bear punch): Forming a small layer of reiastu on the palm of his hand that if struck by it can seal one's reiastu for up to 5 minutes (or 5 in-game posts).

Paralyzing Bear punch: a special punch that can paralyze the body part strikes for up to 3 minutes or 5 if used with both palms and can completely paralzye a person entire's body for 2 post if struck right at the chest.

Being a master in hakuda is able to do the master technques of hakuda like sokkotsu, ikkotsu and raioken along with oni dekopin.

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Character's Name: Kajiko Tanaka
Rank: Shinigami
Zanpakuto's Name: Kage Fushichou (Shadow Phoenix)
Zanpakuto's Sex: Male
Zanpakuto Type: Fire/Dark
Describe the Sealed form: The blade looks like any normal katana, with a red hilt and sheath.

Shikai Release Command: Moeagaru, Kage Fushichou! (Burst into flames, Shadow Phoenix!)
Describe the Shikai Form: In this form the two powers are combined, where fire and darkness can become one.

Powers Gained in Shikai: Kajiko gains a few new tricks from her companion, which are mostly fire-based due to his fiery nature. Some of these techniques are as follows:

Bankai Release Command: Moeagaru/Kurobamu, Myou Kage Fushichou! (Burst into flames/Become Black, Dark Shadow Phoenix!)
Describe the Bankai Form: There are two versions this time. One is a black bladed sword that casts shadow attacks, while the other is made of pure fire. Kajiko only need activate one or the other by calling upon it in the release command.
Fire Version:
Dark Version:
Powers Gained in Bankai: The dark version has a more concentrated look because it is more concentrated. All of the power goes into a single attack, and then Kajiko needs to rest. The fire one is nothing but pure power unleashed. It can attack multiple times without losing its vigor, unlike the dark version. The dark version is a strict last resort, for the power that it needs can leave Kajiko in mortal danger if she is seriously injured. These techniques and attacks are as follows:

Physical Manifestation of Zanpakuto: He sometimes appears at two different forms, depending on his mood.

Zanpakuto's World: A world surrounded with nothing but fire, which is to be expected. What is not expected is that the flames are black and white instead of normal flame colors, and it doesn't burn the skin upon contact.
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Character's Name: Shio Mizu
Rank: 3rd Seat
Zanpakuto's Name: Shio insists to anyone who asks that she does not know the name of her Zanpakuto.

This Zanpakuto is stuck permanently in its sheath. It is held in place by two thick metal straps connected to one side of the sheath and bent over the hilt of the Zanpakuto. On each, are two entirely different and elaborate runic carvings, which are similarly represented in the sheath itself. Since the metal straps only connect on one side, in theory, somebody strong enough could bend them out of the way. In reality, the strength required for such a feat is unheard of in any being, with the metal enhanced by the eldritch markings etched on them.
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samreaper wrote:

Char Name: Sota Izunin

Rank: Shinigami

Position: Captain of squad 7

Zampakuto: A massive blade type

Shikai :eradicate all messatsu(obliterate)- After saying the release the entire sword and hilt break apart forming into 15 black spheres the size of volleyballs that destroy what they touch on contact or leave clean holes in whatever they shoot through.

Spheres three form:

black -spheres that solely destroy what they touch and are made only for destruction

containment -white spheres that can hold items in a pocket dimension

shielding -silver spheres that act as a powerful shield and can bounce back attacks.

Zanpakuto shikai spirit form:


Bankai: Eradicate all into nothingness Messatsu kaimetsu(obliterating catastrophe):

It takes on the form of a huge black sphere high in the sky that gives off a powerful force of pressure making it hard for others to get close to it. It can scatter into 100 normal sized spheres to allow the use of the celestial attacks. A new sphere ability also forms in bankai

Green spheres: these spheres have healing properties that slowly heals and restores limbs, but takes a good amount of reiastu to use them. They do not restore stamina or energy.

Skills:

celestial cage-This skill uses up 30 spheres to form a silver cylinder shaped barrier around the intended target or targets high as a tall building. Its height makes it hard to get out even through the top which is left open and for using silver spheres it bounces back attacks used to try and escape.

celestial judgment #1-Hellish rain): Uses all but 5 remaining spheres that move to the top of the cage then starts to drip down like rain drops upon all those within. The dops themselves aren't hard to destroy, but to destroy all of them makes it very diffficult.

celestial judgement #2-tree of enlightenment): The drops sprout from the ground like plants forming a large silver tree around those trapped within the cave further trapping them in an even smaller space. The silver tree bounces back attacks so attacking the tree would only make the situation worse.

celestial judgement #3-tree of destruction): The tree then turns to the black form then by closing my fist the tree will start to compress or collapse on itself crushing and destroying those trapped within the tree.

Ultimate skill:

Hell's Oblivion: By forming all the spheres to one huge spheres and compressing the sphere to the size of a marble which takes time and concentration to do to the size of a marble. After maing sure to get a good distance and releasing my grip on the highly compressed sphere it will expand destroying everything within a diameter of a mile and massive deep crater.

alternate ultimate attack:

Devil's call: by compressing the sphere to the size of a marble then like before letting go, but stopping the expandsion till its the size of a large sphere. The energy that had built up will cause it to act like a blackhole sucking all those around the sphere to it destroying whatever is drawn to it and lasts for 8 seconds.


Zanpakuto Bankai spirit form:



Inner world: An endless forest of sakura trees except for a single clearing where a massive tree stands at the center that goes high up into the sky.

Gloves: The gloves he has may look like simple black gloves that protect his hands, but also have a single special ability themselves. They can be used to absorb energy from attacks and weaken them before it hits. It can then fire back all the energy the gloves had absorbed or can let the energy build up from other reiastu based attacks.

Sota izunin is an hakuda prodigy, but sucks at kido and mostly fights without using his zanpakuto or at most will only go up to shikai. In spars he never uses bankai as he see's it as unnecessary and it causes a great strain on his body whenever he uses bankai.

Hakuda techniques Sota has invented:

Kuma No Tei (bear punch): Forming a small layer of reiastu on the palm of his hand that if struck by it can seal one's reiastu for up to 5 minutes (or 5 in-game posts).

Bear kick: Like bear punch but more effective and uses less energy and can last up to 8 minute.

Paralyzing Bear punch: a special punch that can paralyze the body part strikes for up to 3 minutes or 5 if used with both palms and can completely paralzye a person entire's body for 2 post if struck right at the chest.

Being a master in hakuda is able to do the master technques of hakuda like sokkotsu, ikkotsu and raioken along with oni dekopin.



way too many attacks
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Shikai
1. Fire Blast (Kaji Bakuha). When you have limitations for an attack make sure you state all of the limitations. I don't know if those are all of them are not. You can not have unblockable moves.
2. Shadow Bind. If this move is approved there needs to be a large drawback to it.
3. Flame wheel. What do you mean spinning like a wheel? I know there is just common spinning around, but I'm not familiar with Wheel Spinning with the body. Is Is the individual spinning the arms in circular motions or is the body doing a full 360? You needn't add a charge limit to it if its an "if you're distracted" instance. You don't have to add a time limit if you don't want to either, it just depends on the attack's power.

Bankai
1. Firestrike. I'm not certain what it does. Does it fire a beam of fire. Does it just encase the blade in fire and allow you to slash with the blade inflamed?
3. Shadow Wheel. I'm not sure how darkness surrounding you is going to make you invisible. Unless it is used at night to make it difficult to see you. When you put a technique up, don't use "its similar to this" without specifically saying how it works. You don't want the people reading it to have to go back and forth through techniques.
4. No to dark destruction.
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Okay so i just have to fix those things right? I can do that.
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Espada #1 Miguel Lorenzo

ZANPAKUTO INFO

Sealed Form


Miguel's Zanpakuto has a very unique form. It takes the form of a tongue-piercing. The stud has a small, hard-to-see silver bar that keeps a black pearl securely fastened to the middle of his tongue. The pearl is roughly the size of a small marble. It doesn't seem to impact his speech, hurt his teeth, or otherwise impede his daily functions like similar piercings have been known to do. It does, however, make itself apparent when he talks or yawns. Because of the form his Zanpakuto takes, it's absolutely useless in battle until he uses his Resurrecion. Due to this, Miguel has learned to use his speed and his skills with hand-to-hand combat in order to defend himself.
Resurrecion


Right after Miguel says Gorrion's release command, he begins coughing as if he were choking on his own words. Then ten black pearls, each identical to his Zanpakuto and the orbs dangling from his ears, drop from his mouth along with the spittle. These pearls float wildly and quickly around the area. Then, with an incredible burst of speed, Miguel seems to disappear. When he returns, his release is complete. A large pair of bone goggles with jet-black glass cover his eyes, attaching themselves to the mask fragments that cusp his ears. Both of his previously bare forearms are now encased in large, white bone gauntlets that seem to vibrate at intense speeds. On the back of these gauntlets, and right on top, are large bladed fins that trail up past his elbows. His nails are sharpened to a razor sharp point. The rest of his outfit and appearance remains completely unchanged. In this form, his speed is further increased. He can move at an incredible pace and use his momentum to cut opponents with his bladed arms. After moving so quickly, his arms become scorching hot from the friction, so throughout the fight they turn from white to red depending on how fast Miguel had been moving. Once in a while, he has to cut away at the blades and let his regenerative abilities reform them to prevent burning from the intense heats.


Resurreccion Release Command
Tokimeku (Flutter)

Powers Gained in Resurrecion
Casa del Fuego (House of Fire)
While his speed is astounding, Miguel's true abilities relate to the ten pearls that float around the battlefield. Should he touch one, he can propel himself to any other pearl almost instantaneously and without error, effort, or the need to stop. Some think this is teleportation however it is not, but him moving at a high speed that it makes seem like he teleported. This movement appears as if he were actually gone, and an enormous web of fire has sprouted between the pearls; the flames are created by his rapid movement against the friction in the air. Should an enemy come into contact with one of these "strings" of fire, they are actually coming into contact with Miguel as he moves between the pearls, and his bladed arms can cut almost anything given enough speed. While this ability makes it very difficult to defeat him, there is a large weakness in their formation; Miguel relies on the pearls as a mode of transportation. If an enemy manages to catch and destroy one while Miguel is transporting to it, he must catch himself to stop and move to another one or else he throws himself into the ground or a building at high speed. Should one be destroyed, Miguel can spit up one to replace it. His final ability to keep himself from being defeated is to spit up 50 more pearls, allowing the web to become that much more impressive with increasing the size of the web, making it more difficult to stop him, and making the enemy's area of movement very limited. This speed is dangerous, however, and even Miguel cannot keep it up for very long and will need to stop to cool down or else he risks burning through his Hierro and then burning himself.

Segunda Etapa

Segunda Etapa Release Command
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Segunda Etapa Form
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Powers Gained In Segunda Etapa
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