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Ah the old Wing Clipper skill good to see it back Hatake and Sota will be happy with this. Approved! You may move onto step 4.
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Character's Name: Shunsei Giou
Race: Shinigami
Age: Looks 20
Division: 1
Rank: Wants 3rd seat
Height: 5'10
Weight: 175
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Green
Spiritual Pressure Color: Silver
Personality: calm, cool, likes to be a background character,
Like: Cold things, ramen, and to be alone.
Dislikes: Crowds and bars
Background History: Having excelled in the Shinigami Academy, he graduated, 3 years before he was meant to. He hoped to join Squad 8 or 6, but was convinced to try and join Squad 1. He decided to, applying for a position, he was able to score a third seat position.
Physical Description: (A short description and a picture)
Unique Techniques: (Each race and person adapts the base abilities to their own what are yours? They must be related to your race, ie quincys cannot develop cero attacks. -limit 5-)
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Looks good.... Approved
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Character's Name: Haru

Race: (Cat) Arrancar

Number: 9

Rank: Novena Espada

Height: 123cm

Weight: 25kg

Hair Color: Mostly black, with a white area around his mouth, and on both of his paws up to the middle of his legs.

Eye Color: Red

Spiritual Pressure Color: Aquamarine

Personality:
Haru acts very much as one would expect from an anthropomorphic cat, he is quite lazy, very much enjoying naps at any time during the day and is not loyal or friendly to anyone in particular, though he is playful and enjoys company. He can be jumpy at times especially when he senses danger and will quite easily become violent when provoked. Haru has two favorite activities: the first is hunting for souls to consume, where he employs stealth and surprise attacks; the second is having his fur stroked while he takes a nap, he especially enjoys being stroked behind the ears.

Background History:
In life Haru was a house pet like any other, living with an average family of four in a spacious home in the countryside. Both parents in the family were succesful writers and so could afford to live away from the city while maintaining a high economic position. Haru was adopted from another family whose cat had just given birth to a litter of kittens. Haru spent all of his time frolicking outside, hunting small animals or being spoiled by the family that owned him, all of which had become infatuated with their new kitten. Unbeknownst to Haru and his family, the cat had developped a powerful reiatsu, luckily few Hollows roamed the area and so both Haru and his family lived peacefully for a time.

However, disaster eventually came knocking, a large Hollow had detected Haru's reiatsu and following the scent of a meal happened upon his family's home. The Hollow overlooked the small cat and instead attacked the humans, assuming that one of them held the abnormal reiatsu and consumed their souls. Haru was left alone, locked inside of the home with very little food and expired before any human knew of the family's death. Haru had felt betrayed and abandoned by his family which had seemingly dissappeared and so lingered in and around his old home as a soul, with negative emotions slowly building inside of him. Even before hollowfying, Haru had eaten the souls of many small, still living animals, which sped up the process.

Upon becoming a Hollow, Haru lost what little intelligence he had as an animal and became even more beast-like and instinctive than ever, he was able to hunt several minor Hollows before eventually triggering the creation of a Menos, along with others. His tremendous appetite and animal rage gave him dominance over the newly formed Gillian and allowed Haru to continue hunting more and more powerful Hollows which in-turn allowed him to evolve further into an Adjuchas, at which point humanity and intelligence creeped into his mind. It was not long after that Haru tore off his mask and became an Arrancar, allowing him to become very much human-like however retaining most of his old appearance and habits.


Physical Description:
Jubei retains much of his original shape, his feet aren't meant for bipedal movement and so look rather strange, his forepaws are useless for grabbing and are also kept in an unusual position, as if he were alwways ready to put them up infront of himself so that he could resume quadraped behavior. He sports only a robe with the Arrancar's black and white motif, which includes a hood, designed to comfortably house his ears and extended sleeves which actually cover his paws, as they are useless for grabbing, however the strange sleeves each have three orifices to allow Haru'sclaws to pass through for use in battle.

Haru's mask remnant comes in the form of fish bones, comically sticking out of the left side of his mouth, the bones have a clearly defined spine and tail, however upon the opening of Haru's mouth the bones can be seen to include no head, instead coming from the gums, much like a tooth.




Unique Techniques:

Cero Arañador: Haru is able to charge up reiatsu on the surface of his claws in a way similar to a standard Cero, this cero however is not fired as a beam, but instead launched in the form of a crescent shaped Cero vy Haru preforming a swipe in the air. Several Cero, up to six, can be launched at once, one from each claw. The Cero Arañador is far more condensed than a standard Cero, giving it a cutting effect which allows it to pierce most defences, it is also far faster than a standard Cero, with speeds varying from just short of a Bala's speed, to two times that.

Silencio: Haru's own brand of Sonido, it is preformed by using all four paws instead of only the hind two. The added impulse of using four limbs allows Haru to move at amazing speeds, Haru himself claims that his Silencio is second only to the Primera Espada's own Sonido Acelerado in terms of pure speed. Despite the amazing speed gifted by Silencio, there are further benefits to its use, namely it conceals Haru's presence as he moves. Silencio makes no sound and leaves no trace of reiatsu in its wake making the technique an excellent option for surprise attacks and escape.

Feline Senses: Even before becoming a Hollow, Haru had amazing senses, including keen vision which not only allows the tracking of swift and precise movements and small details, but also gifts him with excellent night vision. Haru also has a well developed senses of hearing and smell which allow him to locate other beings even without having to sense their reiatsu. Finally Haru has something of a seventh sense, beyond the standard five and spiritual awareness, this seventh sense often alerts him of danger regardless of whether he is conciously aware of a presence or not, however the sense gives little detail and often acts as an alarm which then allows Haru to search for the source of danger with his other senses.

Feline Physicality: As a cat, Haru is extremely flexible, his legs are made for leaping and running and his entire body can can be easily shifted in the middle of a fall, this allows Haru to easily dodge attacks that would be inescapable for most and move in ways impossible for entirely humanoid beings.


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I love the idea. But I must add, the color you chose was way too bright. But Approved none the less
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Character's Name:
Ruks Kaien

Race:
Arrancar

Number:
Décimo(10)

Rank:
Espada

Height:
6'

Weight:
145 pounds

Hair Color:
Black

Eye Color:
Black

Spiritual Pressure Color:
A greenish white

Personality:
Ruks is a person who hates everything and everyone to the point of not wanting to do anything unless told to by someone who he finds superior to himself.He likes to keep to himself and be alone from everyone and reads a book he got from the human world.

Background History:
As a human Ruks was very anti-social as child so he was always picked on by the school bullies.Putting up with this he ignored them and they kept at it so begin his hatred of people which only increased as they kept on bugging him as the days go on.As an adult he found his superiors to be stupid and hated working for them doing as little as possible.As he was going home from work one day he had got shot by a petty thief and died, instantly forming into a hollow and ate his murder.Enraged by his death his hate grew so much that he was a wave of a destruction destroying and eating anything up until he eventually evolved into a Adjuchas gaining intelligence but his hatred still remained not wanting to fight weaklings any more he ripped off his mask in an attempt to stop the weak hollows from trying to devour him.

Physical Description:

His number is on his right forearm hidden by his coat.

Unique Techniques:
cero la lluvia(Zero Rain):He charges a cero and fires it into the air where it splits and rains down on the battlefield for a minute.This attack can hit him too so he usual fires it off from a far off distance to avoid damage he uses this to test his opponents.

sonido giro(Sound spin):Used at close range he uses sonido and while spinning to appear behind his enemy to dodge an attack and counter their strike.

puño de Hierro:He focuses his Hierro into his fits relesing a rapid fury of punches only slightly weaker then Raiōken.

cero retención(Zero hold):He charges a cero but does not fire it off but instead places it on is hands to use later(this does not power up his punches)As long as he is holding a cero his hands glow the color of the cero he can hold the ceros for 6 minutes.He can only hold 2 ceros at a time one for each fist

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Character's Name: Seiichi Soyton
Race: Arrancar
Number: 7 on his right shoulder on the back side of his shoulder
Rank: Espada
Height: 5'10
Weight: 145
Hair Color: White
Eye Color: Purple
Spiritual Pressure Color: black with green outline.
Personality: he has quite the ego and thinks of him self more than any of his allies. he enjoys Tea and meat; if one of his Arrancar bring him the wrong meat or no meat he will punish them quite. he enjoys mocking his prey and toying with them before he kills them horrible and enjoys to make an example by showing their allies how hopeless it is to even fight him.
Background History: before he died Seiichi was a simple crime lord within China, killed people sold drugs and sold slaves of many ages for many different purposes. he didn't care about for he only cared for power, money and women. finally one day he was killed by his own men. two days of wondering the city thinking that this is the afterlife he was devoured by a hollow and transformed into one like any soul that is devoured by one. after devouring his first hollow and learning that is the true way to power he grew hungry for power to the point that no matter how weak of a hollow he would attack. when it took longer for him to go up to another powerful form of hollow the more rage that filled his body and the more hollows he would attack. when he hit a dead end it drove him nuts to a point where he went insane. when he finally became an Arrancar joy filled his mind, but this is where his ego started to grow and yet he still was a bit insane with power.
Physical Description:
Unique Techniques:

Bombardeo Cero (Barrage Cero)

Aimming his hand in the air with his palm open. the blackish green ball floating in his hand will start to shoot off cero blasts into the sky. the blasts will start to come down in a barrage that hones in on the target and will follow them.

Muerte Cero: (Death Cero)

Putting his hands together making a u shape with them holding it above his head. his cero will take a ball shape that grows inside above his hands floating in the air. ((Just like Frezia Death Ball XD)) Once charged up enough the ball will become compacted and becomes much smaller. throwing both of his hands down the cero will fly towards it enemy and one it makes contact with anything it will explode the main weakness of this move.


Dragón rugido Cero ((Dragon Roar Cero)) when in his Resurrección his cero will form within his closed mouth, once charged enough his mouth will open and fire his most powerful Cero. when shot out the blast will increase in size the further it goes and rings will form around the blast increase in size when the blast does.

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-Please add more to your Bio. Its a little difficult to read
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Alright, you character is approved. I hope you read the group rules. You may now start working on your zanpakuto. You can not fight until you have your weapon approved. And please, keep in mind, that your cero attack can not be infinite.
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Name: Kyshiro kenomi
Age: unknown
Rank: Espada #8
Tattoo: the 8 is on the lower back of his neck
Hollow mask: A fragment of the mask is on the right sight of his forehead with a part going down along his nose and under his eye.

Appearance:


Spiritual Pressure: Greyish silver with a tinge of purple

Personality: He is mostly laidback and doesn't care about power like the other espada who struggle or fight to get a higher rank. Beint content with being the 8th espada and rarely fights unless something really interest him or strictly ordered to. Not many interest him so he's mostly lounging around or simply exploring to have something to do. One noticeable thing about him is that he yawns often and even yawns right in people's face whether ovre someething important or shouting at him. This tends to get him in trouble, but doesn't care.

History/Backstory: Before being killed he was a simple leader of a small gang. Doing simply drug trading or stealing and the works of a normal gang. Unlike other gangs though he never tried to expand or let his gang grow since power was never a big concern to him. Even the life of a ganster boss wasn't that important to him and did it just because. Having a normal boring family and a boring life and at first done so to get some excitement, but even that didn't last long for him. Eventually the gang members could not stand it any longer and wanted a boss that would improve the gang. So one day he had been called out for a meeting only to be betrayed and shot several times to death and had his body thrown in some ditch. After that he mainly roamed and at one point gain the powers to become an arrancar and though he should be filled with hate and revenge. Is more focused on wishing to have somthing truly fun and exciting.

Unique Techniques:

Bostezar wave (Yawn wave): A loud shockwave from his mouth after yawning that can cause those who hear it to be temporaly blind or sluggish. those being hit by it pointblank could go deaf permantly if bombarded by it long enough.

Bostezar Cero: a Grey Cero that charges in his mouth, but is then pulled onto his hand where it is charged even further. Aiming his palm in the direction firing the cero that if it hits will cause the person to grow tired or lose some tenacity and stamina will be affected along with reflexes. If a person avoids it but was close to it will feel a bit weak for a short time as if feeling a dizzy like effect.

Bostezar bubble: From his mouth bubbles will form and float around the area. Those that touch the bubble will be slightly blind and the more bubbles hit the worst the effect will be. Until the person is completely blind and each time a bubble hit will lenghten the effect of blindness.

One bubble-slight blindness

Three bubbles-moderately blind

Five bubbles-completely blind

After that any other bubble will add 3 seconds to the effect of blindness so this ability is only bad if it stacks up.

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Yeah, I noticed. The more I think about it the more I want to change it. Thanks and I'll probably end up changing it by the end of the day.
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I don't have pictures yet, but I'm working on it.

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Character's Name: Matsu  Yomigaeru  (Wait, then rise from the dead)
Race: Shinigami
Age: Looks to be about 17, around 400 years old
Division: 12th
Rank: Lieutenant 
Height: About 5'9"
Weight: 130
Hair Color: Blond
Eye Color: Silver
Spiritual Pressure Color: Blue
Personality: He is very quiet, rarely speaking up in conversation, rather inclined to just soak in the ambiance of a good time, enjoying the company of other people. He is shy, and very secretive, afraid of people judging him. He is not afraid of running from a battle if it is clear he can't win or he has to reveal his secret in order to win. He is modest, as well as a technological genius, responsible for many advances in soul society technology. In real he rarely smiles, but to those who know him, they can tell when he is happy or sad.

Likes: Anything he can eat without his hands, the color blue, most members of the 4th division and 12th division. 

Dislikes: Food that requires him to use his hands, the color purple, the 11th division.

Background History: Matsu was born with a rare form of leprosy, he being the only case ever recorded in the soul society. There is no cure, but his biotic arms provide relief and stability in his body. The disease is actually fueled by his own reiatsu. Where the bicep usually is his arms contain empty canisters, with injectors to pump his concentrated reiatsu into. Once filled and removed, they can be thrown like grenades, exploding upon breaking, destroying anything nearby. The alternative is to take the canisters and release the seal, letting the energy dissipate into the air.  The arms replenish the canisters using his own reiatsu as well, a self reliant system. Every day he must remove one canister from each arm or the system will backup, causing his body to begin falling apart. Should his body reach a critical state of rot, to protect itself he can perform an emergency flush, where the built in vents in the back of his arms activate, triggering a massive explosion of energy capable of leveling a city. 

When Matsu was born into the Rukon district, luckily one of the better, cleaner areas, he was taken in by a local family. He was approximately 14, and he fit well into their loving home. After a couple of years though, he started to notice strange lesions forming on his body that never seemed to heal, but they usually appeared when he became angry, sad, or just emotional. 

One traumatic day he was attacked while out shopping. He had gone a bit too far into one of the less reputable districts and was rewarded with a mugging, a couple of thugs noticed his small frame and attacked him, stabbing him repeatedly and leaving him to die in the mud. He was furious. Distraught. Frantic, as he watched his blood spill out. Suddenly he could feel a change in his body chemistry as energy surged through him, life and death mixing together in a tidal wave of ecstasy. The same lesions that plagued him grew in force, covering his wounds, like the stitching of dolls together, not healing him, but holding him together. He rushed home, covered in blood and pus, disgusted and exhilarated to be alive. 

His parents looked him over in disgust, calling him an abomination. He cried out to them but his cries fell on deaf ears as they shut the door, leaving him alone outside, to fend for himself. Anger arose white hot, and he discovered another use for his power, channeling his rage into something akin to his first spell, summoning flames to burn his parents home to the ground. As the flames leapt from his hands and arms they burned from his open lesions but he didn't care, not stopping until the house lay in black embers. His arms reflected his parents house, black stubs, with white bone fragments sticking out the ends.

The next day he was found unconscious, outside their house, and he was rushed for medical attention, to the royal palace of the thirteen court guard squads. The place where miracles happened, and even the weak grew strong.

Kept, deep, within the compound of the 12th squad, he was tested on and kept alive. All while the disease ravaged his body. His arms were removed almost immediately, seeing the useless status of them. Many of the experiments were performed from one head of the institute to the next, until a breakthrough was made, when design of the reiatsu pumps were created and installed into his arms, allowing him to function in everyday life. Once he was deemed no longer a threat to the soul society, the then captain of the 12th division enrolled him into the soul academy, giving him a new name with his new life, 'Matsu  Yomigaeru', which means; wait, then rise from the dead.

He did well in the soul academy, graduating with top honors in his kido class, but barely passing through when it came to his zanjutsu. He was surprisingly good at hakuda, never telling why his punches were so powerful. 

Because of his background with the 12th squad, and his razor sharp mind, it only made sense for him to move right into the same squad, even gaining the position of Lt. 

Physical Description: Matsu is around 5 foot 9, with bright blond hair that hangs down over his eyes, his gaunt, pale face leaving no way to read his expression aside from his mouth, which is usually stoic. He is a slender build, somewhere between skinny and starving. He is always seen wearing a silver collar around his neck, but when he isn't wearing his white lab coat his shihakusho hangs loosely on him, the sleeves falling low enough to hide his hands at all times. Underneath the sleeves is a different world, a secret only shared to his captain in the 12th squad. Both of his arms, up to the shoulders, is biotic, metal with human pieces. They are sized to match his physical frame, plus a few augments. Matsu has hidden this secret from all of the soul society, disliking drawing attention to himself and his actions. 

Robotic Implants: Gives him strength greater than what you would expect from his gangly stature, allowing him to fight hakuda on par with most lieutenants.

This goes along with his arms, since his zanpakuto when sealed is a collar, his arms are capable of dispensing blades created from his stored reiatsu. If his canisters are empty, he cannot make them, though he can always focus and increase the rate at which his spiritual pressure rises, causing his canisters to fill faster.

Genius Intellect: Matsu has spent almost all of his life in a lab, one way or another, allowing his mind to be sharpened to a razor edge, giving him tactical strategies that sometimes help him evade death when it seems like there is no hope.

Kidō Master: His intellect has allowed him to become a master at kido, an easy way for him to vent reiatsu without the use of his biotic arms. Once he found this out he has done everything possible to learn all he can about kido.

Unique Techniques: 

Reiatsu Grenade: As Matsu fights, his biotic arms will take his spare reiatsu and store it in containers located at either bicep location. Once full, his body will alert him to their status and he can release them, dropping them down out of holes in the palms of his hands. Once thrown, they will detonate upon the impact of hitting a kido, wall, rock, blade, anything, making a sizable blast.

A Taste of Death!: His arms are each able to create a poisonous dart that can be thrown or injected directly into an opponent, giving them a taste of his debilitating disease. Upon injection the disease feeds on the release of reiatsu, giving whoever is affected the symptoms of weakness, dizziness, short of breath, and nausea, sometimes accompanied by vomiting. The strength of the effect is determined by the opponent, the more reiatsu being poured out the stronger the effect, the less reiatsu, the less effective. Lasts a maximum of 5 posts, a minimum of 3 opponents posts. Approximately 5-10 minutes.

A Shot of Adrenaline: Matsus right biotic arm dispenses a needle into his right hand, which he then stabs into his chest above his heart, literally a shot of adrenaline, plus a couple other drugs to increase his strength, speed, reflexes and thought processes. Last 5 posts.

Jabarakaina ("Snake Belly Arm"): His left and right arm can extend out like a grappling hook. This ability is not used often, as it reveals his biotic arms to anyone watching.

Kiru ("Cut!): This technique fires particularly strong concussive and destructive electric blue-colored energy blasts. The energy flows out of the blade and fires usually in the arc of the sword's swing.
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