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This is mine hope u like it....


Wrongly accused of a crime he didn't commit the archangel Lucifer is cast from heaven into the pits of Hell. He us then frozen soils all of his negetive feeling build up creating another him. Satan. Soon Satan taints man with the 7 sins. Each gaining a face. Pride. Lust. Envy. Greed. Gluttony. Sloth. Wrath. The seven sins carry out nefarious deeds on earth so heaven sends down there 7 most trusted and most powerful angels. Michael. Gabriel. Raphael. Uriel. Remiel. Raguel. Saraquel. The 7 each battle learning the sins aren't just a darkness but a almost darker version of themselves. The angels win the first war but at a cost. There abilities are now unusable on earth. They return to heaven thinking that all is well. But many millennium later a darkness returns and the angels return. Unable to use there powers they find suitable host. Either a vessel, a body in which they shall reincarnate, or a medium, a human who can channel the powers of the being and use it in there place. My name is Samantha and this is my story.

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Her breath came out in puffs of white. The sky was grey and she shook as she walked down the snow covered street. She looked around getting the feeling she was being watched. She tried to shake it off and walked up a flight of stone stairs. She tripped falling onto her stomach and sliding a bit. She stood again and began to walk determined not to trip again. She made it to the top pulling her hood closer. She looked around noticing a man standing across the street. She looked at him but ignored the odd feeling in her stomach. She turned left walking away. She walked for a good few minutes before she saw him again. He was closer this time and he stood in her path. She gulped and turned onto a side road walking away. She saw him again even closer she started to freak out and she took off running. She was running like the wind when she slid falling from the top of a flight of stairs that she had cone to. She fell down them landing in a pile of white snow. The snow turned red as she cried.
"Is this how I will die?" She asked no one in particular but a voice answered her. It was that of a boy. She couldn't move she was paralysis. The sounds of foot steps came towards her. They stopped as a face came into her view. He was handsome with golden hair that fell to his neck. His eyes a beautiful Carmel color. He spoke in a voice like an angel.
"Do you desire your life?" He asked
She tried to nod but couldn't moved. The boy grinned. He looked to be of the age seventeen. He sat her up cradeling her in his arms. He spoke sweetly.
"I will give it to you" he said as he bent down placing his lips on hers. The girl felt the warmth go through her body and she blacked out. The boys voice spoke in the back of her mind
"Now your my angel Samantha" and with that everything went black and she slept in peaceful darkness.

...


Tell me what you think ^^ please
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07-FallenAngels wrote:

This is mine hope u like it....


Wrongly accused of a crime he didn't commit the archangel Lucifer is cast from heaven into the pits of Hell. He us then frozen soils all of his negetive feeling build up creating another him. Satan. Soon Satan taints man with the 7 sins. Each gaining a face. Pride. Lust. Envy. Greed. Gluttony. Sloth. Wrath. The seven sins carry out nefarious deeds on earth so heaven sends down there 7 most trusted and most powerful angels. Michael. Gabriel. Raphael. Uriel. Remiel. Raguel. Saraquel. The 7 each battle learning the sins aren't just a darkness but a almost darker version of themselves. The angels win the first war but at a cost. There abilities are now unusable on earth. They return to heaven thinking that all is well. But many millennium later a darkness returns and the angels return. Unable to use there powers they find suitable host. Either a vessel, a body in which they shall reincarnate, or a medium, a human who can channel the powers of the being and use it in there place. My name is Samantha and this is my story.

..................

Her breath came out in puffs of white. The sky was grey and she shook as she walked down the snow covered street. She looked around getting the feeling she was being watched. She tried to shake it off and walked up a flight of stone stairs. She tripped falling onto her stomach and sliding a bit. She stood again and began to walk determined not to trip again. She made it to the top pulling her hood closer. She looked around noticing a man standing across the street. She looked at him but ignored the odd feeling in her stomach. She turned left walking away. She walked for a good few minutes before she saw him again. He was closer this time and he stood in her path. She gulped and turned onto a side road walking away. She saw him again even closer she started to freak out and she took off running. She was running like the wind when she slid falling from the top of a flight of stairs that she had cone to. She fell down them landing in a pile of white snow. The snow turned red as she cried.
"Is this how I will die?" She asked no one in particular but a voice answered her. It was that of a boy. She couldn't move she was paralysis. The sounds of foot steps came towards her. They stopped as a face came into her view. He was handsome with golden hair that fell to his neck. His eyes a beautiful Carmel color. He spoke in a voice like an angel.
"Do you desire your life?" He asked
She tried to nod but couldn't moved. The boy grinned. He looked to be of the age seventeen. He sat her up cradeling her in his arms. He spoke sweetly.
"I will give it to you" he said as he bent down placing his lips on hers. The girl felt the warmth go through her body and she blacked out. The boys voice spoke in the back of her mind
"Now your my angel Samantha" and with that everything went black and she slept in peaceful darkness.

...


Tell me what you think ^^ please


well it start of good i like it but i'm too lazy to read it >.< but it looks good
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IkutoFanbase wrote:


07-FallenAngels wrote:

This is mine hope u like it....


Wrongly accused of a crime he didn't commit the archangel Lucifer is cast from heaven into the pits of Hell. He us then frozen soils all of his negetive feeling build up creating another him. Satan. Soon Satan taints man with the 7 sins. Each gaining a face. Pride. Lust. Envy. Greed. Gluttony. Sloth. Wrath. The seven sins carry out nefarious deeds on earth so heaven sends down there 7 most trusted and most powerful angels. Michael. Gabriel. Raphael. Uriel. Remiel. Raguel. Saraquel. The 7 each battle learning the sins aren't just a darkness but a almost darker version of themselves. The angels win the first war but at a cost. There abilities are now unusable on earth. They return to heaven thinking that all is well. But many millennium later a darkness returns and the angels return. Unable to use there powers they find suitable host. Either a vessel, a body in which they shall reincarnate, or a medium, a human who can channel the powers of the being and use it in there place. My name is Samantha and this is my story.

..................

Her breath came out in puffs of white. The sky was grey and she shook as she walked down the snow covered street. She looked around getting the feeling she was being watched. She tried to shake it off and walked up a flight of stone stairs. She tripped falling onto her stomach and sliding a bit. She stood again and began to walk determined not to trip again. She made it to the top pulling her hood closer. She looked around noticing a man standing across the street. She looked at him but ignored the odd feeling in her stomach. She turned left walking away. She walked for a good few minutes before she saw him again. He was closer this time and he stood in her path. She gulped and turned onto a side road walking away. She saw him again even closer she started to freak out and she took off running. She was running like the wind when she slid falling from the top of a flight of stairs that she had cone to. She fell down them landing in a pile of white snow. The snow turned red as she cried.
"Is this how I will die?" She asked no one in particular but a voice answered her. It was that of a boy. She couldn't move she was paralysis. The sounds of foot steps came towards her. They stopped as a face came into her view. He was handsome with golden hair that fell to his neck. His eyes a beautiful Carmel color. He spoke in a voice like an angel.
"Do you desire your life?" He asked
She tried to nod but couldn't moved. The boy grinned. He looked to be of the age seventeen. He sat her up cradeling her in his arms. He spoke sweetly.
"I will give it to you" he said as he bent down placing his lips on hers. The girl felt the warmth go through her body and she blacked out. The boys voice spoke in the back of her mind
"Now your my angel Samantha" and with that everything went black and she slept in peaceful darkness.

...


Tell me what you think ^^ please


well it start of good i like it but i'm too lazy to read it >.< but it looks good :D

Really? Lol ya its alright and thank you
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Posted 6/23/12

07-FallenAngels wrote:


IkutoFanbase wrote:


07-FallenAngels wrote:

This is mine hope u like it....


Wrongly accused of a crime he didn't commit the archangel Lucifer is cast from heaven into the pits of Hell. He us then frozen soils all of his negetive feeling build up creating another him. Satan. Soon Satan taints man with the 7 sins. Each gaining a face. Pride. Lust. Envy. Greed. Gluttony. Sloth. Wrath. The seven sins carry out nefarious deeds on earth so heaven sends down there 7 most trusted and most powerful angels. Michael. Gabriel. Raphael. Uriel. Remiel. Raguel. Saraquel. The 7 each battle learning the sins aren't just a darkness but a almost darker version of themselves. The angels win the first war but at a cost. There abilities are now unusable on earth. They return to heaven thinking that all is well. But many millennium later a darkness returns and the angels return. Unable to use there powers they find suitable host. Either a vessel, a body in which they shall reincarnate, or a medium, a human who can channel the powers of the being and use it in there place. My name is Samantha and this is my story.

..................

Her breath came out in puffs of white. The sky was grey and she shook as she walked down the snow covered street. She looked around getting the feeling she was being watched. She tried to shake it off and walked up a flight of stone stairs. She tripped falling onto her stomach and sliding a bit. She stood again and began to walk determined not to trip again. She made it to the top pulling her hood closer. She looked around noticing a man standing across the street. She looked at him but ignored the odd feeling in her stomach. She turned left walking away. She walked for a good few minutes before she saw him again. He was closer this time and he stood in her path. She gulped and turned onto a side road walking away. She saw him again even closer she started to freak out and she took off running. She was running like the wind when she slid falling from the top of a flight of stairs that she had cone to. She fell down them landing in a pile of white snow. The snow turned red as she cried.
"Is this how I will die?" She asked no one in particular but a voice answered her. It was that of a boy. She couldn't move she was paralysis. The sounds of foot steps came towards her. They stopped as a face came into her view. He was handsome with golden hair that fell to his neck. His eyes a beautiful Carmel color. He spoke in a voice like an angel.
"Do you desire your life?" He asked
She tried to nod but couldn't moved. The boy grinned. He looked to be of the age seventeen. He sat her up cradeling her in his arms. He spoke sweetly.
"I will give it to you" he said as he bent down placing his lips on hers. The girl felt the warmth go through her body and she blacked out. The boys voice spoke in the back of her mind
"Now your my angel Samantha" and with that everything went black and she slept in peaceful darkness.

...


Tell me what you think ^^ please


well it start of good i like it but i'm too lazy to read it >.< but it looks good :D

Really? Lol ya its alright and thank you


yep lol yay xD your welcome and are you doing any other forums
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Hehe and ya
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07-FallenAngels wrote:

Hehe and ya


ooh ok :3
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IkutoFanbase wrote:


07-FallenAngels wrote:

Hehe and ya


ooh ok :3


Ya but later
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07-FallenAngels wrote:


IkutoFanbase wrote:


07-FallenAngels wrote:

Hehe and ya


ooh ok :3


Ya but later


oh that is good and it will be awesome to me xD
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IkutoFanbase wrote:


07-FallenAngels wrote:


IkutoFanbase wrote:


07-FallenAngels wrote:

Hehe and ya


ooh ok :3


Ya but later


oh that is good and it will be awesome to me xD :lol:


Thank you ^^ that's very sweet of you
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Posted 6/23/12

07-FallenAngels wrote:


IkutoFanbase wrote:


07-FallenAngels wrote:


IkutoFanbase wrote:


07-FallenAngels wrote:

Hehe and ya


ooh ok :3


Ya but later


oh that is good and it will be awesome to me xD :lol:


Thank you ^^ that's very sweet of you


you welcome i know because i'm sweet c:
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Posted 6/23/12

IkutoFanbase wrote:


07-FallenAngels wrote:


IkutoFanbase wrote:


07-FallenAngels wrote:


IkutoFanbase wrote:


07-FallenAngels wrote:

Hehe and ya


ooh ok :3


Ya but later


oh that is good and it will be awesome to me xD :lol:


Thank you ^^ that's very sweet of you


you welcome i know because i'm sweet c: :lol:


^^ lol ya I guess you are
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Posted 6/23/12

07-FallenAngels wrote:


IkutoFanbase wrote:


07-FallenAngels wrote:


IkutoFanbase wrote:


07-FallenAngels wrote:


IkutoFanbase wrote:


07-FallenAngels wrote:

Hehe and ya


ooh ok :3


Ya but later


oh that is good and it will be awesome to me xD :lol:


Thank you ^^ that's very sweet of you


you welcome i know because i'm sweet c: :lol:


^^ lol ya I guess you are


LOL yep
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Posted 6/23/12

IkutoFanbase wrote:


07-FallenAngels wrote:


IkutoFanbase wrote:


07-FallenAngels wrote:


IkutoFanbase wrote:


07-FallenAngels wrote:


IkutoFanbase wrote:


07-FallenAngels wrote:

Hehe and ya


ooh ok :3


Ya but later


oh that is good and it will be awesome to me xD :lol:


Thank you ^^ that's very sweet of you


you welcome i know because i'm sweet c: :lol:


^^ lol ya I guess you are


LOL yep :D


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