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It is so weird! You have the perspective of the hands great in the last pic but not so great in the first.
This place isn't the most active of forums on Crunchyroll so don't expect uber comments unless you draw naruto fan art or something. My opinion is that you haven't had much formal training or you started to draw overly stylized too soon. The 3rd picture is the best, so it seems like characters are your weak point.
Utilize perspective and proportions on the people just as you have in the scene and these would improve very quickly. Also, don't be afraid to use darker color when shading. I personally don't like using soft brushes to color unless i am doing fog or something.
Good Luck! ^_^
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i think all of those are tooooo wierd! u should try a psico XD kkk
the coloring is amazing :D
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Overall? I'd say that in many ways, your technique is superior to mine, and I'm pretty good.
You might, however, want to work on differentiating between your male and female forms. It might just be because the gun in in the way, but the lady in the first pic has a pretty chiselled jaw (and her shoulder is positioned awkwardly, might have to do with the fact that she appears to lack a collarbone).
If you want my advice, don't stop drawing. Don't ever stop drawing. You're not going to improve if you stop, so don't stop.
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Thought I'd share them with the CR community. . If there any good please let me know. By the way I could use some friends on my profile too.
