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Posted 8/28/12
im really not sure where i should post this or even if i am allowed to.
i was thinking in the fan art but that's all drawings etc.
but here is a amv i started this is my first amv so please no rude comments just let me know if its decent at all.
Also if you know a right place to post this and im wrong please let me know thanks :)
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http://youtu.be/yC8scYsvgJg
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Posted 8/28/12 , edited 8/28/12
Pretty good, I loved the fire part and you actually using a fire fight scene.

My suggestions would be to watch out for how you use transitions. I for one am not a fan of multiple back to back flashy transitions. All be it yours weren't flashy, it was just the quick flash of white, then image, then white, was interesting nonetheless.

I'd suggest finding a different way to end it more subtlety... I know you said it was only the first minute, so I can see why it ended like such, but I am just saying it so that hopefully you won't carry it over to the actual end...

And lastly, I'm a stickler for source accreditation, so I'd suggest putting the music artist and song name on the description or at least some credit to them somewhere, preferably not in the video itself though...
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Posted 8/28/12

Kyrek wrote:

Pretty good, I loved the fire part and you actually using a fire fight scene.

My suggestions would be to watch out for how you use transitions. I for one am not a fan of multiple back to back flashy transitions. All be it yours weren't flashy, it was just the quick flash of white, then image, then white, was interesting nonetheless.

I'd suggest finding a different way to end it more subtlety... I know you said it was only the first minute, so I can see why it ended like such, but I am just saying it so that hopefully you won't carry it over to the actual end...

And lastly, I'm a stickler for source accreditation, so I'd suggest putting the music artist and song name on the description or at least some credit to them somewhere, preferably not in the video itself though...


thanks actually i only did that for the one part of it to match the beat. but the flash was a accident my amv got messed up and i had to load the last one and re organize everything some how went out of order.

I know what you mean about the ending although it has more just decided to stop for the night and upload it lol.

I am going to put the artist and etc i just didn't because once i upload the next 30 seconds of it i will be deleting that and repeat doing it till i finish the amv lol.
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Sounds good, then it might be best to say that this is a work in progress AMV and your looking for early feedback until its done entirely.

I thought it was a complete one since I didn't really read the entire post till after I watched it >.<

But it's still on track to being really good, look forward to the end result!
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Posted 8/28/12

Kyrek wrote:

Sounds good, then it might be best to say that this is a work in progress AMV and your looking for early feedback until its done entirely.

I thought it was a complete one since I didn't really read the entire post till after I watched it >.<

But it's still on track to being really good, look forward to the end result!


Yup yup lol actually not on this video but my data i went and got rid of maybe 2 of the flashes because i didn't like them in the first place.
Thanks may be a while till i finish though and i will update this thread then once i finish the next 30 seconds or so.
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Posted 8/29/12 , edited 8/29/12
pretty good for a beginner work... i do not make AMVs but i think its better if you get a better quality video source it looks like you just downloaded some streaming videos for your editing.... their are plenty of quality raws on other places if you know what i mean that does not have those hardsubtitles too
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Posted 8/29/12
It's decent, but I'd get rid of the subtitles if I were you. They're really distracting.
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Posted 8/30/12

polx wrote:

It's decent, but I'd get rid of the subtitles if I were you. They're really distracting.


i would love to but to download any raws only sites i found i need to pay for. plus if i did that i kind of would have to re edit it all no?
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Posted 8/31/12
It was nice ...also my brother made a Fanmade Accel World Opening Here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o6L9m0ZP90k
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Posted 8/31/12
Not sure but I think this kind of thing goes in this thread; http://www.crunchyroll.com/forumtopic-449/the-amv-thread

Either way personals aren't allowed sorry, nice AMV though :>

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