Post Reply My Own Fanstory of SAO ( Using Mine Character)
Posted 10/17/12


-Chapter 1-

Here I am... Going through the game field of SAO... Thinking to myself.. If i ever will get out.. ..My name is Umi Just a 14 year old girl who used to be beta tester.. just 2 months ago We found out that the log out button dissapeared and they only way to get out is to win 100 floors..I am an Archer my Special skill is to Send alot of Arrows at one time deals heavy damage. Mine agility is 50% faster then other players. From 2 months I am leveled up to level 20 The First Floor boss is coming.. I teamed up with other people to defeat first floor, The person who was beta tester with me back then was Kirito He was fighting First floor with new girl that was named... Asuna?.. I was partnered up with Selsia.. A girl that I met when i found out the log out button wasn't there, She is 13 years old I met her while she was level 5 crying in the building I promised her that I wont ever leave her, we both leveled up since then She is level 20 just like me. Everybody is fighting first floor Selsia attacked in the front I was in the back, we kept switching I used my special skill that was then Kirito used his, when we finished with a boss people began to think that we were... cheaters.. of games..Kirito Teleported that day.. and Me and Selsia were just dividing the items we got from fight which should belong to who. ''Ohh!'' I shockedly said. I got a message It was from Kirito It said.. '' Sorry Umi I got u in a notch! It's nice to know u still survied through this 2 last months... It feels weird only you and me were beta testers back then huh? well Good luck!'' I Smiled. Selsia looked at me with an winking face '' Hmm U talking to a guy?'' She smiled and winked. I laughed and said '' You could say that He is Beta Tester.'' Selsia Stoped walking. '' B-Beta T-T-Tester... You and Him... are....'' She looked depressed. I looked at her and saw tears come out of her face. I whispered '' It's okay I wont leave you just because another beta tester almost killed you for your stuff, I will be there for you. It's doesn't matter if I am a beta tester okay?''. She looked at me with nervous look and smiled. '' I guess you have to give me your food since I did most of work on the first floor''. I giggled and gave her a piece. We both went to sleep in a little house we found in the woods which is a with an amazing safe area! So that nobody can kill us! I closed my eyes, and dreamt.
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CHAPTER 1 END
(tell me if I should continue my version of SAO Fanstory)
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Posted 10/17/12 , edited 10/19/12


Kylar. Ch1

I was just logged in, when the sky turned scarlet. People started appearing all around me, hysterical, bellowing about some glitch. Then, he appeared. Two stories tall, hovering far above the ground he looked down, face shrouded.
"Hello, welcome to SAO. My name is Kayaba Akihiko, I'm sure by now that you have noticed. There is no log out button."
No log out button? "Very funny joke" I thought to myself as I opened my menu.
"This is not a glitch, it is not a bug, it is a feature of the game. To log out, you must reach the Ruby Castle, stationed on the 100th floor."
I had no words. I stood there, dumbfounded, staring into that bloody sky. My family, my friends, my life, all gone? We never even got past floor 6 in the beta test, and that lasted two months!
"I would like to also add, the attempted removal of any Nerve Gear head sets, will result in the destruction of your brain, 213 people have already passed, as their loved ones did not heed the warning"
Everyone silent, everyone with the same grief stricken panicked look on their face. Even those on their knees stared into the sky, disbelieving the reality of the situation.
"One last thing, there is no longer a method to revive players in the game, once your HP drops to 0, your brain will be destroyed. The only way out, is to clear the game."
The nail struck home. The crowd burst into a frenzy, screaming, yelling running. Me? I fell to my knees, and stared at the cobblestone ground. It wasn't game anymore. Life or death, we had to clear the game. The sky was fading back to blue, Kayaba fading from sight.
"Check your inventory, I left everyone a tiny parting gift."
He was vanished, leaving 9783 people, each to their individual fate.

Twin Death Ch2.



This will jump ahead a bit, as Ch1 will repeated information, just from my perspective. Wanted to start on my personal story, where I have a little more creative freedom.


This can't be real, is all that has been running through my mind. So why am I so afraid? Why can't I wake from this horrendous nightmare? Because it is, this is real; this is reality, my reality. I have to get up. I have to live. I have to reach the 100th floor. I may be a day behind, but hell, I was in the beta test, I can catch up.
I sprinted to the blacksmiths shop. The scenery was beautiful; I had never seen anything even nearly as vivid as the world here. Everything exquisitely detailed, I could see water droplets on the lilies as I passed. And It wasn't just sight, each and every sense, so detailed, I couldn't believe I was in a game. The crunch of cobble beneath my feet, the brisk air parting before me as I ran, even the weathered counter in the blacksmiths shop, smooth to the touch. Every sense, every minuscule thing was accounted for. It was sublime.
I looked about the shop, long-swords, short-swords, daggers, maces, every weapon you could imagine, ha, and then some. In beta testing, I had played with a long sword and shield, but I wasn't very good with the combination, I had to constantly be revived. It was obvious I was not meant to be a tank, I couldn’t anticipate the AI’s algorithms. Not to mention, I don't have that luxury anymore. I decided against it, and with no idea where to start my eyes fell upon two twin daggers, the black edges glinted in the grimly lit shop. The handles a dark maroon. They look like the scarlet sky.... An idea started to bloom, to evolve. Most people used swords, maces, and shields. But that wouldn't work for me, I needed a way to fight, that put me out of harms way. If I could stay hidden, or even just out of the way of direct combat, I could aim for each enemy’s critical point. Supposedly there are an infinite amount of skills in SAO. Who’s to say there’s not a sneak skill, an assassin skill. Now that idea, was enticing, and the role fit my personality, as well as ability. I picked up the daggers, the handles were rough, the blades sharp, and unlike other weapons, I could wield two of them. The NPC took me to a practice dummy.
Daggers, I’d never seen a dagger sword skill, nobody used daggers, most people felt safer with a longer blade, or with a shield. I, however, felt safe with the shadows. I held up the daggers like I was going to throw them, I felt the skill start. The energy built, higher and higher, reaching its peak. The skill released, the force was nearly concussive. The daggers leapt from my hands, spun hilt over blade forming a crimson helix in its path.Both stuck into the dummy's chest, quivering. They exploded, shimmering into oblivion. My sheaths were filled with a sudden weight.. There were teleport stones in the hilt! They came back to me, no matter how many times I threw them. Perfect. I immediately bought them, and left. Smug, and smiling I headed to a secluded area where I could test my new style.
Euphoria is what I felt, I could shoot one off after another, boars charged me from all directions, but they couldn't even get close. I threw one dagger at a time, and by the time the skill completed, the other had appeared in its sheath. This was so overpowered! The mobs in that forest didn't stand a chance.
This is a jail, make no mistake. But.... for a jail, this isn't so bad.

Posted 10/18/12
ITS SO GOOD SONOFRIZ!!! I WANT CHAPTER 2!~!!!
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Posted 10/18/12
ty Im actually sitting in an airport right now waiting on a flight, I'll start on it
Posted 10/18/12
Airport? HUH? ur moving somewhere?
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Posted 10/18/12

IUmiXChan wrote:

Airport? HUH? ur moving somewhere?


Nah, just visiting my dad.
Posted 10/18/12
Dude your writing is amazing.. Nothing compared to mine so detailed and juicy!!! I JUST WANT MORE AND MORE!! gosh Amazing!
Posted 10/18/12
and No i don't mind!
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Posted 10/19/12
Tay I moved it to my original post, and finished CH2. I think I edited it a bit as well idk how long I'm in the car tomorrow, but I'm really enjoying writing, so I'll write some more :>
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