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Mochi princess
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The story takes place in Tokyo at a time when at night the full moon turns blood red when ever it is out. Rumours of the occult spreaded around middle and high school students.Kuro has spent most of her time staying at home and visiting the hospital since being found by a group of kids doing a test of Courage in a abounded building.Finally convincing the nurses to let her attend the Local school Kuro starts her new life at a new school.However its not as easy as it seems.Kuro has long white hair and wears a eye patch over her left eye only showing her right gold eye which makes her stand out.On her way home a strange creature turns up covered in blood ...
Mochi princess
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18 / F / Tokyo
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Posted 11/3/12 , edited 10/8/13
Chapter 1 - A Clockwork World


A girl with hip length pure white hair laid spread out on white sheets.Curled up like a sleeping Doll.Her simple white laced strap top and thrilled white shorts flowed around the girls figure perfectly like the undergarments of a doll.Foot steps occurred as the large white door swinged open.A lady wearing a nurses uniform with shoulder length black hair and pale brown eyes let out a short sigh as she stepped over to the sleeping girl placing her hand on the pale girl's forehead. "What's going on?"mumbled a sweet young voice as the girl used her arms to push herself up."Kuro-san your going to be late.And what did i tell you about sleeping without the covers"sighed the nurse picking up the white covers that were crashed up by the edge of the bed."Sorry Hina"Kuro mumbled jumping of the bed spinning around.

"Nee-san , i told you to call me Nee-san"moaned Hina pulling the covers over the bed,"I might be your nurse but im also your big sister , and use formal language at least put in 'Chan' , your too cute when you don't"sighing again Hina went over to the door swinging it open,"I have no idea why you wanted to stay here the night" as she stepped through Kuro replied just before she closed the door,"Its closer to the school plus it gets lonely being in the apartment alone when you have night shifts." Kuro picked up a red checked pleated skirt,a short sleeved white shirt,red bow , black thigh high socks and a yellow short sleeved jumper of a chair changing into them.Picking up her previous clothes Kuro skipped out of the door.jumping out from behind Hina,"Can you take my clothes home please"smiled Kuro giving Hina the clothes and skipping off tying White rose clips either side of her hair."Ah wait Kuro-san your shoes!" panicked Hina running after her.A young middle aged lady with brown hair passed her being wheeled in a wheel chair."I take it Kuro-chan is being her childish self again today"the lady giggled giving Hina a small pat on her arm before being wheeled of by another nurse."You forgot your shoes"puffed Hina running around Kuro stopping to catch her breath passing a pair of Black marry Jane's decorated in small black roses."Thank you Hina"smiled Kuro putting the shoes on before skipping of once again."Nee-san!Call me Nee-san"moaned Hina being interrupted by a fellow nurse tapping her on the shoulder.The automatic doors opened as Kuro walked out of the hospital.The sunlight burning bright in the sky."Is it out..."mumbled Kuro looking up at the sky to see that the full moon was hanging in the sky in a crimson red shade.Kuro tapped the centre of the white eye patch hanging over her left eye before walking across the Shibuya Station Crossing.All around her was students wearing the same school uniform most of them walking in groups.

The School bell rang through the school hallways.At the front of the class room a lady with black hair tied up to the side in a pony tail wearing glasses stood behind a desk doing a large cough to catch the attention of the talking students."Today we have a transfer student"announced the teacher glancing down at the paperwork on the desk. "Its two months within the school year"commented a girl sitting by the window at the front. " She's been going in and out the hospital so please treat her kindly and help her"continued the teacher.A small tap was on the door making all the students become quieter."Come in"smiled the teacher watching the door slide open.Kuro was holding onto the edge of the door ,"Come in don't be shy Kuro Yomi"introduce the teacher as Kuro stepped forwards into the classroom.The classroom fell silent after everyone gasped. Kuro's checks flushed."Its nice to meet everyone"Kuro blushed looking down. "She's cute"agreed two boys who were sitting in the middle of the classroom. "Yomi-san there's a spare desk at the back by the window for you , oh and im Takanshi-sensei"replied Takanshi-sensei before Kuro walked over to her seat.

"Hi Yomi-san im Rin Mashiro , want to eat together?"Rin offered once the lunch bell rang turning around from the seat in front of Kuro.She had shoulder length brown hair with her fringe tied back by a yellow diamond clip and brown eyes.Looking up Kuro replied,"Are you sure?"she asked shyly.Rin nodded picking up a bento box from her bag.Kuro lifted a pink bento box from her bag which was decorated in dark pink hearts."Did you make your bento?"Rin asked opening hers picking up a pair of plain chopsticks.Kuro nodded as she opened hers."Really?My older brother made mine.Can i try some?"begged Rin."Yep sure"smiled Kuro,"Sorry if you get food poisoning"Rin leaned across the desk using her chop sticks to pick up a Rise ball and placing it in her mouth.After a few chews Rin''s face lit up,"Yummy!"she giggled.Kuro used a pair of pastel pink chop sticks to pick up a dumpling from her box,"Thank you"she smiled eating the dumpling.Rin used her own pair of chopsticks to pick up a Sushi roll from the bento box her brother made before asking,"Where about's do you live?"Kuro finished the dumplings that she was eating ,"The other side of Togo Shrine" "That's pretty far away do you walk to school?" "Today i came from the Hospital so its nearer but starting tomorrow i will" "Is it to do with your eye?" "My Eye?" "You wear a eye patch" "Its complicated"mumbled Kuro looking down at the bento box,"Can i tell you some time when were not in school" "Sure,take your time" Footsteps occurred as two girls both with shoulder length black hair walked up to Kuro and Rin.

"Yomi-san , may we speak with you outside?"they both said in unison.Kuro nodded following them outside the classroom."I'll wait for you here" called Rin taking a bite of the Pasta she had in her bento.One of the girls slid the door shut ,"Im Mai Fujimaki" introduced Mai , "And im Ami Fujimaki"Ami said ,"So Yomi-san you visit the hospital frequently?" Mai and Ami watched Kuro's reaction."Only for check ups"mumbled Kuro."Is your hair real?"questioned Mai. Kuro nodded squeezing onto her skirt."Have you heard the rumours?"Mai and Ami in unison asked."What rumours?"Kuro shyly mumbled."You know the one with the occult and stuff"Continued Mai and Ami stepping closer to Kuro."What about it?"Kuro wondered."People aren't born looking like a doll or born with white hair if your so sure its not fake"Ami questioned staring into Kuro's eyes.Before Kuro could reply the door slid open standing there was Takanshi-sensei, " Ami-san , Mai-san Rokurou-sensei would like to talk to you two" informed Takanshi-sensei. "The PE teacher?"Ami and Mai said again in unison. "It's about your club activities" replied Takanshi-sensei watching Ami and Mai walk off. Takanshi-sensei chuckled," There going to get in trouble later , are you alright Kuro-san?"

Kuro nodded and smiled ,"Yep thank you Takanshi-Sensei " Kuro stepped forwards. "if they bother you again come tell me" Takanshi-sensei stated before walking of waving. Kuro stepped back inside the classroom towards Rin.As Kuro sat down in her seat the wind blew through an open window blowing Kuro's pure white hair. "Do you want to walk home together?"questioned Rin taking another bite of her Pasta. "Yep sure , where do you live?" Kuro smiled finishing the last dumpling in her bento box."I live near this side of the Togo shrine" replied Rin.All of a sudden the School bell rang. Takanshi-sensei entered the room carrying a few folders. "Everyone back to your seats"called out Takanshi-sensei placing the folders onto her desk.

The bell rang for the final time for the day.As soon as it rang everyone quickly moved placing there things in there bags. "Its end of lesson you can all pack up now" Takanshi-Sensei said in a sarcastic yet jokey tone. Rin and Kuro walked out of the school gates.Kuro quickly glanced up at the sky seeing the crimson red moon high in the sky. "Why does school have to go on for such a long time" sighed Rin placing her hands behind her head . Kuro smiled skipping forwards , "Because the world isn't easy" she smiled spinning around. "Well this is me" Rin sighed swinging her bag as she stopped walking outside a fairly large house."Wow its so big"smiled Kuro looking up at Rin's house."Its because i have 1 older sister , 1 older brother , two little sisters and a baby brother"explained Rin,"Who do you live with?"

"Wow you have a big family , I live in a apartment with Hina my big sister although she isn't really my big sister"explained Kuro. "Adopted sister? or Stepsister?" questioned Rin swinging open the gate. "Neither really she found me when she was 16 and just decided to look after me" Kuro mumbled being interrupted by the sound of a door opening.A little girl with short brown hair tied up in pig tails dressed in a blue dress flowing at her knee's which was decorated with a sunflower in the centre of the dress.She ran up to Rin hugging her. "This is Luo one of my younger sisters"introduced Rin.Kuro keeled down , "Hi im Kuro"she smiled. "Luo doesn't talk to people"replied Rin. "Nice to meet you Kuro"Luo whispered shyly.Kuro smiled doing a "v" sign. "Come on Luo we have to go inside" sighed Rin , "Bye Yomi-san"

"Bye , and you can call me Kuro" smiled Kuro. "Okay Kuro-chan , you can call me Rin" waved Rin as she walked down the path with Luo,"ah Kuro-chan do you want to walk to school together tomorrow?" Rin asked. "Yep sure should i meet you here?" smiled Kuro."Good plan" agreed Rin walking into her house and closing the door.As Kuro walked around the corner there was a large set of steps reaching up to a Shrine. After Kuro had skipped up the steps Kuro faced the shrine pulling the eye patch of her left eye. "We don't get much vister's here"a male voice called behind her.Startled Kuro quickly turned around tripping over landing backwards.A hand reached out towards her ,"Are you alright" the voice smiled.Looking up Kuro saw a teenage boy with pastel purple colored eyes and long dark purple hair.Kuro quickly covered her left eye with her eye patch. "You don't need to cover it princess" the boy smiled helping Kuro up. "Don't need to cover what up?" blushed Kuro. "Your eye"the boy smiled again. "Your annoying" sighed a boy with pastel blue colored hair and dark blue eyes stepping out from behind a huge Sakura tree."How so?"questioned the purple haired boy. "Meeting the hime this way" the blue haired boy moaned. "Do we wait till a monster comes out and attacks her than we tell her?" argued the purple haired boy calmly still holding onto Kuro's hands. Kuro let go of the purple haired boy running off into the woods. "and now she ran away" the blue haired boy moaned again

" We need to go after her" the purple haired boy calmly said running into the woods followed by the blue haired boy.As Kuro ran through the woods a tree branch scratched her arm."Ow" she cried grabbing ahold of it.A strong gust of wind occurred making the tree's howl with the wind.Kuro continued to walk holding onto her arm." Hime ...." a voice howled from behind Kuro.As Kuro turned around a large Jorougumo in its spider form leaned in the middle of two large tree's.Slowly Kuro started to step backwards keeping her eye on the Jorougumo. Her foot tripped over a tree root falling backwards , "Kya!" screamed Kuro panicking covering her mouth as soon as she landed on the floor. The Jorougumo spread out one of its legs causing three spider threads came shooting out wrapping around both Kuro's arms and on of her legs. "Help!"Kuro panicked not knowing what to do.

One of the strings wrapped around Kuro's arms got sliced apart. In front of Kuro was the blue haired boy holding a Katana. "Trust you to get in trouble"he moaned slicing the other spider thread tying her other arm and leg.She fell landing in the arms of the blue haired boy. "W-What happened?"blushed Kuro panicking as the blue haired boy placed her onto the ground. The purple haired boy zoomed up to them,"Princess are you alright?"he asked turning around Kuro's arm to see the scratch from where the spider thread was wrapped around her , "Princess your injured"he sighed checking the scratch on Kuro's arm. "I'm fine" blushed Kuro stepping backwards. A paper fan appeared in the purple haired boy's hand. "Lets do this" he said looking towards the blue haired boy who nodded.Kuro watched as the two mysterious boys tried to kill the Jorougumo. Blades of wind blew out from the purple haired boy's fan's. "W-What's going on?" Kuro cried.A spider thread wrapped around the blue haired boy's hand making him drop the Katana he was holding and tightened around the purple haired arms straining him to where he was standing."I need to help..."mumbled Kuro.A spider thread reached towards his neck.

As Kuro stood in front of the blue haired boy the spider thread sliced the strings on Kuro's eye patch. As the eye patch fell to the ground it was reveled that her left eye was unlike her right.Instead of being a golden shade her left eye was a crimson red color."Hime .... your making it easy" hissed the Jorougumo."Idiot , what are you doing?" moaned the blue haired boy. The thread continued to move forwards as the sunlight which was no longer blocked by the shade of the tree's reveled the Jorougumo covered in blood. Cherry blossoms surrounded Kuro landing onto the ground, "Hime . . . Prepare to die,"hissed the Jorougumo. As the spider thread reached towards Kuro she squeezed onto her skirt closing her eyes.

Kuro's pure white hair started to sparkle underneath the sunlight.Cherry blossom petals floated around Kuro.Sparks started to fly of her hair making it seem like her hair was sparkling like the moon.The glowing light extended making a flash.As Kuro opened her eyes her crimson left eye glowed as if tiny snow flakes where dancing around.Small pastel pink sparkles hovered around her fingers.Looking down at her hand Kuro gasped as a spider thread wrapped around her throat.The sparkles turned into rose petals.Kuro moved her hand, the other holding the spider string trying to keep it from going to tight.The Rose petals increased sparkling zooming towards the Jorougumo surrounding it until thousands of rose petals floated around the Jorougumo.Sparkles drifted of the rose petals hitting the Jorougumo. Suddenly the Jorougumo turned into gold dust floating away leaving a glowing blue crystle floating in the air where the Jorougumo was. The spider threads disappeared.Kuro's legs wobbled making her fall down.

The blue haired boy knelled down in front of Kuro gently pressing his hand to the side of Kuro's red eye,"First time it happened?" he watched Kuro slightly nod her head.The purple haired boy knelled down to the right of Kuro touching the faint mark from the spider thread."Ow"cried Kuro. "Im sorry , princess" the purple haired boy apologized,"Its faint and will disappear soon but pressure will hurt it unless..." He said glancing at the Blue haired boy who shock his head.The purple haired boy places his hands on Kuro's hips helping her up,"How much about the current situation do you know?" he asked."Not much only that for some reason i can see ghosts,spirits and monsters" mumbled Kuro."So you don't know" the purple haired boy sighed.

All of a sudden it went dark.The blue haired boy checked his phone, " 6 o'clock , It took a while you probably should get home.We can continue this another time" he said with no emotion in his voice,"And let go of her" he said turning around.Th purple haired boy blushed letting go of Kuro ,"Do you know your way?" he asked. Kuro nodded ,"Yep , thank you for saving me"smiled Kuro. "Its no problem at all Princess that's what we are for , bye"

The door swinged open .Hina looked up from the phone in her hand seeing Kuro standing in the door way covered in dust."Kuro-san!" panicked Hina leaping across the room wrapping her arms around Kuro. "What happened?Did THAT happen again?" questioned Hina pulling away from Kuro,"Whats that around your throat?" Kuro looked down to the ground , "I got stuck in a spider web on the way home "she replied.

"Kuro-chan you don't have PE next do you?" Rin asked the next day at school. "Apparently I have some music class," Kuro explained. "S class," Rin smiled,"Well good luck!" Rin grinned as Kuro got up out of her chair. Everybody was doing PE or in lesson as Kuro was walking to the other side of the school to get to her music class. A large door stood at the end of the hallway. Kuro knocked quietly. The door opened with a boy with short dark green hair and pastel green eyes. "Hey, you must be Kuro Yomi," the boy smiled. The blue haired boy from the night before appeared behind him. "Hey no flirting," he ordered stopping when he saw Kuro standing by the door. "So they really did set this thing up with the princess and Aces," he added. The green haired boy grabbed Kuro's hand, pulling her into the room before shutting it behind her. The room had sound proofed walls and contained a variety of musical instruments with a set of drums, guitar, bass and a microphone in the corner of the room. "
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