Poetry war round 2!!!
10817 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
23 / F / Wales, UK
Offline
Posted 1/18/13 , edited 1/18/13
because the old one got locked for some reason i've started a new one,
so just write a poem as a response to the poem above you, or if you have a poem that
you just wanna let out go right on ahead ^ ^


what is left of our love?
secret words whispered in french,
a kiss with out a feeling,
how meaningless the touch.

words dance round a honeyed tongue,
so easily you lie.
love i can not give so freely,
it is more than the words you spill.


lol i tried XD
Posted 1/18/13
I was thinking of making over the thread myself, but nice to see someone else did it.

Love is a platter, sometimes served hot or cold.
Don't get full on it, or you just might burst.
2242 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
26 / M / Loading Request.....
Offline
Posted 1/18/13
I will help you out.

Words dance around a honeyed tongue
an organ was strung
from an angel holding a harp
as she started to sung

a tune that was birthed in the past and was lost in the brass
people started to cheer like a new year past
all in all nobody knew that the song was about sorrow
the angel drew her last tear as the earth started to crumble
16372 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
30 / M / New York City
Offline
Posted 1/18/13
I want to burst ^

The blood freezing wind from the
far land of the dead
please blow up some skirts
10817 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
23 / F / Wales, UK
Offline
Posted 1/31/13 , edited 1/31/13

i do not understand your mind,
your thoughts, the way you felt my dear,
but i am one not to be played,
of men like you i stay well clear.

was i but one lost in a moment?
what is this thing i seek,
i did not find it on your lips,
nor in the lies of your deceit.

you tricked me once,
not so now twice,
for girls like me don't tarry,
i wish you all the best in life,
go wander at her gladly.


ha i've become a bitter woman oh well
You must be logged in to post.