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21 / F / Forever married t...
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Posted 1/25/08 , edited 1/25/08
Screams fill his mind
again it is time
tossing and turning
the water is burning
raging and rumbling
my world is crumbing
the voices say kill
they know that I will
someone stop the voices
all those screaming noises
possesing me internally
and they shout so stemly
I can't get them out of my head
someone help me rid the undead
I hear the voices once again
someone help me not to sin
rising away from all I want
I'm the prey the demons hunt
they tell me to do crazy things
kill now the gun bangs
I don't want this to be my life
but they keep pulling out the knife
temptations getting worse and worse
someone help me rid this curse
Driving me to kill myself
they won't stop and I need help
I am now taken over
the voices have full exposure
someone stop the voices
all those screaming noises
temptations at its worst now
to the devil I took the vow!
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Posted 1/25/08
If you think it sucks, then you wouldn't of posted it (unless you really don't care lol)
But congratulations on actually posting work! *claps*
I enjoyed reading it, it started of strong and kept on going more and more intense into it. Nice ^ ^
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