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Posted 8/14/13
I find myself inspired by a lot of the anime I watch, and have been known to write up stories of adventure, fantasy, romance, drama, horror... you name it!

So, not only will I post some samples here, I'll also open up myself to others so that (if you're interested) you can message me and we can possibly start writing something together! It can be original or take directly from your favorite series!

I'll update regularly. (:
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Posted 8/14/13
I know what you mean; I often daydream about creating my own anime.

Was I supposed to message you first? I just got excited thinking about my idea lol.

Anyway, all criticisms are welcome and if you don't like or hate the idea, then that's perfectly fine. I'm just posting here for hope.
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Posted 9/1/13

KrimsonFlash wrote:

I know what you mean; I often daydream about creating my own anime.

Was I supposed to message you first? I just got excited thinking about my idea lol.

Anyway, all criticisms are welcome and if you don't like or hate the idea, then that's perfectly fine. I'm just posting here for hope.


Depending on how you frame the character it may be fine though you would probably do better to reduce some of his ability set from the spectrum you have given him to perhaps 1-2 of those as making a pseudo demigod may work initially but will cause you significant writing troubles later on. Part of what keeps an audience interested is the sense of uncertainty on whether or not the character will be able to overcome the hurdles placed in front of him/her and a character with such a broad array of capabilities won't really seem at risk of failure in most situations unless the antagonistic element is equally equipped at which you end up in a arms race to keep the character up to the ever increasing tasks you set before him while having to ever be increasing the scope and grandeur of the enemies and situations he faces.

If you set up the character with this broad of an array of abilities and make his goal to rid the world of crime, abuse, etc. then you will inevitably run into a situation where he will hit a developmental point where he could quote unquote snap his fingers and alleviate all these issues at once and you will have effectively written yourself into a corner. Another very important thing is to make sure that you properly explain why he has each power, even if the reason is fantastical this is fine, but like in physics in a story something can not come out of nothing especially if it is a majorly referenced plot point. The idea has potential especially in an anime setting as several prior projects (Future Diary, Shugo Chara!, Peulla Maji Madoka Magica, etc) have the outwardly ordinary character either stumble onto or discover inside themselves extraordinary abilities that set them apart from the pack and cause them many difficulties along the way. Keep at it, it has potential
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WOW Never know such forums existed O.O

Anyhow, my soul mate and I had been working on a story since February. It all started from roleplay forum and we edited them into a novel version!

It would be much appreciated if you guys could read and comment on us ^^

THE DEVIL AND THE PRINCESS {ENDED}

Also our current story:
CROSSING PAST FICPRESS

which is written originally from roleplay version here: CROSSING PAST ORI

And if you're into RP or a place to flow your imagination, feel free to join us in RP : AKUTOHIME

Thank you, xoxo -Yuki-
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