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Posted 12/18/13
Yes. It most certainly did.

I wish you a wonderful christmas, or if you do not celebrate xmas, a fantastic winter solstice.
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Posted 12/29/13
Dat paragraph bout' being a-holes though..I guess I'm still immature so I can't handle that many cussing in one paragraph, but in over-all your story Draft, story, etc.. was very interesting it has given me a very straight-forward perspective of another human being.

And if you or anyone surfing around here wants a personal point of view by someone who've seen more Bullying and Insanity in his life feel free to read on-

Let's break it down to simple pieces before I start, your right no one should ever feel the hardship of being excluded in everything. I've once been forgotten in the crowd that I was doing the project with my table, being that I was in 3rd grade my little itty bitty heart was tormented, I lay upon a table far away from my group and started weeping my eyes out, then a very nosy girl screamed "HEY! THAT BOY IS CRYING!" and suddenly everybody gather around me, which made me cried even louder (now as selfish as this may seem please try to remember I was only 9 yrs old) now as they gathered it seemed to captured the teacher's attention I had my chance to mark myself in there memory and never to be forgotten, the teacher walked over and the crowd moved away "What's the matter?" he asked
"My entire group forgotten me and left me out of the project *sniff*." -I replied, the talk went on and pretty soon was over, since then no one have forgotten my face, and treats me like a baby thinking I'll cry, now you might be wondering what have this story got to relate to our topic, unlike some people who let it go- I chose to make them remember I'm there, I chose to make them know I exist, I chose that choice no matter how selfish it was, even if I was just a lame guy wanting existence I don't need pride if it's gonna backfire on me.
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Posted 12/30/13

Biggle wrote:

Dat paragraph bout' being a-holes though..I guess I'm still immature so I can't handle that many cussing in one paragraph, but in over-all your story Draft, story, etc.. was very interesting it has given me a very straight-forward perspective of another human being.

And if you or anyone surfing around here wants a personal point of view by someone who've seen more Bullying and Insanity in his life feel free to read on-

Let's break it down to simple pieces before I start, your right no one should ever feel the hardship of being excluded in everything. I've once been forgotten in the crowd that I was doing the project with my table, being that I was in 3rd grade my little itty bitty heart was tormented, I lay upon a table far away from my group and started weeping my eyes out, then a very nosy girl screamed "HEY! THAT BOY IS CRYING!" and suddenly everybody gather around me, which made me cried even louder (now as selfish as this may seem please try to remember I was only 9 yrs old) now as they gathered it seemed to captured the teacher's attention I had my chance to mark myself in there memory and never to be forgotten, the teacher walked over and the crowd moved away "What's the matter?" he asked
"My entire group forgotten me and left me out of the project *sniff*." -I replied, the talk went on and pretty soon was over, since then no one have forgotten my face, and treats me like a baby thinking I'll cry, now you might be wondering what have this story got to relate to our topic, unlike some people who let it go- I chose to make them remember I'm there, I chose to make them know I exist, I chose that choice no matter how selfish it was, even if I was just a lame guy wanting existence I don't need pride if it's gonna backfire on me.


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Posted 1/6/14 , edited 2/4/14
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Posted 1/25/14
Bump anyone else?
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That was a nice thought provoking, intelligent, and great depiction into the tragic life of being a loaner, way to go! Also nice selection of quotes, they worked very well.
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Posted 4/25/14

schnipdip wrote:


mexklow wrote:

bec of pride we allways have doubt im a virgo so ihave doubts bec god loves us we keep up livi/\/g happy im from asia im lexter louis elias reyes


Lolz only caught like 5 words from there


Alright I'm going to try to translate. It's a doozy.

Because of pride we always have doubt. I'm a Virgo so I have doubts and because God loves us we keep on living happily. (it's dicy from here on) I'm from Asia and my name is Lexter Louis Elias Reves.

I think I got it
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31 / M / Planet Anime
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Posted 5/5/14
Although i don't struggle with loneliness, i can see that this could help people that do feel better. Loners seep through the cracks, they do not stand out, thats what makes them loners i guess, i think the loners club is more exclusive than you portray it to be. I go to a huge school and finding the loners club would be challenging, i would not even notice they a loner if they sat next to me in class... That brings me to the question, if i am a loner?
Anyhow, now that i am desperately trying to avoid writing about the abyss of dismay, I will note that I was moved by your essay but i did feel you relied too heavily on quotes. Not that i can talk, since i am a long way away from having to write essay's on your level.
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