any manga ideas......?
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Posted 12/25/13 , edited 12/25/13
IF ANY OF YOU HAVE ANY MANGA IDEAS THEN THAT WILL HELP YOU CREATE THE BEST PIECES OF WORK EVER MADE. THIS FORUM IS ONLY FOR PEOPLE WHO CAN HELP OTHERS CORRECT AND EDIT THEIR IDEAS.......

I WILL CRITIC YOUR FINAL TO TELL YOU IF YOU WILL BE A SUCCESSFUL WRITER
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If you forgive my presumption, "critique " might work better than "critic" in this circumstance.
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Posted 12/25/13 , edited 12/25/13
I tried to make a manga once when I was like 16. It sucked haha. I think I only had two or three pages. It was a school setting, yuri romance story. I wouldn't mind trying again sometime, with my new character, but I dunno if my art is good enough to be honest.
(example of OC for anyone interested)
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Posted 12/26/13 , edited 12/27/13
well it depends on who you want to work for. with the art it could be improved to be a kids romance manga. you should make your art fit the audience your trying to go after. it that helps anything in the slightest



heh wasn't paying attention and you don't have to be so formal in apologies.... at least to me that is



do you have any other ideas for a story?....

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SomaZaraki wrote:



I dont get it, you seemed to glance over all the important details (I'm assuming your trying to keep all the juicy plot turns to yourself) at this stage there isn't much of a story so try to flesh out the idea as a whole and don't be shy do divulge some of those plot turns. Also why would he suicide to save his classmates not like they're family or friends just classmates. (ie explain why he's doing what he's doing)
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Title: T.I.S( This Is The End)

14 year old Sin Tsuminaga is a nobody. He lives an ordinary life. He has these strange dreams of the world in danger in the near future. Sin thinks nothing of it. he wakes upon an explosion . he thinks it was his . he finds out worse. the whole street is in chaos. he looks in horror as people are being killed left and right. the world is being attacked. not knowing what to do he runs................... later on he meets a group of his classmates huddled in an alley. they explain that they were told to seek shelter. an IV was being spread all over the world. new York was the first out.......… There 3 people left in the group. Sin Tsuminaga, Mai Annoha, and Vexen Kujo. Sin finds out that his dreams are the key to the infection. he then knows that to keep Mai and Vexen alive...... He has to commit suicide
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