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Posted 1/9/14
Hiya guys! This forum topic is my current space to dump off stories that some people requested from me.
I intend to finish any requested stories in a month or so.. if it takes any time longer than that- I probably have some project at school so I hope any request could wait in line as I finish my personal stuff and get on with your story

If your interest in what I'm doing here's where you can Donate your ideas, read the rules THO!


>http://www.crunchyroll.com/forumtopic-833285/can-you-donate-some-ideas#45322833

Share your thoughts on how I did, I'm not that confident- and some personal opinions could do me some good
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Posted 1/9/14
This one is for RedRose341 :D
>https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B8ekgTK01LdKQXdSNTdhaEw2MTA/edit
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Posted 1/19/14
... uhm well, I have this one story which I currently writing on..

Its a love story, definitely inspired to those school life anime I've always love to watched..

But sad to say, its still on going thinking on the appropriate best scenes to write...
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Posted 1/20/14
I am just face palming at why you are posting this here (/._.\)
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Posted 1/20/14
I'm not sure making a thread promoting another is a good idea. Plus it can be misleading
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Posted 1/21/14 , edited 1/21/14
yeah, but I pretty much made it pretty obvious having the sub-title under my "Original" title thread. So really you can't blame me for being misleading, but the 'thread promoting another'(Big word btw! are you sure I'm the one confusing people?) sure I won't deny it being a bit on the bad side, I guess I never really announced that this was only temporarily- of course I don't attempt to chip of Crunchyroll forever... Just until I can find an Organized place to dump the stories off.

So please, with all due respect unless your attempting to Critique stories I wrote for requested users DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT SPAMMING, TROLLING, OR RANDOM NONSENSE THAT MAKE ME FACEPALM.
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Posted 1/31/14
For SirMarc, you've waited a whole month for this story- and as much as I hate to say it, school interfered with my work, so despite how short it was and how little time I had to edit the story to sounds super intellectual. I hope you enjoy this little piece of work

----->https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Pmmv5EX6cxrWDjUUUNbh2PxIhl_Kh2TBi5ZRoIVzZWg/edit?pli=1

P.S I think it feels more like a fanfiction than a short story. (which is really short)
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Posted 1/31/14
Well done! that was actually really good dude! and your right about how it's almost fan-fiction, anyhow that's a 4/5 stars for me some of those sentences could be edited better. BUT it was still pretty good I hope to see more of your work.
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Posted 2/17/14
Been looking for a thread like this! My friend is writing short stories for kinda like a book based off them and using Sword Art Online's theme for it, she asked for my feedback but I'm not very good at stuff like this so I'm hoping you guys can help out if the beginning is good:



"KEEP THAT DOOR OPEN!" I cried out. Mindy sadly did not hear me and I jumped for the door. Knees hitting the floor hard and sliding I barely grab the door before it closes. "OUCH" I yelled and let go of the door of the hard impact it gave my finger tips and the door closed. "I'm late, AGAIN, what am I going to do!?" I look at my hand, "AND I RUINED MY MANICURE WHAT DID I EVER DO TO DESERVE THIS???". I knock my head on my homeroom door repeatedly. Suddenly I fall forward and hit the floor facefirst. "Oh.... Lily? What are you doing down there?" Miss Serena asks. I could hear the snickered laughing around me and I slowly cover my face with my hands and shake my head furiously side to side laughing. I look up, "No reason Miss Serena! Let's learn something today!". Miss Serena laughs and taps my head with her pencil, "I'm sorry Lily but you are late to class, do you know what that means?". I was kinda hoping Miss Serena wouldn't have noticed. I nod my head and walk in, ready for the chores that will be awaiting for me to do for Miss Serena during class.
"Mindy if I clap another eraser I'm going to get lung cancer" I moaned. "Lily maybe you shouldn't be late anymore". I give her a wary look, if only she knew I wouldn't have been late if she heard me to keep the door open. "Want to go checkout the new Lanaria game after you're done? You promised to come to the first day release you know" Mindy asked. I nodded and coughed as I breathed in more dusty chalk that I clapped off. We've been both waiting for this day ever since the game idea has gotten approved for development 4 years ago but has been delayed due to new technological discoveries. "I think I forgot to charge my Sensor Belt though" I said, questioning myself. "Lily you'd forget your head if it wasn't already attached to your neck!" Mindy teased. I laughed and laid the erasers down. "Ok, I am done. Let's go to that release!".
"OOOOH LILY LOOK AT THAT LINE!!" Mindy whined. I gawked at the line in front of me. Is this all really for just one game?
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Posted 2/26/14
For 4lperen! a person whom I tried really hard to not mess up on. Twice.

>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Hf8kIh7h86S1IHm0VyWiNcaDGhnMFxS5zN7b8uaGtrM/edit?usp=sharing


Please give me your opinion on this one, I must say though- it's very sophisticated, and very complex.
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Posted 5/5/14 , edited 5/5/14
I am requesting a topic-lock, because I am getting lazy and not having enough will-power to write another frickn' story, plus I don't even know how to close a topic or even if that's possible o-o'

Sooo.. good luck Forum Mods :]
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Posted 6/13/14

WOW Never know such forums existed O.O

Anyhow, my soul mate and I had been working on a story since February. It all started from roleplay forum and we edited them into a novel version!

It would be much appreciated if you guys could read and comment on us ^^

THE DEVIL AND THE PRINCESS {ENDED}

Also our current story:
CROSSING PAST FICPRESS

which is written originally from roleplay version here: CROSSING PAST ORI

And if you're into RP or a place to flow your imagination, feel free to join us in RP : AKUTOHIME

Thank you, xoxo -Yuki-
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