Dinosaur World
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Dinosaur World - A manga/story I'm creating.

The worlds as humans know it is over an asteroid headed for earth is spiraling closer and closer the only possible chance of survival is that humans move underground and freeze themselves for 10,000 years. Some parents ultimately can only afford for their kids to be frozen and have to make the ultimate sacrifice (this happens with the main character and his best friend who both comes from poor families living in the suburbs and the rich family the main characters mother works for refuses to pay for the boy’s parents to be frozen with him). The humans lay asleep until they can re-emerge when the computer systems unfreeze them. But as the humans sleep one of the computers malfunctions and the underground colonies times are changed from 10,000 years to 100 million years some of the colonies vary and unfreeze a few 1000 years apart but colony 21 where Syler and his best friend Rose are finally unfrozen one day it is the last colony to be unfrozen as the humans that are already unfrozen sit at a base that is surrounded by walls. Nearby the computers detect that colony 21 has unfrozen. So they send a few scouts set out to tell these humans what has happened… to tell them that dinosaurs now rule the earth again because they were frozen for 100 million years instead of 10,000. In the time they were frozen reptiles grew stronger again dominating the land, air and sea … Syler and Rose learn everything from a scout named Namba he tells them that they will talk more at the main base and they set off on wolves. Namba then shows them the new world on the way to the base and what it’s like that humans now ride wolves and fight for survival everyday against the dinosaurs Namba, Syler and Rose eventually will become dinosaur bounty hunters together being payed to kill different species of dinosaurs. One day while out hunting they will get a called back to the base from a scientist and friend of Namba’s the scientist will tell them that he has been studying ancient artifacts for 2 years and that he has finally discovered what the artifacts say he tells them the artifact tells a story of a race of giants that could take on the dinosaurs and were slowly wiping them out but they mysteriously appeared when the humans were frozen and mysteriously disappeared when they were frozen as well. The scientist gives them a final clue and tells them to tell nobody about this they set off with a map to a new island in the hopes of unraveling the mystery of the giants the scientist gives them one last thing as an added gesture it is a flying pirate ship that takes to the air when the hot air balloon that is attached to the ship inflates.

“The story may change in the future and I know a lot more needs to be done on it and I can’t draw I need to fix up a lot of mistakes so far but this is just a basis for a manga I would love to make one day I wrote it up in about 10 minutes when I got an idea one day”


Copyrighted By Lachlan Forbes
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Immediately from a scientific standpoint I'm pretty sure cryogenic freezing isn't possible with today's technology. I'm going to assume this takes place sometime in a post apocalyptic setting etc...

Seems to be an interesting setup with the dinosaurs ruling the planet, I feel like you could really do well with this concept.

Its nice to see the humans when they aren't the dominant species, a bit like Planet of the Apes.

You should really get into the Lore and History of the Dinosaurs, give detailed back-story on that stuff, I mean after all, that's pretty much the main premise of this story right?

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BrekLaberif wrote:

Immediately from a scientific standpoint I'm pretty sure cryogenic freezing isn't possible with today's technology. I'm going to assume this takes place sometime in a post apocalyptic setting etc...

Seems to be an interesting setup with the dinosaurs ruling the planet, I feel like you could really do well with this concept.

Its nice to see the humans when they aren't the dominant species, a bit like Planet of the Apes.

You should really get into the Lore and History of the Dinosaurs, give detailed back-story on that stuff, I mean after all, that's pretty much the main premise of this story right?



Thanks for the reply yeah I will defiantly read more into the history of the dinosaurs and yeah it is set in the future where cryogenic freezing is possible yeah the series is going to be an Action-Adventure it will start out more focused around them being bounty hunters and just trying to adjust to the new world but it will become much more then that later when they start to adventure out to see if the giants still exist in the world and their will be many more plot twists thanks for reading it by the way I know it would of been horrible to read and probably hard to understand since I rushed it the grammar and words were probably horrible but nice to get feedback and tips
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