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Posted 2/27/14
idk if this will work but i have a great idea for a bran new anime, hears how it will start there will be this high school student lets call him light whose really smart but bored with life but one day there's this book that falls from the sky but its just not an ordinary book it has the power to kill people by writing there name in it lets call it the note of death and this kid AKA light finds it and begins to use it i havent thought of any more but thats what i got so far ..... not sure if its a good story plot tell me what u think? thanks
Posted 2/27/14
Lol sounds shit.
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Posted 2/27/14
good kind of shit though
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eminem1967 wrote:

idk if this will work but i have a great idea for a bran new anime, hears how it will start there will be this high school student lets call him light whose really smart but bored with life but one day there's this book that falls from the sky but its just not an ordinary book it has the power to kill people by writing there name in it lets call it the note of death and this kid AKA light finds it and begins to use it i havent thought of any more but thats what i got so far ..... not sure if its a good story plot tell me what u think? thanks


Dear God. My eyes are bleeding. I could not read that. I realize you're pulling from "Death Note" and trying to be funny, but I rewrote it below to help others understand what you wrote. I hope you don't mind.


I don't know if this will work, but I have an excellent idea for a brand new anime. Here's how it begins:

The first character is a high school student who we'll call "Light". He's smart, somewhat attractive, but bored with life and the people around him. One day a book falls from the sky, but this is no ordinary book. It has the power to kill people when someone writes their name in it. Let's call it "The Note Of Death". Light finds the book one day after school and begins to write names in it at first not realizing the true power the book holds and how it will change his life.

That's the rough draft of the beginning and the main concept. I'm not sure if its a decent story or if it's too cliche. What do you think? I'd love to get some feedback on it.

Thank you for your time.

Best Regards;
eminem1967
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Posted 2/27/14

eminem1967 wrote:

idk if this will work but i have a great idea for a bran new anime, hears how it will start there will be this high school student lets call him light whose really smart but bored with life but one day there's this book that falls from the sky but its just not an ordinary book it has the power to kill people by writing there name in it lets call it the note of death and this kid AKA light finds it and begins to use it i havent thought of any more but thats what i got so far ..... not sure if its a good story plot tell me what u think? thanks


What was the point of this thread? I am sorry but I see absolutely no point to this. It's not funny, it's not offensive, it's not even annoying. It's like a piece of internet lint.
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my gad 10/10 would watch lel
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sounds familiar?
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An anime that reflects the smothering reality of human life and social behavior. Combines psychological elements such as a religious, kind individual becomes sick of his or her own kind hypocritical behavior and beans to develop a constant internal war with itself. It will define logically the good and evil dogmas and show that not everything is in black and white. The twist is that GOD is an ass and is the main antagonist of this story, so the main character has to work its way up to eliminate this system so that the universe ends naturally.
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Posted 2/27/14
what was the point of you commenting on a thread that didnt make any sense?
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Posted 2/27/14

eminem1967 wrote:

what was the point of you commenting on a thread that didnt make any sense?


Well the point of my comment was inquiring the reason for you making this thread. Right now I am thinking of a few reasons you may have had for making this thread, but none of them seem very plausible to me...I do tend to overthink things though.
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Posted 2/27/14
ok well i did it just cause i was bored and to be funny sorry didnt mean to cause u any harm bro
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Posted 2/27/14
exactly
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Needs some Gundams.
Posted 2/27/14
Take all the moe and pedo wank out of it and you've got something almost original.
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Needs some Gundams.






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