Post Reply IDEAS FOR OUR YURI STORY
Posted 2/28/14
This is where you can write out your ideas for our Yuri story. Go on and share what you want in our story. I'll be the writer of the story, but i won't take all the glory . This is for all of us to do together as a club. Have fun.
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Posted 3/22/14
I believe that we must have a american girl falling in love with her childhood best friend that moved to Japan when they were young.
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Posted 3/30/14
should we try reverse harem but with yuri? lol
Posted 3/30/14 , edited 3/30/14
So a girl with an all girl harem? Please, no more harems, don't let yuri become corrupted

A girl who generally keeps to herself is suddenly thrust into popularity after her normally secretive artwork was accidentally put on display by the art clubs supervisor. In the fallowing mess of events corrupting her once quiet life she gains a stalker who just so happens to also be the greatest outcast at school, She's a student well known for killing her mother and father in middle school yet for unknown reasons was never arrested.

After several terrifying encounters with her stalker, one of them involving the death of a fellow student by the hands of the stalker our MC becomes obsessed with her and why to police keep covering up her crimes. It's soon realized that instead of a stalker the girl has been protecting our MC from those who want to kill her because of her art which secretly foretells a coming apocalypse and possible steps to prevent it. Those trying to kill the MC have their own reasons including allowing the apocalypse to happen and while our MC falls in love with and becomes romantically involved with her protector the lines between who is right and who is wrong become blurred.

Beaten, terrified, alone and not knowing who to trust our MC is on the run for her life. With no where to go our MC runs into a slightly older woman bearing a striking resemblance to the same woman in her popular painting who promises the truth. Choosing to trust the new mysterious woman as she has no other option she follows her into hiding where our MC and woman grow close. While struggling with those still trying to kill her, whom she truly loves, and who she can trust our MC is thrown into a wild ride now with her own hands stained with blood. Here the question of if the destruction of a single world and its people is the only way to save a dying universe, and is it worth the sacrifice is asked.

or something like that, I'm bored.



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Posted 3/30/14
Jeez you're really good.
Posted 3/30/14 , edited 3/30/14
Is it good? I can come up with ideas but when it comes to actually writing them out in story form I'm not very good at all. Thank you for the compliment though.

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Posted 3/30/14
Those are good ideas.
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Posted 3/31/14
well maybe because you kinda make it seem complex than it already is. Just start it out simple and develop it later on or look at it from different angles and write it in different ways.
Posted 4/2/14
That could be it. One of my major obstacles is that when there is romance that I'm writing I just want to jump right into it and end up ignoring everything else.
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Posted 8/1/14 , edited 7/17/16
The idea of having a female stalker... I love it! Although, I can't imagine them being a love interest. xD

I really like Cinderella and Ugly Duckling type stories. With a popular person falling for someone who appears ugly, but really is just a diamond in the rough. o///o They enter a relationship and feel like they have to hide it. But then the one girl becomes really popular herself. She's handsome and ends up getting a bunch of female admirers, and love letters even, making the other girl jealous.

It'd be interesting to see what would happen if a couple like this came out as gay. Both are popular. One of them already has the affections of women (the other of men). Some of the women would be happy to find out that she's gay, because they'd see it as them having a chance. But what about the other people? The guys would probably harass them with remarks like, "One time with me and you won't like girls anymore." Would they be shunned by society?
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Posted 10/21/14 , edited 7/17/16

Vokisa wrote:

The idea of having a female stalker... I love it! Although, I can't imagine them being a love interest. xD

I really like Cinderella and Ugly Duckling type stories. With a popular person falling for someone who appears ugly, but really is just a diamond in the rough. o///o They enter a relationship and feel like they have to hide it. But then the one girl becomes really popular herself. She's handsome and ends up getting a bunch of female admirers, and love letters even, making the other girl jealous.

It'd be interesting to see what would happen if a couple like this came out as gay. Both are popular. One of them already has the affections of women (the other of men). Some of the women would be happy to find out that she's gay, because they'd see it as them having a chance. But what about the other people? The guys would probably harass them with remarks like, "One time with me and you won't like girls anymore." Would they be shunned by society?


Well it's the realization the she really isn't a stalker, but has been following the MC to protect her in honesty changes the situation a bit. The obsession comes as the MC already has an affinity for the unknown which leads to romantic feelings. She feels as if the girl has been more of a guardian angel.

I would very much enjoy a story of a lesbian couple that for one reason or another has been outed. We would get to see how their relationship held up to the potential stress and how their friends and family accepted them. At the very least I'm sure there would be some teasing and possible bullying.

I've always been partial to the idea of the couple being caught kissing or more and that serves as the medium by which they are outed.



Who started the yuri story thread by the by?
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Posted 7/17/16 , edited 7/17/16
Tatya crawled through the dense foliage carefully, she was nearing the outskirts of the town and had to be careful. She had only one shot at this, no backup and no support... going off the reservation seriously sucked.
Tatya carefully craned her neck to get a better look at the town, small city really... or at least it used to be. All she saw was rubble and devastation. No building larger than three stories remained standing, and even those were gutted ruins. Her objective was somewhere in that mess. Objective, such a cold term... clinical, operational. Not even close to explaining the true meaning this 'objective' had for for Tatya. Hope, courage, understanding, support, warmth... love... Vicky.

In her admittedly short and violent suck-fest of a life nothing much besides being good at her job had any meaning to Tatya, until Vicky. Till today she had no clue what Vicky saw in her, a fighter pilot, angel of the skies, falling for a grunt like her. Unsophisticated, uncouth and utterly emotionless and yet, apparently, not quite.
It had taken Vicky, Victoria to everyone else, months to coax her way into Tatya's life. Slowly but surely chipping away at the ice around her soul until at last... The romance was and passion had burned her clean of all lingering darkness in her soul, leaving her free and happy, for the first time in her life. Optimistic even. Then it all changed.

It was pure chance that had her her in the command centre as the call came in.

Contact sector four grid bravo coordinates 2145, 3453. Battleship plus cruiser escorts and fighters. Vicky's squadron was so badly outnumbered it was ludicrous but still they turned to engage, the transport they were escorting had civilians on board, priority dependants. Miraculously they bought enough time for the transport to get away, but they never stood a chance.

Tatya still shivers every time she recalls Vicky's emotionless voice, as she called out a brief mayday before she ejected from the burning wreck her fighter had become. Only one other pilot also called out a mayday before ejecting, from the others, only silence. The command centre was covered in oppressive silence, the only sound the lone voice of the duty controller desperately trying to raise Vicky and her squadron. No one said anything, did anything, it was tearing Tatya apart.
With an almost, in the silence, deafening click of her heals Tatya came to attention and loudly declared that she was prepared to sortie immediately with her squad to go retrieve the downed pilots. Her request was met with silence. The commanding officer looking at her as if she had sprouted two heads. Denied was all he said. Just like that they had decided to throw away the one thing that had any meaning in Tatya's life. Unacceptable.

And so she commandeered the equipment and supplies she felt she needed and left. This was a mere six hours ago. Not very long in the grand scheme of things, but to a desperate survivor stuck behind what was now presumed to be enemy lines... every second counted.

She shook herself out of her reverie and silently gathered herself. Now comes the hard part. No way would she let some bug eyed grey bastard kill her reason to live. She will save Vicky or die trying, there can be no other outcome...
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