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Posted 4/3/14
that's sad... but i will wait for the updates
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Posted 4/6/14 , edited 4/6/14
what a twist of plot! the story gets awesome!
how did you two bring up the marion to kill the parents? I read, can't find the hint and dang it just happen and i remeber yukii say you two don't discuss the story? seriously?
but man, snow snow! how will she prove her innocent?? the queen will kill her!!!
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Posted 4/6/14 , edited 4/6/14

rollingspaghetti wrote:

what a twist of plot! the story gets awesome!
how did you two bring up the marion to kill the parents? I read, can't find the hint and dang it just happen and i remeber yukii say you two don't discuss the story? seriously?
but man, snow snow! how will she prove her innocent?? the queen will kill her!!!


there was a hint in few earlier posts =)
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Posted 4/7/14


i didn't notice
i feel this part after shu and snow separates the plot thickens a lot. its very interesting to read on, and everytime i read i hop shu and snow can faster be together again.
but why is the way you and yuki write is like separating them further?
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Posted 4/9/14


haha thank you XD and well tsk tsk tsk it's just our way >.O
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Posted 4/21/14
oh my goodness i hadn't been online for only a week and the story ended!?

the ball part is awesome, though i pity the princess lmao the flow is a bit fast but interesting.

is the queen still alive or dead? i don't quite get that....

and no humminkuma why you let shu dies? so shock! how can he leaves snow just like that? didn' he fall for the snow? but do he really love her? sometime you write like he does, and sometime he don't....

but they have a son i think not bad....

tragic ending but its a good story i have enjoy reading a lot
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Posted 5/16/14
Thank you for your comment hun~ >.O

It's really up to how you interpret the story. Do share with us how you think of it though cause even between Tokyo and I, we seemed to interpret the ending differently. And cliff hanging is ♥

As of now, we'd started working on the sequel to "The Devil and The Princess" called "Crossing Past"

Hope you'll continue to gives us your comments and criticism (if any) ^^
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Posted 5/29/14
oh dear.. I was gone for a while and there's a continueation!!!!!!
I am no excited to read it as soon as possibble!!
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Posted 6/8/14

rollingspaghetti wrote:

oh dear.. I was gone for a while and there's a continueation!!!!!!
I am no excited to read it as soon as possibble!!


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Posted 6/8/14
i.mean excited... very excited!!, but i currently busy moving house no.time to read
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Posted 8/27/14
I would say I gives rating 7.5/10 for the story "Devil and the Princess"

Spent a whole morning reading it and it's awesome to keep my attention with them. I am amaze with the efforts you guys put iN!
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Posted 8/27/14
hola! Thank you x3
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Posted 9/1/14
There is a missing 2.5pts
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Posted 9/2/14
it's for improvement bro
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Posted 9/3/14
comment here right?

I'm just reading page 1 for today here's my remark (though you guys probably don't need one but since there's a page ..why not?)

Initially I like the Min Hui guy, the description was one hell of a story! (I mean wow, beginning is even better than Devil and The princess)! I am brought into the flow very fast! The Renee girl is cute what not. doesn't sound like the typical rich girl, if you know what I mean? maybe that's just how i see them

but what makes me confuse is Punk is the main guy? I thought Reaper (Min Hui?) is the main one since he's so cool and appeared initially like a main character! haha guess I'm wrong , conclusion comes too fast

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