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Posted 11/13/14
It was quite the interesting read (so far, not done yet). I'm honestly amazed how you could write such a story. I have a lot of trouble writing for myself. My whole story is set in my head, but it's hard to express in words. Anyway it's good and I will praise you for that;D
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Posted 11/14/14
same here! i always wonder how yuki and tokyo can write tgether with so much sync .... its like, how can their mind works in same way and have the story go so well... i've read up to the crossing past though and still waiting for new posts. You should too! really nice!

I got so bored i end up reading novel version too haha
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Posted 11/16/14
Up to date;D And i have to say..... Well.. theres not much.... I LIKE IT!!! I can't say anything i dislike about this story. I like almost all characters (escpecially Renesmee Royscott) ;D They have nice personalities;D
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Posted 1/26/15
I finally read up to the punk part. he died!? I thought he was the main guy ? the prince's reincanation or somthing? this is mindblowing! goto read again from first chapter
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Posted 2/12/15
I agree @babanalen I am shock punk died! i thougt he is shu from past? so if he is not does that means reaper is shu from past? but he like punk right? i don't think he fancy renee at all. never seen any development between them at all.

i enjoy how the story goes by parts and it is well organized and the twist plot but I don't expect the main guy to die also renee get stabbing i was shock and can't sleep until i finish up to the recent. why renee cannot remember she has a son in past? I feel disapointed with renee she cannot remember her past. i hope she wll remember them soon.

theres so many things I want to say but i cannot rememer all since the story is so exciting it keeps me reading on when i am free. i really hope this is good ending to the first story. I really love this story
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Posted 6/30/16
Oh my god sorry for my mistake i forgotten that comments are here there is story only
Thanks reminding hyukiko

I finally catch up to latest! The story is more complex now i like the plot idea so much!
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Posted 6/30/16



no problem lol I'd deleted your comment there. Thank you for reading (*´▽`人)

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