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Posted 1/31/08
Ah... all this poetry really makes me wanna try one! All you poetry writers out there tell me what you think!

Untitled I suck at names

From all my pain
My heart turned stone
Prepared for solace
An existance alone.

When our eyes met
I lost those thoughts
On speechless lips
My tongue was caught.

Blood started flowing
Through my broken heart
A few slow beats
You helped it start.

And now it glows
Beats from my chest
Revived to life
With love at best.

Admire you I must
To take a chance on me
Resuscitated a cold heart
And filled it with such glee.

I had closed the door upon my heart
And wouldn't let anyone in,
I had trusted and loved only to be hurt
But, that would never happen again

I had locked the door and tossed the key
As hard, and as far as I could,
Love would never enter there again,
My heart was closed for good

Then you came into my life
And made me change my mind,
Just when I thought that tiny key
was impossible to find

That's when you held out your hand
And proved to me I was wrong,
Inside your palm was the key to my heart ...
You had it all along

Memories I found reminiscing
In the moonlight silvery glow
Bygone dreams I remember
On the paths where lovers go.

Dreams never need to be lost
I could share mine with you
Step 'neath the stars tonight
As the moon comes into view.

As I remember dreams shared
Whilst harmonising the tune
I play your love songs again
'Neath the light of a silver moon.

Dreams within lovers embrace
In moonlight upon the shore
I capture what matters most
In continuous love forevermore



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Posted 2/7/08
It's lovely & sentimental... For me, to comment as a girl...
I haven't done any poems ever and if it's your first time, Its two thumbs up..
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Posted 2/7/08
Nicely done. ^_^
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Posted 2/9/08
Awww

"Blood started flowing
Through my broken heart
A few slow beats
You helped it start."

I loved it. Beautiful.
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