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This character is from a book I'm writing
Shiro Yukimori He usually wears all white with black highlites and a red scarf that compliemtns his snow-white hair. His personailty is pretty carefee. A guy who geniunely cares about his friends and enjoys living life the ay he wants.
His ability is his Nex Arma Omega weapon: Blood Raiser.
That's a pitch black as midnight scythe. It's a manifest weapon meaning it appears and vanishes at will. He also has twin pistol that fire a substanced called Ather (Energy pretty much) his skill is far beyond any human (For comparison he's stroger and faster than Ruby Rose)
He's able to switch between using his gun and his scythe seemlessly, he also have several instance where he was able to control his weapon remotly. During this point he has 2 oustanding skills.
Augment: Allows him to increase his speed from 5 to 10x his top speed at the cost of energy (Think Gundam Trans-Am)
Zansatsu Ima: His blade obtains the ability to erase/sever pieces of reality wheather it be an action, an obect or even a state of being. It's not limited to physical realities but thoughts and attrubites as well as things that cannot exist such as radical phenomina

His second from he's knows as Levithan, a Corpse Angel
In this form he never uses his guns and he wears a long white coat with two bealth on either side of his chest that cross over in the back, his read scarf is gone and his eyes have chaned from a mellow silver to blood red while his pupils are snake like in shape and the whites of his eyes begin to run black. His personaty takes a shift to calm calculationg and methodical. He will also not hesitate to kill anyone or anything that obstuctins him (Women, Children, Friends ect.)
He as able to manifest his scythe for much loger periods of time along as manifesting another scythe that is pury ivory white (He obatined that scythe from Kuro. Long Story) named Nex Arma False: Burning Sky. In this form he has 1 passive skill and 2 activated skills
Endless Non-existance: This ability is passive. He exists but doesn't simultaneously. He has No perception of Life or of death nor is he cabable of having life or death, he simply IS (For comparion: No version of MEoDP would be able to see any lines, origins or points of death on him)
Zansatsu Ima
Kaleidoscope: Previously Augment. This skill allows him to alter an opponets movement slighly (Miss an attack, Misstep) Only works triggers when he's gaze meet's his opponets

Sounds OP right? Here's their loss.draw batle list so you wont call hax

Shiro Lose: Zall'n, Ortheus, Trevor Kuroski, Wisp, Akane, En
Shiro Draw: Skylr Zerowing, Shiki Amanohokosaka, Kuro (Could be counted as a win but barely)

Leviathan Lose: En, Ortheus Corruptus, AIka Furakawa
Leviathan Draw: Wisp, Abaddon, En, God Fire Akane

What's yours?
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Muhahaha, now that you've posted all of Shiro Yukimori's secrets I can steal this information to conduct my own nefarious plan!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PiGIQrt1IaE
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Bogus XD ur first 1 bro
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RavedFury wrote:

Bogus XD ur first 1 bro


do you mean me or him? What what do you mean by bogus?


Varors wrote:

Muhahaha, now that you've posted all of Shiro Yukimori's secrets I can steal this information to conduct my own nefarious plan!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PiGIQrt1IaE


Oh by the way, MAKE YOUR OWN OC, don't just steal mine, yeah?
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Mishaki, a poor but very intelligent girl who tramples, uses, and blackmails men to work her way up to the top power comes in different forms son

i actually had to look back at the word doc to find her name... i couldn't remember it hahaha
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Sogno- wrote:

Mishaki, a poor but very intelligent girl who tramples, uses, and blackmails men to work her way up to the top power comes in different forms son

i actually had to look back at the word doc to find her name... i couldn't remember it hahaha


I agree that power does come in different form. But Shiro's life sucks (Whats his friends have the souls torn out) so he deserves to blow off some steam. Plus if he were to fight against Kumegawa, Shiro would win, period

But the way you put it makes Mishaki sound like a jerk
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SinLikeSnow wrote:

I agree that power does come in different form. But Shiro's life sucks (Whats his friends have the souls torn out) so he deserves to blow off some steam. Plus if he were to fight against Kumegawa, Shiro would win, period

But the way you put it makes Mishaki sound like a jerk


Kumegawa? Misogi Kumagawa, you mean? In which case, yeah. Kumagawa never wins in that series. Ever. That's his thing. He always loses.
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Alright, my OC is called Phersu-2. He wears a mask all the time that's better looking than slender man's head! His main power is being quotable in forum posts while maintaining his location within the Existence. No one knows his true origin of how he came to be either. (Some say he was born out of anime.) His secondary ability is being inspiring to others, which causes them to make replies to his quotable comments.
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Alright, my OC is called Phersu-2. He wears a mask all the time that's better looking than slender man's head! His main power is being quotable in forum posts while maintaining his location within the Existence. No one knows his true origin of how he came to be either. (Some say he was born out of anime.) His secondary ability is being inspiring to others, which causes them to make replies to his quotable comments.


Phersu the Original, which is so much better, is my OC.
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Varors wrote:

Alright, my OC is called Phersu-2. He wears a mask all the time that's better looking than slender man's head! His main power is being quotable in forum posts while maintaining his location within the Existence. No one knows his true origin of how he came to be either. (Some say he was born out of anime.) His secondary ability is being inspiring to others, which causes them to make replies to his quotable comments.


Phersu the Original, which is so much better, is my OC.


speaking of original while Leviatahna could kill any Shiki he'd have a draw akainst Akasha Shiki. Then they'd go and get coffee and Pizza
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speaking of original while Leviatahna could kill any Shiki he'd have a draw akainst Akasha Shiki. Then they'd go and get coffee and Pizza


I always found it annoying when people create fiction and then say something along the lines of....

'My character could beat your character's butt.'

But it's all moot, really, since we can never actually find out.
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SinLikeSnow wrote:

speaking of original while Leviatahna could kill any Shiki he'd have a draw akainst Akasha Shiki. Then they'd go and get coffee and Pizza


I always found it annoying when people create fiction and then say something along the lines of....

'My character could beat your character's butt.'

But it's all moot, really, since we can never actually find out.


I made it a point for Him to have an ability that could beat Shiki and Kumegawa cause I was sick of "Kumegawa acan do anything" well not anymore.
Well there's that I had to make him stupidly overpowered because of How Ortheus Corruptus would be. I'm about 150pages into writing and I now have someone to illustrate it manga style
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SinLikeSnow wrote:

I made it a point for Him to have an ability that could beat Shiki and Kumegawa cause I was sick of "Kumegawa acan do anything" well not anymore.
Well there's that I had to make him stupidly overpowered because of How Ortheus Corruptus would be. I'm about 150pages into writing and I now have someone to illustrate it manga style


Overpowered characters aren't necessarily good characters. Also, it is Kumagawa. Kuma like bear.
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SinLikeSnow wrote:

I made it a point for Him to have an ability that could beat Shiki and Kumegawa cause I was sick of "Kumegawa acan do anything" well not anymore.
Well there's that I had to make him stupidly overpowered because of How Ortheus Corruptus would be. I'm about 150pages into writing and I now have someone to illustrate it manga style


Overpowered characters aren't necessarily good characters. Also, it is Kumagawa. Kuma like bear.


Not really overpowered. he does get hit alot.
Only by those who have the power to do so, namely Nex Arma users
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I'm interested as to how that might turn out now.
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