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Posted 1/31/08


All Starts With Friendship
When We Were Young
We Look At Us
And We Look Our Love

With don't know What To Do?
We Know This Is The Love
That We Wanted
Our Love Was Young
I Can't Forget Ur Face
U Were In Ur Car
When I Was Cooking 2 Both

Yesterday My Tears
Couldn't Be Hidden
I Throw Them Out...And I Saw 'Em

At Least I Always Tell U I Love U
When U're Near Of Me
I Regret I Can't Resist
That Pictures In My Head
That Broke In My Heart

That Wasn't My Mistake
I Can't Overcome
Why Wasn't Me!?!?...Why?

U're Clothes Reminds me Of U
Ur Things Have Ur Smell
Now I Got The Tv On...
'Cuz The Radio Is Playing
Songs That Reminds Me Of U

I Let U Drive Right By
I Didn't Realize I Wanted U 'Til U Were Born
I Wasted 2 Much Time
I Learnt That Love Keeps Movin' On
...But U're Already Gone

At Least I Won't Forget Ur Face
If I'm Sitting Down...U're There
If I'm Eating...U're There
If I'm Sleeping...U're There
...Thank U very Much I Love U...
Just Give Me Time To Understand
What Happened!!...And I'm Gonna Be Alright
I Promise!!!...It's What U Would Have Wanted

*---The End---*
I Hope U Really Like It^____^
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Posted 1/31/08

david_k_belanova wrote:



All Starts With Friendship
When We Were Young
We Look At Us
And We Look Our Love

With don't know What To Do?
We Know This Is The Love
That We Wanted
Our Love Was Young
I Can't Forget Ur Face
U Were In Ur Car
When I Was Cooking 2 Both

Yesterday My Tears
Couldn't Be Hidden
I Throw Them Out...And I Saw 'Em

At Least I Always Tell U I Love U
When U're Near Of Me
I Regret I Can't Resist
That Pictures In My Head
That Broke In My Heart

That Wasn't My Mistake
I Can't Overcome
Why Wasn't Me!?!?...Why?

U're Clothes Reminds me Of U
Ur Things Have Ur Smell
Now I Got The Tv On...
'Cuz The Radio Is Playing
Songs That Reminds Me Of U

I Let U Drive Right By
I Didn't Realize I Wanted U 'Til U Were Born
I Wasted 2 Much Time
I Learnt That Love Keeps Movin' On
...But U're Already Gone

At Least I Won't Forget Ur Face[/gr
Posted 1/31/08
awesome poem great job!! X3
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The message never came out. SORRY DAVID!!! I swear, i thought it did...well anywho, responding back to it, what i meant to say was that your poem is great!! superb!!! and you did a really great job on it!!! I is proud of you bro!!!! It really has alot of meaning and it sucks you in as to what the character's emotions are. just....great!!! ^____^ AGAIN, GREAT JOB DAVID!!!!
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david_k_belanova wrote:



All Starts With Friendship
When We Were Young
We Look At Us
And We Look Our Love

With don't know What To Do?
We Know This Is The Love
That We Wanted
Our Love Was Young
I Can't Forget Ur Face
U Were In Ur Car
When I Was Cooking 2 Both

Yesterday My Tears
Couldn't Be Hidden
I Throw Them Out...And I Saw 'Em

At Least I Always Tell U I Love U
When U're Near Of Me
I Regret I Can't Resist
That Pictures In My Head
That Broke In My Heart

That Wasn't My Mistake
I Can't Overcome
Why Wasn't Me!?!?...Why?

U're Clothes Reminds me Of U
Ur Things Have Ur Smell
Now I Got The Tv On...
'Cuz The Radio Is Playing
Songs That Reminds Me Of U

I Let U Drive Right By
I Didn't Realize I Wanted U 'Til U Were Born
I Wasted 2 Much Time
I Learnt That Love Keeps Movin' On
...But U're Already Gone

At Least I Won't Forget Ur Face
If I'm Sitting Down...U're There
If I'm Eating...U're There
If I'm Sleeping...U're There
...Thank U very Much I Love U...
Just Give Me Time To Understand
What Happened!!...And I'm Gonna Be Alright
I Promise!!!...It's What U Would Have Wanted

*---The End---*
I Hope U Really Like It^____^


fantastic! that is what I have to say to this, here you really get to feel the charcters fellings so you feel it is yourself who is this person and you get a pic in your head of what happned whitout any words! so keep on that good work

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Posted 2/4/08
so cute^^ crying agin
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Posted 2/6/08
waw!! awsome dude!! i this poem it so much!! ><
Posted 2/11/08
Oh My God...I LOVE THIS POEM...brings me tears...reading it, is warming my heart...and makes me feel that love sure is the most beautiful emotion that anyone can feel...
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